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Homunculus by Cayce Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 71]
Summary: A tiny teenager is forced to live with his normal-sized family. Ignored by his father, he finds himself at the mercy of his sadistic stepmother and her friends, who delight in teasing and torturing him. His only allies are his bratty stepsister and the gentle housekeeper/babysitter with whom he becomes enamored.
Categories: Violent, Instant Size Change, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139916 Read Count: 1334024
[Report This] Published: December 10 2006 Updated: October 21 2008
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I laughed, I cried, I came... sometimes all at once. I'm kicking myself for not reading this sooner.

Author's Response: Wow! I don't think I've ever managed all three of those at once. Sounds like one hell of a trifecta. Glad you liked it Uber. Thanks for reading the damn thing (and taking the time to let me know about it)!

Summary:

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Categories: Adventure, Feet, Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4 Read Count: 46959
[Report This] Published: July 25 2013 Updated: February 15 2014
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2014 Title: Spirited Away

I can't to see where this story goes. Please come back! I'll give you cake!

Summary:

What could be better than marrying your true love?  Perhaps being shrunken down into objects she can use!  (Or just getting shrunken.)


Categories: Animal, Adventure, Body Exploration, Object, Couples , Entrapment, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12124 Read Count: 85881
[Report This] Published: April 08 2014 Updated: July 21 2014
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Doug's Story

Your writing is impeccable. I'm intrigued to see where this goes.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the great rating & review.  I'm glad you're enjoying!

Summary:

A deviant interpretation of the Christian story depicting the Virgin Mary's role in crushing the blight of evil. 


Categories: Crush, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 549 Read Count: 3592
[Report This] Published: July 23 2014 Updated: July 23 2014
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, this made religion a lot sexier. I love how it's written, but I wonder how you were intending the serpent imagery to be taken. If it's supposed to be subtle, you should work on it, but if it's supposed to be a clear comparison between the serpent and Mary, then it was well done.

Summary:

I've always had a gambling problem and it's gotten me into trouble before, but now I am definitely in over my head. I made one last bet with a friend, if I lose, I live on her as a parasite for a month to "learn a lesson." What will I do once her girlfriend and my sister get involved too? Can my mite sized body survive a month at the hands and bodies of three playful and taunting women?


Categories: Watersports, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Muscle, Nose, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11143 Read Count: 168613
[Report This] Published: September 06 2016 Updated: November 10 2016
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed
Date: October 08 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Day 1: Part 1

I don't normally enjoy body exploration, but I am loving this. My suggestion: you seemed to imply this already, but I would like to see character to end up in Sarah with her being unaware of him. I will continue to read no matter where you take it, though. Hope a new chapter comes out soon!

Author's Response:

I'm looking forward to what I have planned for Sarah. It'll be a bit before we see her sadly.

Test Anxiety by Vintovka Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

When you drop a class, be sure you actually drop it, or you may find the exam is a bit too big for you.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Giantess, Legwear, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2177 Read Count: 8977
[Report This] Published: July 09 2017 Updated: July 09 2017
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Test Anxiety

I really enjoyed your portrayal of how helpless the character was. There's not enough quality nano works in my opinion. More, please!

Summary:

Mike wakes up 1/16th of an inch tall in the bed of his voluptuous, horny mother. Completely unaware of her shrunken son’s presence she spends the whole day waiting—rather impatiently for her secret girlfriend to arrive.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23555 Read Count: 193673
[Report This] Published: November 14 2018 Updated: April 15 2021
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 12 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Julia’s Journal

Fucking love this. Gives me ideas for my own micro story. I think your prose could use a little work, but it's great otherwise.
I hope you haven't forgotten about updating!

Also, I vote for 14. I'm a sucker for unaware.

Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Reading Between the Cheeks

Welcome back! Glad to see an update to this only a few days after I'd rediscovered it. Excited to see more.

Summary:

A brilliant research scientist finds himself looking at life from a different perspective due to his young research assistant. 

I can't say much without giving away all of the good parts ;)

An entry for Size Riot's CruelJan20 contest with a focus on humiliation, vouyeristic and exhibitionist tendancies.


