Hey, I've been lurking on the site for a while but I registered just to give you a review! Great story so far. I love stories that attempt to make real characters and storys instead of cheap one- shot porn. Please keep it up!

On the positive side, I love the detail you give about the giants, the way their footsteps shake the ground and their voices boom. That detail really drives home how tiny Sophie is and makes the story fun to read.

My one criticism is the lack of emotion in the charcters. Normally this wouldn't be much of a problem but there is one scene in your story that demanded more emotion. When Sophie told Stella she ate her parents everyones reaction was WAAAY too mild.

That was a HUGE BOMB to drop on everyone. Stellas reaction to that news could have made its own chapter. If shes half as nice as you make her seem she should have been in tears for the rest of the day over that. Yet why was her first reaction to ask why Sophie was so small? That should have dropped to question number ten before the HORROR she should be feeling over that news. Shouldn't Stella have been shocked before the tears would come? Shouldn't she have disbelieved it, at least inquired how it could have happend?  The way Stella seemed to get sick and ran out of the room was a nice touch but she got over it way too quickly. How can Stella even look Sophie in the eyes knowing she ATE THE GIRLS PARENTS.

Also why didn't the siblings say anything? should'nt they have been horrified too? Crying and apologizing on their sisters behalf? and why wouldn't they try to confort their sister in her time of sorrow. Instead they kept talking like nothing happened. That was kind of weird.

Finally Sophie herself was way too blase about that. I get that it happened a long time ago and shes forgiven Stella but 1. why would she tell a little girl something that horrible out of the blue, even if they asked, thats kind of cruel and 2. its one thing to have forgiven Stella, its anouther to be comfortable around her. Shouldnt Sophie shudder every time she looks at Stellas tummy, knowing her parents died in there. Should'nt she take a step back eveytime she sees Stella smile, knowing she could fit in that mouth? and 3. Did she really compare the death of her parents to accidentally eating a snail? thats going a bit too far.

In fact Sophie is too at ease around these giant kids. Even though she has "known" them their whole lives I would think it would be kind of scary to be the center of their attention like that.

*whew that was a lot of typing* Anyway thats my 2 cents. Don't take this personally, its just suggestions for improvement. Im rooting for your story.

If you think i'm right you don't have to rewrite your first chapter. Just make chapter number 2 a bit more somber. Maybe make Stella seem a bit depressed, ashamed to meet Sophis eyes. Maybe make her break out crying when questioned. That would be a good time for everyone to express their feelings and a good time to explain exactly what happened to the parents (get a little vore action in there).

Good luck and I hope you keep writting! 

Anouther interesting story concept, but I wonder if you are starting too many stories too quickly. Are you going to be able to finish them all? I'm still waiting for the next chapter of Sophies Survival.

So I love the premise of the story, even if it doesn't make much sense logically (What keeps the big countries from conquering the small ones?). My critique is, don't forget your sstories strengths. While your doing a good job on the love story, giantess love stories are a dime a dozen on this site. What makes yours interesting is the setting. I want to know more about the world and how people of widely different sizes get along. For example, in the begginning of the story, the girl was sitting on a bench. But why was there a giant sized bench in a small city? Was it in the middle of the city or in some kind of giants section? And if it was a giants section of the city, why was that boy walking by? Also, how did she pay for that car she stepped on? Would small cars cost less?

These are the kind of details I want to know. Sometimes I find the little blubs you beging the chapter with, like the explination about crime, to be more interesting than the actual story. The more details you can provide about the setting the better! 

you know, I was almost hoping nick was going to die there. Not because i dislike him but because i feel it would have been ironic if this god-like superpowerd guys ends up dying in a young girls stomach next to a boloney sandwich. Also Nicks powers are becoming a bit to deus ex machina. I mean his powers were drained yet he still managed to live. whats up with that?

Wow. You know I was really enjoying this story until this last chapter. Totally ruined everything. And not just because you killed all the main characters. Not just because you spent two chapters building the personalities of the kids only to have them die in a single paragraph without achomplishing anything. All of that could be forgivable under the justification that stuff happens in war. However, whats unforgivable is that plot twist that happened at the end. it came right the F*** out of nowhere and rendered your entire story pointless. You might as well delete the entire story and replace it with the words F*** YOU READERS!

