Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed
Date: March 18 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and First Part - Chapter 1 and 2.
Holy grumpy green monsters, I'm seriously jealous...you speak 6 languages?
I tried to learn French and Polynesian and gave up on anything but English.
You should give some serious thought to writing beacause you definitely have an
apptitude for it; you certainly seem to have a way with English so by all means
continue this story and keep the action coming. Keeps your readers interested.
Author's Response: I loved that "Holy grumpy green monsters"; I might use it sometime if you're ok with that. I really speak 6 languages, I studied opera for several years so I had many language classes (German, French, and Italian), as a Mexican I speak both Spanish and English and I've lived in other countries where I improved my French and learnt Russian. Polynesian sounds hard but I'd bet it is a very interesting language. If you like litterature, I recommend learning French, it is very beautiful to read the great French writers in their native language like Beaudelaire, Dumas, Camus, and Victor Hugo. It's a fun hobby. I'm glad you liked how I write, I enjoyed writing for you as well. Also, I've been reading your stories as well, I really liked The Clone! and I appreciate that you encourage me to write. It means a lot to me.
I just posted Chapters 2 and 3 to my story if you feel like reading my again. I hope you like it.