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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
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Date: May 31 2013 Title: None

I guess the best part about finals is coming back to this story with a bunch of chapters to read. Great updates! I guess a review of the earlier chapters I missed would be moot now that Cassie has taken care of Jack. Very chilling that she she is actualy able to make the kill. Can't tell you how excited/relieved I was when Allison finally decided to stand by Ron for once. Can't wait to see how Cassie acts towards Ron now that she's crossed the same line Jessica crossed of taking a small man's life.

 



Author's Response:

Haha I love that too, enrique. Taking some time away and coming back to so much new stuff is the best.

Allison's definitely let the love for her family cloud her judgement, but I can honestly say she now see thing's clearly, and will continue to help Ron (in this case, she must get him back from Cassie), I'm glad you enjoy that aspect of her.

Lots of readers believe Cassie must be turning evil after this point, but they must realize that all my characters are torn between two opposing sides of human nature. Each has their own degree of gentleness and their own degree of cruelty. Despite readers believing Cassie is evil now, there is so much more to characters. I'm glad you haven't taken this side, and are eager to read more about her, Enrique :). I think you'll enjoy what happens. Thanks for the review and keep reading :)

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Date: May 21 2013 Title: None

LOVE Cassie!! Probably about as much as I hate Jessica. I can't stand people in general who think they will face no consequences, and Jessica has gotten away with literal murder. I debated on whether or not I should say this, but I have this bad feeling that Jessica is somehow going to try and probably succeed in getting Allison against Ron by showing her that Ron liked what Cassie was doing to him.


Can't wait to see whats next!

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Date: May 19 2013 Title: None

Both sad and glad that Allison is starting to humiliate poor Ron again ha. I can't wait to see what this new girl has in store for Ron. She doesn't seem to be going along with Jessica's plan that much, and not really as crazy. 

 

Well the master of suspence has struck again! I'll be waiting with bated breath for the next installment!



Author's Response:

ahaha! always love to read your reviews enrique, and im truly glad you've been following so closely. these new chapters today and tomorrow youll surely enjoy my friend

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Date: May 18 2013 Title: None

Really glad this story is back! Can't help but feel bad for Ron, but at least Allison seems to to be tending to him, at least until he starts to accuse Jessica again



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expect more updates my friend! this chapter was a little vacation from the usual

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Date: May 13 2013 Title: None

Ugh definately gutted after that last line ha. Is it bad that I want Jessica to be hit by a bus or something? I'm praying that when this is all resolved Ron will get his "I told you so" moment. Thats if he is still alive ha



Author's Response:

haha im hoping for this too enrique, but it's very hard for me to tell which will come first..

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Date: May 11 2013 Title: None

Its frightening to imagine being in Jessica's grasp. If I were Jack I'd just ask Erica to put me out my misery. 

The most frustrating thing for me is how the girls are most likely going to refuse to believe Ron. The chapters aren't even written yet and I'm pulling my hair out that Erica and Allison are so oblivious to this maniac haha. I mean that as a huge complement! 



Author's Response:

this is true, enrique! jack's about to learn just how much tamer erica was than jessica.

you're right about the 2 sisters, because they'll surely think that jessica's better now. but ill tell you a little something beforehand, i have a kind of way to let jessica get away with some things, without having to stretch reality with allie and erica refusing to believe she could do any wrong. it kinda ties into the plot strongly... i hope, anyway. you'll see!

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Date: May 10 2013 Title: None

Not going to lie, I admit I beleive Jessica was "healed" somewhat. But after hearing what Jack said to her for her to be like her mom. I can see her slipping right back to what she was. 

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Date: May 09 2013 Title: None

Great as always! Glad to see Allison back in the picture again! Hopefully after her vacation she will want to use the little time she left with the small Ron to use some of Erica's ideas on him! Can't wait to see what's next



Author's Response:

I would never rule this out as a possibility enrique. I think you'll be seeing some of this very soon my friend

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Date: May 05 2013 Title: None

Great additions!!Glad to see Erica get in on the action! How frightening it must have been for Ron to be mistaken for Jack. Hopefully Erica isn't done with him yet!



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Erica's not done by a long shot, Enrique

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Date: May 03 2013 Title: None

Yesss! We've been getting little tastes of Erica other side as a giantess and I feel like the next chapter we will get it full force when she finds out whats been goign on in that drawer! Can't wait for the next chapter!



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You got the right, enrique. expect a lot from this particular giantess my friend

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Date: May 01 2013 Title: None

Looking forward to the next arc of this story! The suspense is killing me, but while I'm waiting you have inspired me to attemp a story of my own!



Author's Response:

That's excellent my friend. If you do write, I'll be sure to read it! Good luck and thanks again for reading mine

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Date: April 29 2013 Title: None

Wow, I couldn't hate Jessica more haha. The whole keeping him small bit really fooled me probably as much as it did Ron. Looks like things are coming to close rather nicely! Can't wait to see what you have in store for the next arc. Hopefully Erica gets more "involved"!



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She will be for sure. check back soon for more chapters friend!

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Date: April 28 2013 Title: None

I had to read this chapter twice, I stopped midway to go back to the "Most Recent" section to see if it had been "completed" yet ha. Ron has some got ice in his veins just being able to sht in Jessicas hand and not wetting himself ha. 

As I got to the bottom of the chapter I was honestly expecting Allison coming in with a scalpel having to get Ron out before he was digested. 

 

Great addition, look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

a major arch in story is almsot done, but illl still continue it on, and i think youll like the next chapters to come. thanks so much enrique!

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Date: April 28 2013 Title: None

Oh man the suspense! As I was reading this my heart dropped when Ron landed in Jessica's hands. Can't wait to see how this turns out.!

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Date: April 27 2013 Title: None

Wow! Intense! I kinda wish I waited a little longer for more chapters because now the suspense is killing me. I don't know how you can keep writing these chapters so fast with such GREAT quality but keep it up! Can't wait to see how this all turns out!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot enrique! This motivates me to keep writing. I think you're gonna like how it turns out, too

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Date: April 19 2013 Title: None

AMAZING.

Honestly this last chapter put me right there in the drawer with him. You have a great way of describing the completley hopelessness of the situation. Gave me chills



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, enrique! Glad you liked it, and check back soon for new chapters