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Julia by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 450]
Summary:

Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134130 Read Count: 1662154
[Report This] Published: November 05 2011 Updated: July 20 2015
Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: June 21 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Ultimate Make-out

jaw dropping.  Just so you know I am holding my breath for the next installment.

Will we get to know Julia's feet any better?  The way you're handling this is delicious.



Author's Response:

we will indeed get to know them better; i'm saving that for a later chapter, though. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: September 01 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51: The Interesting Stuff

So pleased to see a new installment.  Forced emotional intimacy adds a whole new dimension of domination into this scenerio.  Well done.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: October 15 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost

So glad to see Julia stopped by again.  This chapter is very Blackmailesque, she's becomming a bit of a foot slut.  Curious thing, there could be a very easy oops with a boyfriend in your boot.



Author's Response:

"Foot slut."  I love that phrase.  And you're certainly right to think that about the boot; that's actually something that will be brought up in the next chapter.

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: August 29 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: The People Zoo

Brilliant crush/ vore scene.  It doesn't get much more dramatic than watching a psychotic who's imprisioned you torture and destroy a family member.

Julia is too good at this game.  The way I see it, her only challenge is controling her own actions.  Unless the maid or better yet, her mom, were to accidentally see into her private life.  Their disapearance may be very difficult for her to explain.

Anyway, I can't wait to see what you have in store for Act 3.  I really can't imagine how she'll treat her captives if, until now, had been humane treatment.

With Jack and Julia's newly established intimacy I do hope she decides to discuss and explore her fetish with him.

Excellent work!  Quite the legendary psychotic you've created, once again. :)

 



Author's Response:

Acts 1 and 2 will be cakewalks compared to what Julia has in store for them in 3

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: August 17 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Beth

monstrous omnipotent goddess

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EnWuL6PNCjo

 

 

Reviewer: deviant Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Sleepover

This work has gotten so fantastically complex to the point where I cannot begin to fathom what will come next!  I will be checking back for the next installment incessantly ;)

 

No need to apologize for the longish end note.  I generally read the comments and responses in your work.  Never before have I done that much less commented more than once on a story.

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: July 04 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Picnic with a Giantess

watching another masterpiece unfold!



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: December 04 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

so eagerly awaiting this date.

also, I love how you're treating Julia's feet.  judging by your other stories I'm awaiting for the impending carnage they'll inevitably cause.  on top of that Julia is a fantastically realized character, maybe the best SM genre character ever.

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: November 23 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Oral Showdown

I've been meaning to comment on this story.. I really have been enjoying it.  pitch black erotic dominaiton.  you've gone and created another legendary psychopath!

 

Three stories at once, you're amazing, Jack.

Reviewer: deviant Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Make Love, Not War

UNHOLY FUCK!  You sir will be immortalized in the GTS community through these works of yours.  Not stories, genuine works of immense talent.  You continually blow my expectations out of the water!

Julia, I think, has now become my favorite.  It seems kind of silly for a person with a fetish for giant women to say, that's pretty weird..but..just, wow.  And she has just outed herself to Jack!  I cannot wait for her to begin to realize this fetish of hers.  



Author's Response: That would've been a good alternative chapter title: "The Unholy Fuck." Thanks for reading.

A Little Blackmail 4: Big Sister Diaries by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 89]
Summary:

The sadistic tales of Carly Arton as she abuses and toys with her shrunken brother Jack.

Set between A Little Blackmail 2: Carly's Pet Brother and A Little Blackmail 3: Life of a Toy.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40786 Read Count: 268947
[Report This] Published: December 17 2011 Updated: May 30 2015
Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: December 18 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams

This is amazing!  An idea i've toyed with myself for awhile now.  SM as a drug.  it's the perfect way!

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: February 15 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Attack of the Fifty Foot Sister

Outstanding chapter!  Great idea too, it's totally logical Carly would be into 50ft Woman.  I've missed Carly.

Movie night with Carly.  Maybe next time she'll give him a choice.  You want to sit in my sock drawer or watch ISM or HISTK?



Author's Response:

thanks for reading/reviewing!

