Knowing you Mr.E I can tell than next chapter is going to be heavy on the action

I would have personally called this chapter "How to not suck at plot logic", but I suppose "Misunderstandings" works as well. :)

As for the actual content of the chapter, I noticed several portions of this chapter that appeared to be a progression of one of the dialogues we had during one of our previous writers meetings. This is very encouraging.

I have one criticism however, and it is Jill's reaction to her hair being on fire. In your example you state that upon noticing her hair was on fire, she would come to the correct conclusion that her boyfriend was shrunken in her hair.

In my opinion a more realistic reaction for Jill would be her panicking followed by the water being poured onto her hair. After all when presented with a sudden danger the normal human reaction is to either run away from it (which given her circumstances was impossible), or fight it (dousing the fire in water).

Forgive me if I am wrong, but I believe that the normal human reaction to having ones head on fire is not to examine the situation from a logical position.

In short, Tom would be dead; either by being drowned by water or crushed when Jill's hand instinctively slaps down onto the fire.

Anyways, It was a good chapter, and very informative. I hope you continue with this, perhaps even add a crash course in grammar for those less able to effectively use it (like me).

Personally I would have organized this chapter differentely, but that is besides the point.

Anyways, I agree with some of the arguements you present here. except for one, and that is on the subject of Bios.

I personally feel that if a Bio chapter is a bonus chapter, and the author doesn't rely on the information presented in the bio than it is ok.

Also, creating a character bio in a story outline to use as reference is a great stratagy for creating a character.

Other than that one detail the rest of the chapter was extremely informative, and you should contact Asukafan about getting this moved to the writers tools section.

Probably the most realistic giantess story ever written.

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Fucking square cube law >:(

I love your stories Dollsize because somehow you keep finding ways to make a life of torture, slavery, and humiliation appealing

In short, I envy the tinies in your stories.

Btw this story reminds me of this picture I came across on the booru recently.

http://www.giantessbooru.com/post/view/165929?search=etz

I just started reading this, and I'd like to let you know that the first chapter is pretty sold.

Your dialogue is probably your biggest strength. The conversations flow well, and fit the scene perfectly. Its also well thought out as there were clearly two distinct personalities speaking, instead of the same voice being called different people like a lot of stories.

Over all Excellent work Antboy94, your a good writer and I look foward to reading more of this when I can.

Just started reading and already I am impressed by the format of this story.

Spelling could use a bit of a touch-up but other than that good job.

I may have to return and finish the rest of this story when I have time.

Short and Sweet. I enjoyed how the character interaction was also balanced with the main characters thoughts. 

Good Job.

Kids these days and their fancy size changin and whatnot.

Good show my friend.

I like the use of technology. An app that amplifies tiny voices lol, thats just plain clever.

I must give you the highest praise for showing how a person would deal with being shrunk on a societal level. I found the talk on The DSBS, and the registration to be genuinely interesting.