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Summary:

Pod, now living with Natasha, has his life turned upside down when Natasha's less than understanding friend stays with them for a few days. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Gentle, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9624 Read Count: 19237
[Report This] Published: November 19 2017 Updated: November 21 2017
Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The story is certainly off to a great start again. I had kind of been wondering what would happen when pod was finally introduced to other humans. Given the history of his kind with them. The fact that he's developed such an intensely strong bond with Natasha makes it all the more heartbreaking to see his perceptions of humans faltering. But after an encounter like that, who could blame him? I find myself wondering, how could humans be so blind to the plight of other creatures. That they don't realize that they share a common intelligence. Or that Pod's kind could be more than just pests if they were but given the chance. 

 

Going to keep reading on. Just wanted to stop and share some of my thoughts. And to thank you again for writing this wonderful story. 

Imprisoned by NyxAndNox Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

An imprisoned giantess is the execution method of choice in this jail


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Fantasy, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5045 Read Count: 12945
[Report This] Published: January 07 2018 Updated: January 30 2018
Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Oh wow, I was already pretty intriqued by the first chapter. Given how unique the setting of the story was. But things definitely took some unexpected turns in this chapter. Part of me feels bad for the guard. But at the same time, what happened to her is kind of poetic justice in a way. Because she knew from experience how terrible it would be for the inmates to meet thier end at the hands of the giantess, and yet she continued to lead them to that fate. Never would have expected Teressa could be reasoned with though. Even if only alittle bit. It's kind of a nice twist. And makes me want to know alot more about her. Like how she came to be imprisoned. And why she takes such pleasure in using her body to subdue those smaller than her. :)

Help Wanted by KennyP Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Jay finds an escaped tiny looking for help in his backyard. Help isn’t exactly what she is going to get.
Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Giant, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8069 Read Count: 38114
[Report This] Published: July 07 2018 Updated: February 08 2019
Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 01 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Jay

Can only hope that there is more of this story to come. As it left off on one heck of a cliff hanger. But the three chapters that I read were pretty amazing. The attention to detail of both the physical and emotional sides of things made it very easy to envision the events unfolding through Michelle's eyes. 

For whatever reason it's rare that you see sizeplay stories with shrunken women. And rarer still where there is both a male and female protagonist. So that was a heck of a pleasant suprise. Even if my heart did ache for poor Michelle and everything that she went through. There can be no denying that I found the whole thing sexy as hell too. :) 

Summary:

Rebecca is 4 inches tall... and very attracted to her teacher.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Breasts, Insertion, Mouth Play, Lesbians, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2641 Read Count: 9216
[Report This] Published: September 29 2018 Updated: September 29 2018
Reviewer: Theodous Signed
Date: March 31 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Take Note

Oh wow, this was quite the pleasant surprise. You don't see many female on female romances on this website. Or any of the other giantess hubs for that matter. Which is a shame, because I feel that such unions hold just as much beauty as any other, if not more so. Especially in a scenario like this one where both parties needs compliment the other so well. Of course there are those who would say that Miss Murphy's actions were terrible and that she took advantage of Rebecca. Though to me it felt as if she was guaging Rebecca throughout their play. And pushing her to express her true feelings before making the next move. :) 

The whole thing was really well written. Would absolutely love to see a sequel to this in which Miss Murphy offers to let Rebecca come to her place for some after class tutoring. To make up for her lack of focus in class. :) 

Their Goddass by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Aaron wants to try something new with Debby, but the night doesn't go as he planned.


Categories: Entrapment, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Butt, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15456 Read Count: 17214
[Report This] Published: January 08 2019 Updated: March 23 2019
Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is hands down, one of the best stories I've ever read on this website. The attention to detail that was taken in setting the stage gripped me right away. As you were given a glimpse into life through Aaron's eyes before the later events transpired. He was pretty much a normal guy, living a normal life. Trying to piece together just how he felt about this insane world of giantism and sizeplay that he had stumbled upon. And had absolutely no idea that two of the closest people two him had pretty much already decieded his fate. It made for a powerful impact that only grew more and more as the story developed.

