Reviewer: kovukun Signed
Date: February 12 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Morning
Yaaaay! So glad to see that you have returned to this story! I have been checking back very devotingly every single day since your last post came out. As most already say, this is one of the best stories I've ever read, and am DEEPLy anxious to see it continue.. to see what wonderful scenarios will befall our lucky little man!
I can understand how life can get hectic, and none of us want you to write when your heart isn't into it. There's no fun in it for anyone, especailly you! So glad you took your time, and decided to come back when YOU were ready for it!
As for a suggeston.. well, I think I mentioned it before.. but one scene I've REALLY been looking forward to.. is him being tied to her toothbrush.. and her just going wild with him in her mouth! Ever since she mentioned that.. I've been dying to see you. with your amazing writing tallent.. give her the fun role of doing that to him. I'm sure you'll make that one hell of an experience. (Pardon my french) Oh.. brushing her teeth.. her tongue, gums, inner cheeck, under her tongue, the roof of her mouth... Oooh.. perahps even tying him on the other end of the toothbrush.. and sloowly sliding the smooth end.. down her throat, and having her swallow with her brother actually IN her throat.. feeling it tightly clamp around him, pulling at him.. the only thing saving him is the string tied around his body...
Hehehehe... just a few thoughts.. XD I loooove this story.. and am SUPER happy to see you back! Just as I am sure everyone else is! Can't wait to see where yo go with this next, and again, MASSIVE congradulations on the story so far!! <3 =^o^=