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The Security System by jnbt Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

My beautiful upstairs neighbor has a new security system that can shrink any intruders. At first I find it terrifying, but later on... exhilarating.

[July 27, 2013: Chapter 6 added. Story ended]


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14245 Read Count: 93400
[Report This] Published: April 22 2012 Updated: July 27 2013
Reviewer: jonkaa Signed
Date: April 23 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: First Experience

Wow! Great beginning, loving the size difference :)

Reviewer: jonkaa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Experience Continued

Whoa... I wonder what'll happen next!

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Transformation, Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, “Adventure is out there!” (Series), “Adventure is out there!” (Series), Movie Theme, Movie Theme, Worldwide (Series), Crosscountry (Series), The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, Season Premiere, Season Premiere, Adventure Archipelago , Silent Dance, The cougar and the student, A year of misery, The unaware witch, The new secret boyfriend of Jennifer Lawrence, The night I became a giant, Buy Abortion Pill Online, Hunting, Hunting, spying husband, Trilogy Of Teachers, Trilogy Of Teachers, Rough Drafts/ Nate’s Shrunken adventures, Omniworld, Tomoko Kuroki's Planet Interactions, Joseanthony@123, Not just a simple superhero cosplay costume, Mr., Sarah's adventures, Alpha-Beta , Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Reduction and Relocation, The adventures of Ares , The adventures of Ares , Karen’s Christmas Gifts To Frosty And Santa
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: jonkaa Signed
Date: May 26 2013 Title: None

The problem here is that the characters all behave like idiots except fo Jessica, who's some kind of clairvoyant genius who knows everything and can never be restrained or controlled...

It was so good when it started, mostly because of the parts with just Allison and Ron, but now it's getting kind of complicated.



Author's Response:

I agree, jonkaa, and I believe the themes and style of this story made it impossible for this to be avoided. A lot of stuff happens, a lot of devastating actions. A story like this can't go on forever, or else the characters all become idiots in the end, because they've all hurt and murdered people.

It will end soon, no doubt. I just hope it's a satisfying ending for everyone

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