I knew that something was very wrong with the situation, just by the way Debbie's friends were behaving. But I was shocked right along with Aaron when it was revealed how cold and uncaring they were towards him. While helping to pleasure his girlfriend. Something that should have been a magical experience. Already turned nightmare as he was treated with all the care of a toy. But then of course that paled to what came next. The kissing scene was absolutely incredible. And somethign I wish was done more in giantess writing. And well, as a lover of all things rump and insertion related. The ending was simply amazing. Poor Aaron got put the wringer like none other. But that's of course what made the story so sexy. :) 

Summary:

In which a sensitive young boy is infatuated with a giant girl he admires from afar, and a troubled young girl yearns for a place where she can belong.

This is an attempt at something character-driven. The two chapters are two different points of view and can be read in either order.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Gentle, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10451 Read Count: 8128
[Report This] Published: January 19 2019 Updated: January 19 2019
Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Kostas

Oh my goodness, this was a rather powerful read. I can see what you mean about it being possible to read the chapters in either order. Though personally, I'm kind of glad that I read Kostas's chapter first. Because it really set the stage for what was to come. From his perspective it was easy to imagine the world the world as we see it now. With humanit as the dominant species. And the aliens, however large, to be little more than rare inhabitants or guests. The fact that he was something of an outcast among his peers is something that I can certainly identify with. And was rather endearing as you were given a spectacular glimpse into his thoughts. I found myself at once excited and terribly sad for him. Hoping that even some small measure of his fantasies would prove true.

 

On the other hand, Lennu's chapter illustrated how very limited his perspective was of the world they lived in. And gave rise to a great many mysteries and questions. As it's hinted at that the human town is little more than a walled off colony on this entirely different planet. Leading one to wonder, how the humans got there. And how they are viewed by the wider population of alien species. The fact that for all her incredible size, Lennu was still but a tiny spec in the cosmos, was an incredible but haunting surprise. 

The whole thing was woven writen in such a way that it felt very poetic, and made for a very wholesome read. Thank you so much for sharing this!

Summary:

Imagine your life cut abruptly short by being made into a sex toy. Follow Paul and his shockingly intimate experience with women he thought he knew.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26755 Read Count: 356216
[Report This] Published: February 03 2019 Updated: April 17 2022
Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 12 2021 Title: Chapter 1: A New Beginning

Had wanted to leave feedback on some of the earlier chapters. But I got so engrossed in reading the story that I could not stop! ^.^ To be shrunken down and used as a toy like this would have been too much for most people to bare in itself. But to then learn that you've been being filmed for the pleasure of others. Is simply unreal! Definitely one of the more unique twists that I've seen in sizeplay fiction. And a very powerful element to the story. I love it! I also love that the two women are able to control his size. And have no qualms with making him extremely small. Can't wait to see more of the story. 

Am curious if this fellow will wind up being hooked into some kind of body piercing or some such thing. And paraded around for the viewers to see. :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks! And I'm glad you liked it. But, to be honest, I am torn on how public the streamers want to make their activities. I think, in this world, size stuff is either taboo or illegal, but I haven't established that yet.

Rituals by minifriend Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

A couple explores their new mundane after mutually agreeing to undertake a Diminishing, whereby one's height is reduced to around one foot. Primarily set weeks after his new size sets in, the couple works to maintain the rhythms of a happy, healthy relationship in the wake of an enormous, if welcome, change.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32763 Read Count: 51336
[Report This] Published: February 09 2019 Updated: June 12 2020
Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Awakening

Have been wanting to sit down and read this story for the longest time. And from what I have seen in this first chapter, it was well worth the wait. The level of detail and the atmosphere is absolutely incredible. And was on a level that I rarely ever see in this wonderful sizeplay community of ours. Even better still was the dynamic between the two characters. There is genuine love and kindness on both sides. And yet they both seem to relish in their newfound roles. I'm really excited to read more! :) 

Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Parting

  Was so happy to see that you were able to sneak in a bit more foot play in this chapter. The way that you describe Ness's various scents, and how the little guy takes them in is really nice. Though in this case it was the whole act of him fetching her shoes that really kind of stole the show. 

