Randall and Ashley are complete opposites but are the perfect match for each other.
This story is a little different but still a nice change of pace. Please review
Great chapter! I'm really loving the sexy innuendo between Randall and Ashley! And I think Randall is right about her, she is kind of agressive when it comes to playfully teasing Randall...This is my favorite of your stories and I hope you update again soon!
Glad for the update, I used to love this story! Great chapter into the Alexander character, hes quite the little boss isnt he?
After surviving his near death experience, Franky finds himself in the care of new folks. However are all of them in it to help him? Will Maddison or Liza find out he's still alive?
Please tell me one of them has a weapon!
I find Maddisons character so pathetic and tragic in many ways... Its like, she's a freaking genius, is well off, pretty, and she STILL finds a way to be a nightmarish boogeyman and scare everyone away. It's like I just wanna go into the story, smack her and say: "be normal damn you!"
I'd be lying if I said I didn't feel a bit shafted by that cliffhanger ending...I really think Franky deserves to be happy after all he's been through. But overall this was a great series, and I really enjoyed the ending and seeing Maddison get her comeuppance!
A prequel with Maddison would be cool although I can already foresee it being alot darker than these stories since we all know how all her previous victims ended up. It would be interesting though, I might not read it though if it's too much for me.
I actually rather have a sequel to this where we get to see more of Franky living life as a tiny with his new family. But thats just me. Anyway, whatever you decide to write I think you'll do it well! Good luck and I hope to see more from you!
Sweet! I'm glad for the update, and it looks like Maddison is finally done in for good! But now how are they supposed to re-grow Franky? Is he gonna be stuck the size of a hamster for the rest of his life?
Only one way to find out! But, as for more practical purposes if I ever want to resume writing the series it'll give me a definite loose end to tie up.
Ugh, this was the stupidest thing Louise could have done... The only thing that could happen here is she get's stomped, what else could she do?
How's this even a question? Of course Louise should go back and get help! What can a tiny do by herself? Jeez, don't tell me this is gonna turn into a horror movie where everyone except the killer are morons! The fact that Louise found them is great, she took advantage of the fact that she was tiny to check under the door. But there's no way she should go in alone...
Author's Response:
This is true, but Louise is very driven to prove a point right now and can be very short-sighted. Also who knows where Jenna went to look for her, and it might take too long for her to reach Elise and Liza. Plus she doesn't know how much danger Franky is in. Does she risk her own safety and go in solo or does she risk Franky's safety by taking the time to go get help?
To say I'm happy for an update to this is an understatement! This was one of my favs from way back when! Please continue this story! I feel like we are so close to a proper ending!
If I had to guestimate perhaps we're probably around the 80% point. Glad I could make you happy with continuing.
Im glad that things worked out between Franky and Loiuse and Jenna, Im not sure why, but I have a feeling that Elise (As kind as she is) may be harder to fully convince.
This is getting pretty awesome, man I love this story!
Really like Elise, and I feel that if I was Franky, she would be the only thing keeping me from just killing myself.
WOW! Maddison is fucking insane! And Franky is being broken down, bit by bit by her! I'm not so sure that Elise and the others should be getting involved without some outside help. Now I know this is a story, and the cops are generally useless in stories.
But if I was Elise I would AT least call the cops on Maddison with some BS story...We've all heard about people getting swatted and the cops busting in full-force and asking question later. NOW would be one of the times that being trigger-happy would help the situation immensely!
Great chapter by the way! I really feel for poor Franky, what Maddison said about him being betrayed before isn't exactly a lie either! None of this would have happened in the first place had Liza kept her end of the bargain like a decent person in the first chapter!
Worry not, Elise and the gang are getting there gameplan together and I'd like to think normally they don't want legal officials getting involved because at that point after matters are resolved they'd be powerless at what the government would want to do with Franky.
The destruction of a civilization at the hands of a goddess. A sci-fi fantasy tale.
Nice work on the latest chapter, I like the fact that she actually has some tiny people she considers friends to an extent, and then turns around an massacres a whole lot of them just because. I think she is a good character and it seems that she has all this power and uses it on a whim but also wants to have friends that love her. Cant wait to see where you take this.
PS: Is she like a war with another god or something?
You could say she is at war with... something. That I will of course releval as the story progresses. Also, just to be clear (since apparently I've not pointed it out clearly enoug), she can change sizes at will (sort of, it's more or less the central idea of this story). On the ship, when she talks with the commnader and walks around, she is normal sized like all others and the people she captured have been shrunken.
Well I love this story man, I loved it even when it was full-blown violent, and I tend to steer clear of that stuff...Though it's kinda growing on me.
Keep writting dude, this is definitely one of my favs at the moment.
I'm glad you like it so much. :)
Love Gentle Aria, however messed up she may still be. I still want her to get her ass kicked, she's an evil bitch, so I am kinda satisfided that she's a little threatened by Mae's words. But I get the feeling that Mae isn't a knight in shining armor either (and what a cunt for leaving Mase behind like that), so at least I welcome the bit of gentleness she displayed here. It's weird though, wasn't Aria supposed to be Omniscient? Can't she just read Mase's mind and get the information she wants that way? Ahh, whatever man I dont sweat the details.
Man, you're like the only person commenting! Hehe.
Anyway, no, Aria is not omniscient. The little part where she says she is a few chapters ago is merely a sarcastic remark. She can't read minds. There is sort of a magic/technology system here, although not fully revealed so far, but Aria is no true god, just somebody with incredible powers.
Also, the way I got this planned out, I think you will like it, but it will surprise you. This story isn't really a back and white story, good vs evil, but lies more in the 'grey area', even though so far it's not really apparent. But I've only written about 35k words so far and I've got lots and lots planned, I only need the motivation :).
OOOHHH SNNNAAPP!! Mae didn't seem to be acting like the gentle giantess she pretended to be, and that ending!? Anyway, Im little dissapointed that Mae's true self doesn't seem to be gentle, but thats just me, I love gentle.
Mae's special, you'll see. And gentle parts are coming... I think. At least I'm bored with writing mindless repetitive violence, but then again, gentleness in my book might be something very violent for some one else. Anyway, time to read the new Silver Giantess chapters! :D
Loved every bit of this story and I wish you luck on whatever you have planned next.
Thanks! Hopefully I've learned enough by writing Broken Sky to make my next story better written. I still feel like the prose is way too simple and I've made too many rookie mistakes.
I really dont know where your going with this story but I gotta say I love the mysteries behind Aria and her powers..And the fact that the story reveals them in tidbits over time. Aria is a great character and I love learning about her backstory even at the expense of the sexy stuff! This is a great and well thought-out story, definitely on of my favorites.
I'm glad you like the story part too. :)
This is great, although im not sure why the second chapter needed to be in bold. But good start, and great descriptions I hope you finish this.
It was not my intention to post it in bold, but this site's text editor just wouldn't let me unbold it. I'll try to fix it as soon as I can, but this must be a bug or something, since I'm writing my stories on google drive, and then just copy paste, the transfer must be causing something weird.
Nice work on the latest chapter, I do like this story, although Im more into the gentle stuff. I like the way she's teasing them with her piss, and I like the fact that you added some backstory to this, not many people care to flesh their stories out like this. Keep it up, I'll be reading!
Thank you for your review. I do find that adding a story makes inclined to write more, keeps you from constantly repeating the same things over and over. I wish I could write a more gentle, more personal story, but I seem to have passed that threshold a long time ago.
