A female warrior finds herself accidentally caught up in a Gulliveresque series of adventures.
I never got to read the original posting of this, but if the reviews and responces here are to be believed it was something great.
And the first chapter here already has me hooked and wanting more.
I hope you're able to repost it in future :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the interest! Yes, I'm not very happy with how the story went, but if you'd like the read the full story nonetheless, here's a link: https://sta.sh/0elf2qaat0v
Max has a way to solve his money troubles. Yet the solution is causing some BIG problems.
All I see is blank pages???? Where's the chapters content
A young man must come to terms with the fact that he no longer enjoys the station in life that was his by birthright and must now adjust to the cruel fate that life has dealt him.
Note sent on Deviantart :)
Would love to chat about the paperback publication there.
Please do that Vegetaboy! I'll be waiting for you!
Crocodile
In a world where shrunken clones called YouPets are sold as servants and toys, a young woman takes the phrase “identity crisis” to the extreme by purchasing a copy of the one person whose desires and fears she knows more deeply than anyone else: herself.
Ok, so I favorited this quite some time ago, but only now got around to reading it.
And......damn, like I am kicking myself for not reading it sooner.
This reality you crafted really is something else.
I had similar ideas awhile back, and have seen some similar ideas in one Giantess/size comic with tiny robots with people's memories being uploaded into them as sort of robot tiny clones.
And the idea of being able to sell or license out yourself like this would definitely lead to scenarios like the one you wrote here, with a girl choosing to crate little copies of herself to toy with and vent her own insecurities with, to feel powerful.
The nature of Jennifer being explored here with her tiny self, and her treatment of her was great, dark in some places, and revealing in others.
And that ending!!! That ending!!! The cycle repeating itself.
I love this, and it yet another gem you have added her to GTSworld, and to the size writing community, and I thank you for it.
Size related stories told in the classic Twilight Zone style
Ok wow!
I have been meaning to read this story for awhile now and was looking for a good chapter to start on (I sometimes read non-linear if the story contains oneshot chapters)
And this one just hooked me!
The sexual content and description was done so well, and the time travel aspect!!
The fact that Danielle unknowingly 'caused' her parents death like that, her presence set off a time loop that will repeat itself over and over again.
That was such a great plot aspect you worked in, and knowing young Danielle is going to grow up and go through it (while fucked up that her dad and mom do that to her) makes their reaction right at the end to discovering the truth all the more satisfying.
Why does this chapter not have more reviews, hell why doesn't this story have more reviews??!?!
I am definitely going to read more of this, fantastic work.
An anthology of stories about how the Rebalancing of Sexes made younger men desire mature women and vice versa.
Another great chapter :D
one thing I keep thinking on, how would the rebalancing affect Gay men ? Or Transgender women ?
Thanks for the compliment! SPOILER ALERT ahead!
Someone actually wrote a ROS-based story in which gay men and women basically took over the world because straight men were too small and straight women too horny. "Rebalancing the Sexes: The World After." I'd include it in the series if I could find it. I responded to it in "Rebalancing the Sexes: Changing the World After."
Generally speaking, the Goddess of Love is mainly concerned about sexual and power dynamics between straight men and women. It is implied that a woman can shrink a gay man but most are cautious around women... even to the point of arming themselves, according to ROS:TWA. I haven't written a story about a gay man getting shrunk but I think the GOL would view it as nonconsensual, as opposed to a heterosexual male who is assumed to be fair game after the age of 18 if he's unattached. There would probably be punishments for the shrinker, much as there are punishments for women who shrink other women's boyfriends/husbands ("A World of Breasts and Buttocks.")
The addition of "bornsmall" men adds another complication. Boys born out of the back-womb come from different sperm than those born from the front. Given that there are genetic factors involved in sexual orientation, it seems likely that, once things sort out over the next generation, the Goddess has routed chromosomes so that straights are born out the back and gays out the front... thus uncomplicating things down the road. Eventually, gays start out life at woman-scale and stay there, while straights start out at man-scale and stay there.