  It's easy to forget in all our fantasizing. Just how overwhelming simple tasks would become at at tiny size. And how much that effort would mean to both parties. I think you did a wonderful job of capturing the emotional side of the act. And their parting for the day. It really warms my heart to see the bits in which Ness muses over how much her lovers dedication means to her. And I think it's safe to say that it's that part of her, which serves to fuel the little guys desire to worship her. This really is like the perfect dynamic. ^.^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all of your kind words! I'm so sorry for taking so long to check in on these reviews, but I'm so grateful for the time you took to read and respond to the story! I'm eager to return to writing size fic, and hope that down the road you're able to continue enjoying my stories. Thank you so much again and stay well! :)

Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Hungering

Yet another wonderful chapter. I really like the way that you are slowly revealing tidbits of the events that lead to the "Diminishing" And how very much it means to Ness that her lover trusts her so completely. This is the kind of bond that most macrophiles dream of their entire lives. 

Seems that you were already way ahead of my musings from a few chapters back. As this one featured Ness getting her backside worshipped a little. Which was quite a pleasant surprise. Though honestly, everything about their interactions has been pretty wonderful so far. Such a great story! 

Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Cleansing

Oh my goodness, this chapter was even more amazing than the first. Have always had a serious soft spot for bath and shower scenes in sizeplay settings. And this was most definitely one of the most nicely written ones I've ever read. It had an incredible warmth and thoughtfulness to it. That make it easy to envision the whole thing unfolding before my eyes. 

Was so happy to see some subtle tie ins their past life. And the part reinforcing that the little guy really does have a thing for her feet. As if the scene in the first chapter was not proof enough. ^.^ Am going to keep my fingers cross for more play along those lines in the chapter to come. As well as more rump play. Since this chapter was a serious tease in that department. :)

Flying With Dad by 5952 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: A young woman smuggles her father onto a plane.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Incest, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8358 Read Count: 67708
[Report This] Published: May 09 2019 Updated: May 13 2019
Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Making Plans

This story was full of pleasant surprises. I've always loved the idea of little ones being stowed away within someone. But what really brought this story to life was the loving, and largely innocent relationship between the two characters at the start. The fact that neither wanted to take advantage or mistreat the other. Only served to make what was to come all the more incredible. As both began to lose themselves to their desires. Was really impressed with the way that you described things from the father's perspective. And needless to say, would love to see a sequel to this story. Though I'd understand if it wasn't in the cards. :) 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the great review! I'm glad you liked the way the characters interacted, I wanted their relationship to seem as normal as possible from the start. I'm glad you liked the descriptions too! It was fun trying to tell both sides of the story from only the tiny's perspective. This might be my best reviewed story, so I'm not above some kind of continuation, we shall see. Thank you again for reading!

Summary:

A story inspired and set in the same universe as "Make America Big Again" by Asterisk, Inwiththebooks although probably not a one to one correlation.

WARNING: This is a macrophilia fetish story, but does have the dressing of a political satire to help drive the narrative.  As such, there will be concepts that could be construed as political commentary.  If this concept or the idea of a narrative which might be in conflict with your own world view makes you uncomfortable, turn back.

WARNING: This story is a spawn of my fucked up twisted brain; the story is sadistic, gory, and brutal, as a warning, and if you question your constition, probably not for you.  If these concepts bother you, turn back. 

Ok, now that's out of the way...

The story picks up in media res - after men have been reduced to Tinies some women form an underground railroad of sorts in an attempt to smuggle tinies away from harsh owners to New Zealand - a place where tinies have normal rights and there is an attempt to reverse the process.