Birthday Surprise by Jacksmith Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

A teenage boy is preparing for his mother’s birthday when he inexplicably shrinks down to half an inch tall, and must find a way to get her attention before this becomes the last birthday they’ll ever spend together.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11367 Read Count: 160326
[Report This] Published: April 10 2012 Updated: May 05 2012
Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: April 21 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Death March

Nice a new Jack Smith piece :)

While the writing is quite good I have to say, sofar I keep hoping little Alex is discovered.  Michelle sounds like one delicious MILF.  Judging from Alex's fantasies of being discovered it sounds like she has a tender heart.  A rare and welcome quality in gts fiction.

Eagerly awaiting your next installment.

Cheers



Author's Response:

we'll just have to see, won't we? ;)  hard to be noticed when you're only about a fourth of an inch tall

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: May 23 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Happy Birthday, Mom

Quite right enjoyed it.  A bit more interested though in what life for little Alex have been with mum if she found him.

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Transformation, Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, “Adventure is out there!” (Series), “Adventure is out there!” (Series), Movie Theme, Movie Theme, Worldwide (Series), Crosscountry (Series), The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, Season Premiere, Season Premiere, Adventure Archipelago , Silent Dance, The cougar and the student, A year of misery, The unaware witch, The new secret boyfriend of Jennifer Lawrence, The night I became a giant, Buy Abortion Pill Online, Hunting, Hunting, spying husband, Trilogy Of Teachers, Trilogy Of Teachers, Rough Drafts/ Nate’s Shrunken adventures, Omniworld, Tomoko Kuroki's Planet Interactions, Joseanthony@123, Not just a simple superhero cosplay costume, Mr., Sarah's adventures, Alpha-Beta , Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Reduction and Relocation, The adventures of Ares , The adventures of Ares , Karen’s Christmas Gifts To Frosty And Santa
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: May 30 2013 Title: None

I'm merely a chapter into this one and can tell it's quite good.  Some very strong writers are beginning to emerge in SM.  Fantastic to see.  Looking forward to it.



Author's Response:

SM must mean small man? I've used this term in my story, and people have pointed it out.

Thanks so much for the kind words, my friend. I hope you continue to enjoy, please keep reading :)

A Little Blackmail 5: Shrinking Pains by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

A brother, haunted by the years of shrunken captivity he spent beneath his younger sister’s foot, struggles to confront his demons and, ultimately, the demented girl who stole his humanity.


Categories: Growing Woman, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59576 Read Count: 281413
[Report This] Published: June 24 2015 Updated: May 13 2016
Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: July 01 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Life After Carly

haven't checked in in awhile.  so glad you're continuing with this story.  



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: July 08 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Post-Sister Stress Disorder

Really enjoying it so far.  I was wondering when you'd get to his mom.

 

You've taken an brilliant angle with this.  He's surrounded by sympothetic and nuturing women but he's so conditioned to be a slave that any trigger sends him straight into hell.

 

I always dig your stuff but Blackmail I think is your Heart of Darkness.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you like it. You've basically struck at exactly what this story will revolve around. While Jack is physically safe (at least for the time being), his mental state still won't let him rest.

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: July 14 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: A Prison of Her Own

Interesting chapter.  I was so hoping that Jack would be given the opportunity to confront Carly.  Sounds unlikely.  I'm curious to see where you take her.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I wouldn't count out a confrontation just yet, though...

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: April 04 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Freak in the Sheets

amazing chapter!  you broke away to the shrink at the best part though ;)

 

i so hope you've got a backlog of this that will dribble out.  you are an incredible writer.



Author's Response:

Gotta leave some things to the imagination. I don't quite have a backlog, but I do intend to slowly but surely finish this thing.

Reviewer: deviant Signed
Date: April 26 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Sophie's Pet Cousin

i was so enjoying Jack's therapy.  sounds like could be heading back home to Her feet.  didn't he have a girlfriend before too?  she would have been good to meet.

 

looking forward to it ;)



Author's Response:

Unless I'm forgetting something major, Jack doesn't have a girlfriend - he's had dates and whatnot, but didn't have a relationship at the time of his shrinking. And yes, he'll be getting much closer to Carly's feet in the coming chapters than he has in the rest of this story.

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