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Toy for the holiday by Yougts Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary:

When shrinking is finally possible, you volunteer to be your sisters toy for the holiday


Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32573 Read Count: 408750
[Report This] Published: December 09 2012 Updated: December 27 2016
Reviewer: tomthom Signed
Date: January 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

it's wondrous. I love the teasing.  my one critique though is that you are spendign an awful lot of time with her mouth, and it gets boring after a bit. although the 9th chapter... hoo. wow. nice one.

please continue though, you really do have a gift and your english writings skills are improving by leaps and bounds.

Reviewer: tomthom Signed
Date: July 01 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

I hope you're still working on this. it's one of my favorites. you have the pacing just right.

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