Our protaganist - mark - is about to start his most dangerous part of this journey yet - getting through the airport.  He's about an inch tall.

As the name implies, foot heavy themes. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Middle Age (50+), Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 341683 Read Count: 481660
[Report This] Published: November 04 2019 Updated: February 28 2024
Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 19 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter X-2: Through security

 I'm really excited to see where this story is going to go from here. I've always loved the idea of a shrunken person being smuggled to safety upon a person's body. And like so many other macro/microphiles out there, I have a pretty strong affinity for feet. So seeing the two things combined in a scenario like this is pretty wonderful. Especially when you throw in elements of sweat, musk and danger. All things that serve to reinforce how tiny and insignificant a person would be in a situation like this. So it's no wonder that the main character is finding his grip on reality slipping. Trapped as he is, and completely at the mercy of the kindness of this woman. Who could just as easily end his life as save it. :) 

I'll definitely be reading more chapters tonight!

Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 19 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter X-3: Onto the plane

This chapter was pretty incredible. I've often mused what it would really be like to be shrunken to a fraction of one's former size. And sealed away some place like this. Completely beyond the notice of all around. Never knowing if the next footfall of your captor would mark the end of your very existence. The fact that even with the best of intentions, Dianne is subjecting Mark to this kind of mental anguish, is pretty powerful. 

I find myself wondering what it was like for the previous people that she smuggled this way. If they had faired any better than Mark. Or if perhaps they had already met an untimely end before Dianne even got situated on the plane. Either which way, the part with her giving him water while he remained trapped is one of my favorites so far. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope the rest of the story is equally "entertaining" ;p

Reviewer: Theodous Signed
Date: September 10 2020 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter X-34: The Shower

Was going to request that Amoe be the one who gets their own chapter. Though it seems that this part of the story might be leading into Mark getting more alone time with her. I have to say that the whole trick Crystal did with using her hair to tie up mark was pretty ingenious. :) 

Though I'm more than a little surprised that she put him in the soap. Considering how possesive she is becoming of him. I would think she wouldn't want the other women using Mark. Or for that matter, risking him being accidently killed or washed down the drain. That woman is something else. 



Author's Response:

Hey Theo,

 

That women is something else! Ha!

 

Glad your enjoying it!

Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2021 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter X-44: Slip up

For Mark to be unknowingly tormented by the nicest of his friends by far, like this. Is brutal irony at it's finest. :) At this point in the story, everything that has been said about Amoe lead me to believe that she's probably the only person at the party who truely still respects him as an individual. So you know darn well that she would be mortified if she knew what she had put Mark through. But with Crystal having decieved her into thinking that mark was enjoying it all. I fear that even if he was to be discovered. That she might his being in her slipper. As all part of some ploy to take advantage of her. :) 

But at the same time there is a part of me praying that she will see the situation for what it is and help poor Mark. Because he desperately needs a real friend to look out for him at this point in things. 

Fantastic writing as always though. I really love getting to see the events unfold from both perspectives. To give you a sense for how wildly different the characters experiences are. 

Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21 2021 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter X-45: Sarah's Sole Mate

Was starting to fear that you would never add another chapter. But this one as always, was worth the wait. The first half of the chapter felt almost poetic. In the way that you described things from Mark's point of view. 



Author's Response:

Hey Theodous,

Sorry didn't see your last review so this response will be for both.    

Yea. something about the idea of a friend unknowingly torturing a friend i find really compelling to say the least :p  It's the kind of strange nightmare fuel that exists in the weird corners of the mind... 

As to what happens, well, that will be clarified "soon" enough.

Speaking of soon, yea, sorry, i've slowed down my writing.  But i do plan on finishing this.  I could just get sloppy and write the facts without the detail that i think makes these stories, uh, good? but then i think it would be a waste anyway.

So if it takes longer and the quality is still there, that's my plan.  Hopefully i can stick to monthly update but i can't really promise anything.