As far as transgender women, it's a factor we haven't dealt with. Perhaps the key is hormones, which would mean that someone who is receiving medical assistance to transition to male would shrink, while a man transitioning to woman would not. Still haven't given it much thought.
Thanks for your thoughtful question.
Oh yes! Loved this chapter.
I don't know who is luckier, Ryan or Jessica.
One thing I wanted to ask, are you ok with other authors writing stories for your Rebalancing verse.
My question and your responce in the previous chapter review got me and a friend thinking of ideas in exploring those aspects in the rebalacing verse (that is, if you are ok with it)
You seemed to have a great outline, or at least a solid plan for exploring it in future.
This is also another reason I wish GTSWorld had a DM system (among other things), it would make communication so much easier.
Actually, things might get a little rocky for Ryan and Jessica...
I would welcome any new stories set in the ROS universe. Just post a response here and I'll try to incorporate it into the series. If you haven't already, try to read up on some of the other stories in ROS so you get an idea of what is "canon" (and that has evolved somewhat over time).
A few more points:
The Goddess set out to reverse many of the problems each sex faces, often by giving them the other side's problems. For example, giving women a lengthened fertility with a second womb in the back and giving young men a biological clock that points many of them toward mature women. She wants no one to be lonely and wants to replace fear, jealousy and scarcity with sexual abundance. She wants men to be humbled and non-toxic and women to love strongly and rule the world and push it toward love, sex and intimacy. Have fun!
The rather narcissistic shut-in prince of a rather dimunative race is sent out into the world with the goal of finding the right suitor to marry. A rather simple goal... if every single one of his 'matches' weren't bigger than he. Not all are proper benevolent ladies either. With an informed retainer that is never around when he needs him as his only companion the prince sets out on a journey of self discovery, peril, and the occasional steamy encounter.
I know this story hasn't been updated in quite some time, but I really love it. I've read it several times over the past two years, but regretfully never reviewed till now.
(I have read all the chapters, so this suggestion/vote for his final choice/wife does not come from merely reading up to this chapter, but the entire story as a whole)
I've got to say out of all the bridal prospects, Eva Redfist has got to be my favorite.
Love her dominant and strong attitude and body, she's a perfect 'woman in charge' and isn't shy about letting others know about it.
I also feel that she and Erik would be great together with time, they have a good raport going, and I feel like she would love and protect him once they develop true feelings for one another, she'd be ready to massacre anyone who tried to hurt her husband XD
Plus she would not be shy in the bedroom, as shown, and while desiring her own pleasure I could see her also reciprocating, plus your description off her makes her sound rather attractive, even if she is considered plain, her personality combined with her looks, make her appealing.
She seems like behind all the fighting and violence, she is a lot more down to earth and not as stuck up or demanding, and how she and Erik actually converse and talk to one another.
So yeah, this is me just hoping you do return to this story one day, and putting my vote and desire in for Eva to be his bride and final choice, let him have a sexy warrior princess at his side....or above him XD
YES!! Welcome back Trial and Error.
Love that you're writing more for this story once again, and this chapter was great XD
Erik can't catch a break even around fairies, and I love that he wound up as a foot rest here.
Once again, as mentioned in my previous reviews, I still put my vote up for Eva Redfist as his endgame for marriage, there was something about her that just stood out and I really loved their interaction.
Another fantastic chapter to a great story :)
Erik can't catch a break around anyone really, even the nicer ones haha. Ah well, what doesn't kill you and all that.
Ironically the most violent of his suitors was also the most least likely to smug him for amusement. Funny how that works. Happy you have enjoyed the story though!
Great chapters focusing on Erik and Iona here.
It was interesting seeing him with an older/mature woman. That definitely shook the dynamic up a bit. As well as the fact she shrank him even smaller than his normal height, so he was truly a bug before her.
