Easily this is hands down my favorite story going on the site since you seem to be done with The Book, which I was really into. Admittedly I'm not as into it with the Mom as I'm not as attracted to older women but it is still great.I do hope for three things in the future. One, I do want to see Janine get him back and see what she'd do. Two, I'd love to see a good foot worship chapter, though that doesn't seem to be much your thing so I wouldn't be upset if it isn't included. And three, my most desired thing is a legitimate anal insertion chapter, as that is my favorite thing period, and you've teased if a few times. I'd rather that be with Janine, or even his sister, but would still love to see it with the mother if that's your plan, just want to see that become a large focus, him fully shoved up there

Sorry, jolt on bus made me accidentally hit submit.

Bang youheads main character feels fear and feels like more of a real person wheras Tom doesn't feel remotely real and feels totally fake now, which along with all the threads going on is drawing me away from this story.

Sorry if this review upset you, I did my best not to be rude and to be constructive. I'm just not one to really hold back my true thoughts

So glad to see another chapter. This was my favorite story going when you posted it and I thought it was abandoned. Great writing and description in this one. Hope you keep writing 

Really enjoying this one  getting into it slowly is building nice anticipation. Really looking forward to chapter 4, and hoping it won't be a long wait. 

I really find it interesting that she kind of enjoys being bullied, and to see where that relationship goes. Great start 

I'm enjoying the story. I do however thi k the five chapters in a single day is a bit dumb if I'm being honest. Just do one mega chapter if they're all going to be in one day, it's pointless to do them separate

Been hoping for some mouthplay. The wait paid off. Great buildup to the first action. Great stuff

Great story. Been reading it, just haven't really left any reviews. I like how everything is loosely interconnected.

I'll give you a bit about me if you'd like to put me in sometime. I'm not really clear on how you want the class schedule done, so I'll leave that blank. You can schedule me however you like to if you put me in, so if you have specific needs you can use mine to fill things out.

Name: Cameron Stone

Male

Height: 5'6"

Bio: Cameron is a very short and scrawny nerdy kid, who also happens to be very timid and submissive, especially around girls. While shy, he is very nice, generous to a fault, the type of person who would give someone the shirt off his back, or give his own meal to someone who didn't have one. Or even take a punishment to spare someone else oNE. Not the type of person to really argue with anyone. 

For studies he is a below average student in pretty much every class he has. This isn't for lack of trying, he always puts top effort in, he just has a problem getting a grasp of things, and this leads to him not having any passing grades, and being small a lot, yet teachers tend to be softer on him because of how hard he tries. Other students aren't so nice, as he is what's effectively referred to as a "bully magnet". If taken advantage of he will generally go along and do whatever he is commanded to do, as he lacks the courage or conviction to stand up for himself.

My personal out of character likes: soft vore, anal insertion, foot worship, kept as slave

Dislikes: hard core, crush. 

However for purposes of the story I would be up for anything even if it's in my dislikes. Consider me a utility player you can plug in wherever  and however needed. 

Loved thot, mouth play is my favorite, so I'm really excited for yhtnext chapter, I hope it's soon

Enjoyable as always. Sucks having to usually wait so long for updates but it's worth it. I really liked how it ramped up and ends, I really want to see the next part