Kenny

Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28 2021 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter X-47: A New World

Ohhh, you have no idea how happy I was to log onto the website and see that you had posted another chapter. This story has definitely become one of my all time shrunken men fictions. And one that I'm always anxiously looking forward to reading more of. So as nerve wracking as it can be, waiting to see what will come of our poor hero. I for one, never want you to feel as if can't take your time with things. :)

This chapter teased at something that I have desperately been wanting to see happen for quite a while now. In that you were given a glimmer of hope that one of Mark's would be tormentors will come to their senses and realize just how horrific their treatment of Mark really is. All the while wrestling with the notion that they love the idea of having someone so tiny and vulnerable willingly worship them. 

Much like with Amoe, there is a part of me that would love to see something far more deep and sensual develope between Mark and Diane. Perhaps the preassure that Sarah has been putting on her back fires. As she discovers the by now, largely broken Mark. Responds far far more strongly to acts of kindness, than cruelty. And that by simply easing up on him. He comes to truly see her as the first, real goddess in his life. Deserving of every ounce of worship and care that he could give her. To the point where he actually does want to stay with her. 

Would make for a heck of a twist, that's for sure. ^.^ But that's also the romantic in me talking. No matter how the story unfolds, I'm sure it will be amazing though. Please keep up the good work! 

 

On a side note. Please tell me that you aim to do a chapter at some point. Detailing the events that lead up to marks rescue from his "Friends" And his savior setting up his meeting with Diane and the Railroad. :) 



Author's Response:

Hey Theodous,

Thanks for the review once again.  Glad to hear you are enjoying it.

As to the side note, I'm really just trying to finish the scope i have aimed for the story.  This takes quite a bit of time for me to do, and I already have life outside of this, so for now, I'm only trying to finish this story.

That being said, i have written (or atleast planned out) some stuff involving the overall timeline or perhaps a related universe (perhaps not the same one) that is similar to the story.  So perhaps when i am done this i may publish some of that stuff.  

So there are certainly some concepts I've thought about that are similar to what you mention above.   But, alas, i can't promise anything, at least not anything in anything but the relatively distant future.

-Kenny

Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11 2021 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter X-49: Slipping Her Mind - Part 2

I'll tell you, I certainly don't mind seeing you focusing so much on the flashback chapters. Especially considering that Amoe is getting much screen time. :) To see Mark suffer so much at the hands and feet of easily the sweetest of his friends, is irony at it's finest. And the fact that through most if it she's been completely unaware makes it that much more devastating. 

These past few chapters have definitely showcased how this previously strong and independent person was completely broken down. And why he was willing to leave behind his friends, family and home country to make the perilous journey across the world. Just for the hope of regaining some of what was lost to him. Is there any chance that Tracy will feature in some chapters? Would love to learn more about how Mark ended up in her hands. And the events that lead up to her building him back up enough to attempt the smuggling. :)

In the meantime, I can't wait to see how things develop with Amoe. Your descriptions of everything that is happening both inside and outside the slipper have been pretty fantastic. Particularly when it comes to subtle shift in Mark's perspective. As he's started to find it harder and harder to see those around him as people. So much as godly beings. Who's toes can hardly even be bothered to acknowledge his existence. :) 



Author's Response:

Hey Theodous,


Thanks again for the review. 

Tracy will not be featured in this story, unfortunately.  Perhaps in the future I may write a sibling series where she would be featured, but that's more of an idea than anything.

-kenny

Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26 2021 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter X-27: Daydreaming

Had to come back and read back over this chapter. And am every bit as amazed at how incredibly well written it is. The way that the mother revealed the fate of the fellows family members. And spoke to him throughout the chapter was award level devious. Especially considering that these were some of the earliest men to have been shrunk in the program. So they likely had never even heard so much as rumors of the things that darker things that women were putting the shrunken ones through. 

You truly are a master of your craft my friend. This story takes one of my favorite sizeplay scenarios to the absolute max, and I love it!



Author's Response:

Yea that was a "fun" chapter to write, haha.

-kenny