I have to say, your story has become my most anticipated on this site! I like how your trying to make your characters more complex than the genaric cruel or gentle archetypes.

So far we have one bullied girl with low self esteem who took an oppurtunity to bully someone weaker than herself and one girl whose mentally broken from killing her brother and copes by beliving betas arn't people. I feel like Claire is going to become a psycologist before this is over.

I kind of hope that the third girl, Marion, really is just evil, selfish and racist/sizist. While i appreciate your attempts to make the girls complex, i feel like this is becoming a crime where noone is truely guilty. You can't say that all bullys are really just misundertood people with problems, some really are just evil.

Finally, i hope after this last punishment section you start to add something you story really needs: exposition. I want to know more about the society they live in. What is its history? Where did these different sizes come from? How do they live together, especially in mixed households like Claire and Stephanies? We need some answers!

But anyway, this story is great and I hope you keep up the good work. 

So I don't usually take part in debates in review form, but since there have been so many people commenting on the justice system of this world I want to get one final word in. This is going to get a bit more philosophical than a fictional GTS story probably warrants but I want to make this point clear. Who knows maybe this will give the author some ideas :)

When I asked “What sets omegas apart from Marion” Some people responded that they only get physical against Alphas who broke the law and that they have a system that they are held accountable too. I get that, but it is besides my point. My point is about power and authority.

If you go out and commit a crime and get arrested by a cop, who gives that cop the authority to arrest you? Answer: the people. Cops answer to the police chief who answers to the mayor who answers to voters. The laws they enforce are likewise ultimately created by the people. That is where law enforcement is supposed to get its power: That Is Justice.

But where do Omega's get their authority from in this story? I doubt they answer to the alphas government and I doubt the laws they enforce were created by alphas. Can Alphas vote out the director of the Omegas? I doubt it. That is not justice.

It is beside the point that Omegas are likely on the side of right and their actions are stopping horrific violence against betas. My point is Omegas used their size to force their world view on Alphas. They decreed new laws that alphas had no say about and killed anyone who opposed them. They are tyrants whose authority comes from nothing but the use of force and violence: power that comes with their size. Their good intentions are irrelevant. Their “system” is meaningless because it is forced on an unwilling populace who have no say in its operations.

In the end this is the same thing Marion (and alphas in general) did to betas. She thought she was superior because of her size. She used her power to force her worldview on them. The fact that Marion did it for pleasure and Omegas do not is also irrelevant. They both wield power in the same way for basically the same reason: because they feel their size entitles them to tell smaller people how to behave and they punish any who says otherwise. That’s why I feel Omegas are hypocrites.

I'm not sure how i feel about this "Cosmic force" and the "fire" you keep mentioning. I mean Omegas are already powerful due to their size, was it really neccisary to give them super powers too? And making a random farm girl suddenly gain god-like powers? I knew Omegas were artificially created, but i thought Kayla was a scientist who did it through technology. The first thing I thought when i saw the words "cosmic force" was "What is she a jedi"?

Anyway, do all Omegas hate alphas? It seems like they do what they do as much out of hatred for alphas as love for beta's. I feel like this story is presenting a really skewed view of this world your creating. We don't get a chance to see positive Omega- Alpha or Alpha-beta relationships so everyone comes off as being a racist/sizeist prick...except for betas who come off as angelic victims who just want to be loved. I feel like there needs to be some balance in the world view your presenting.

Just want to say that this concept is awesome. This is like the Freshman by Jacksmith only with a giant protaganist instead of a small one. I like how your trying to keep the girl realistic instead of a cruel or gentle stereotype.

I can't wait to see some more interaction between her and her tiny peers. i can only imagine most people arn't taking the change as well as her macrophile boyfriend. Will the other students and even teacher be scared of the few giants in their midst? And how will such a self concious person take being feared? Will she become a bully when she sees the tiny formor queen bee? I can't wait to find out.

Yay! Finally an update. It had been so long I was thinking of Pming you to make saure you hadn't died!

Your so great at both the discriptions of the giants from the tiny's point of view and your exploration into how a family would feel to be in the care of the youngest, and formerly smallest member.

Things I'm looking forward to, The akward first day Gina gets to "babysit" And Brittneys shrinking. Can't wait!