Categories: Body Exploration, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2005 Read Count: 8822
[Report This] Published: February 27 2020 Updated: February 27 2020
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 28 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

No A Friendly Wager? REEEEE!
But seriously, keep up the good work.

Summary: Deleted
Categories: Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1 Read Count: 10762
[Report This] Published: August 13 2021 Updated: August 13 2021
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2021 Title: Permanent Change Short Stories

Pretty good, but they could do with more impactful imagery. "Her clammy, plump sole slammed down, stretching around you and encasing you in a temporary tomb of sole on all sides of you." I really liked this line. Describing it as being encased in a tomb says a lot in few words.

Summary:

Election experts were baffled by the straight vertical line spike increase of votes for Biden that happened in the wee hours of the morning when most of the country was sound asleep. In all their years, they had never seen an election quite like that of 2020, where a huge dump of votes went 100% for one candidate and 0% went to the other, propelling that candidate to victory against all odds. It was statistically improbable for this to happen naturally, and no one could ever figure it out how 100% of the votes in the dump all went to Biden. But Kamala Harris knew.


Categories: Giantess, Middle Age (50+), Destruction, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Scat, Sci-Fi, Slave, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2057 Read Count: 3271
[Report This] Published: December 08 2021 Updated: December 08 2021
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lmao

Summary:

Macintosh has resigned himself to the fact that he would live a quiet, solitary life. A cosmic entity with apocalyptic power, however, disrupts this destiny, in her pursuit of an eternal companion.


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Gentle, Muscle, Odor, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4402 Read Count: 3150
[Report This] Published: August 16 2022 Updated: August 16 2022
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22 2022 Title: Chapter 1: World-ending Proposal

I'm a sucker for giantesses that inexplicably require tiny men to reproduce. I really enjoyed your descriptions, particularly in Sathanastia's physiology, and your dialogue easily gives the two main characters very different voices. I also really like how her origin and purpose harkens back to the truly eldritch gods and monsters of the past. I'm not usually into gentle stuff, but I can't wait to see how heartwarming and wholesome the Charcoal Queen can be.

Author's Response:

I too, am in love with "beeg gurl needs tinies for a whirl" to keep the bloodline going. It's a convenient excuse for the usual hijinks. While Sath's humanoid, I definitely wanted to portray that she is most definitely out of this world, hence the rather technical dialogue and dark design. This alien understanding of humanity, I suppose, is a form of 'innocence' that can keep things cute, with a cosmic twist.

I'm stealing the name Charcoal Queen by the way.

Summary:

Through great trial and effort!
And continued talk of bringing them back...
Gilah and Jason return. The love story between a mundane human and his titanic monstrous girlfriend continues. This time, however, they're not alone. Gilah isn't the only horror in the deep. And really, how far do the Depths in which she lives actually go? Surely there must be an end, right? Otherwise, there's no telling what sort of monstrosities might be lurking beyond the gaze of man. 


-Love in the Depths has now been completed-


Categories: Adventure, Couples, Crush, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Muscle, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72635 Read Count: 24617
[Report This] Published: August 18 2022 Updated: March 24 2023
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Demons of the Past

I'm "Love in" this story. Must be getting some McDonald's in here because I'm "Love in" it. Insert one more joke here.

Summary:

Henry was in a rough place. Forced into a pirate crew, he encounters a creature of the deep when she’s captured in their net. Wishing to set her free, Henry and rest of the pirates are woefully unaware that there’s another individual who wishes to see the creature go free, and she’s not going to show mercy. 

Who would’ve guessed that gigantic axolotl humanoids have strong familial bonds?


Warning: There is some heavy violence and gore ahead, so either batten down the hatches and brace for the storm; or turn back now! 

Created from several conversations with people on the giantessworld discord. 


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Gentle, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24964 Read Count: 16098
[Report This] Published: September 02 2022 Updated: August 13 2023
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed
Date: September 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing

Cute giantess axolotl gf gets my seal of approval

Summary: The western town of Copperbrook finds itself under the watchful eye of the massive Sheriff Annabelle. Unfortunately, she isn’t the sharpest tool in the shed and the responsibility for keeping her under control falls on the deputy, who knows his work is quite cut out for him. 
A goofy story where all the Western tropes have a massive, clumsy giantess thrown in to shake things up. 

Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Destruction, Gentle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4182 Read Count: 6148
[Report This] Published: October 02 2022 Updated: October 05 2022
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Accidental Discharge

Considered knocking off a star because she only has a single first name, but I suppose I'll let it slide for now

Summary:

Mom's son and his girlfriend decide to shrink themselves, and give themselves to her for an entire month! Not only are they tiny, but she can also mind control them, transform them, and change their sizes on a whim~


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Object, Mature (40-49), Couples
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8503 Read Count: 9424
[Report This] Published: October 12 2022 Updated: October 17 2022
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstar
Date: October 14 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Motherly Mind Control

Neat idea. Interested to see where it goes. However, the emotes in the text were a little distracting. I think you should trust yourself to convey the emotion in the dialogue without them.



Author's Response:

Hey I'm glad you're interestedal! And thanks for the feedback


In the next chapters I won't be including emotes, and will trust myself to convey emotions through the dialog

Summary:

My Aunt Revealed To Me Her Witchly Powers That Allows Her To Transform Humans Into Anything, And I'm Her Favorite Nephew To Torment


Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Humiliation, Breasts, Object, Unaware, Butt, Incest, Mouth Play, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13126 Read Count: 22469
[Report This] Published: November 16 2022 Updated: July 25 2023
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Getting A Taste Of What's To Come

Holy shit. I think this is the best TF content I've seen in years. The dishwashing scene struck a chord in me that I'd long forgotten about; TF doesn't have to be "sexy" to be hot. My only complaint is that the detail about her saliva only came after he was already being washed, but that's very minor, all things considered.

Added to favorites, can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the favorite! I hope I can keep the bar high as the series goes on

Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 07 2023 Title: Chapter 3: A Close Shave

I've seen people write about razor transformations before, but they never did anything for me. I'm happy to say that this one was different. I think one thing you do well is the anticipation before and after being used. The idleness of being an object is usually something people gloss over, but it works well for me here and in the last chapter. That, and it's good to see things that aren't just panty/sock/bra over and over again. However, while I loved the actual content, I would like to see some more evocative prose.

Can't wait to see where this goes next



Author's Response:

Thanks! I wanted to start this series off with more untraditional transformations to begin with to break away from what's been done many times. Although future installments will hit some of those usual TFs. And I will try my best to improve my writing and set-ups.

Summary:

Have you ever wondered what it might be like to become a pair of panties?  When a security guard named James found out that the research company he worked for was developing a device that could remap living beings onto inanimate objects through a process called "Shifting", he thought of little else.  After months of no success, James finally managed to convince his girlfriend Amy to let him become a pair of her panties for the night of his birthday. 


Categories: Breasts, Object, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Footwear, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15987 Read Count: 15138
[Report This] Published: February 21 2023 Updated: October 01 2023
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 22 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Matter & Consciousness Reticulation Device [James]

Always happy to see more well-written transformation stories, though the set-up was a little long for my tastes. Unless it's relevant later, I feel like the shop portion and some of the device's explanation could be cut. However, I did like that the explanation to Amy served as an explanation to the audience as well, and their dialogue was wholesome and natural.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I wanted this story to differ from the standard magic/witch motivated transformation stories and I feel like explaining the process in a detailed, "scientific", almost boring way makes everything seem more real and possible.  The confusing explanation does play a significant part later as well (and there's a cute little payoff from the shop scene).  Hope to hear if you change your mind about the scenes' impacts once the last 2 chapters are posted. It's alright if you don't!

Summary: What happens when a goddess with a temper encounters someone they can't kill with a flick of their finger?
...Well?
I'm asking you cause I don't know
Hey
Hey!
Dontchu walk away, get back here! 
Categories: Giantess, Destruction
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1980 Read Count: 1330
[Report This] Published: April 01 2023 Updated: April 01 2023
Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2023 Title: Chapter 1: One Punch Primate

oh no