You handled her character well, she really viewed him as a plaything or toy for her amusement, the way she cut him off by flexing her toes and with that action alone proved her dominance over him so completely to the point he realized he had no choice but to clean her toes and that his arguments meant nothing to her, his words having no effect or consequence.
The inshoe description and scenes were also well done, you really described the scene well.
I am so happy you're once again writing for this story, I hope your muse keeps up :D
Thanks! Happy to hear you enjoyed it and yeah, I'm one that has grown to appreciate more confident and mature ladies in size. Certainly has a lovely spice to it.
A student must spend his summer imprisoned and shrunken as punishment for his failing grades while trying to suppress his burgeoning foot fetish around his unsuspecting family.
I only recently found this story, but damn is it good.
Your description of his family members feet, and his experiences at them, the feeling, the smell, the size. All represented so well here.
I have seen you posted a story recently on here too, so I am hoping you decide to return to this one, it's such a great read.
Definitely deserves some more chapters.
Ben Cutler is in pursuit of his dream career and he is presented with an opportunity to work with one of the best lawyers in the field. However, her mentorship ends up being more than he was expecting and he finds himself wondering if it was such a great opportuity after all.
I am so glad to see you writing again!!! Welcome back :D
Always love seeing your stories updated. I definitely think you should continue!
Also would love to see an update on "Our Little Secret" XD That cliffhanger you left with Kyle and the russian model in that story was such a tease.
Thanks for the kind words. I wish I had more time to write. It is hard to choose which stories to work on, but I need to start ending some of these haha. I will eventually get around to OLS. Thanks again!
A year into his house arrest, Scott Stevens is placed in shrunken criminal rehab, with the possibility of becoming his mother Judy’s permanent shoe slave. Faced with serious girlfriend troubles, a never-ending parade of greedy bare feet, and an increasingly powerful little sister, he’ll need all the help he can get.
Re-Reading this story (and series) for the....I can't recall how many times. And I feel I need to leave a comment specifically here.
And I have to say I do hope you come back to it/finish this saga one day in the future.
It's just so freaking good.
I love the gradual but powerful development of the characters and the situation Scott is in just keeps devolving for him.
I have to say, loving the scenarios where he's with the middle aged women (especially their wine addled adventures XD)
But Sylvia has me intrigued, another older woman. But one who's use of Scott isn't as bad, or the very least, she's not actively making it as bad as some of the others.
She's one of the few ' lighter' characters in terms of their treatment of Scott.
But this chapter I keep coming back to as it has me hooked, what is Syliva's plans, what can she do to Judy, what can Scott do if he decides to spill the beans.
I know Judy seems to be on a power trip and is dreaming high.
But could Sylvia be a way out for him...a way out from the torment, of the seemingly never ending (kinky XD) but forced subjegation at the hands of Nancy, or his mother's seemingly aloof nature. (and her own subjegation of him, albeit less erotic in intent)
Sylvia has me intrigued, and I love it. And I enjoy reading her character and her interaction with Scott.
Your writing is always a treat, and a gift, your description, your characters, your erotically charged segments, intercut with the worldbuilding, all make for a wonderful read.
And I do hope you come back to this series in future. I feel it needs a nice cap off. (and Justice for Scott XD I may not get it, but I can dream)....and for some reason, I keep picturing Judy and Nancy under Sylvia's feet.
Witness Jack's perspective on life as a 2-inch tall teenager.
I cannot wait to see Katelyn's reaction to finding out Jack came all over her toes.
Please let her discover it!
I have just caught up on this story, and I am loving it. Great content (especially feet wise)
Great work :D
A story of a professional and a new hire in a highly erotic field.
I hope she's not a permanent sexy toy for her friends and sorority.
But having her their temporarily, and having them see their friend as a pleasure toy, and living sex aid would be great.
Again, I personally hope she's not stuck with them forever, but some temporary fun is definitely something I'm looking forward to seeing.
I really need to remember to review this story (I've been reading it for awhile, but my review ethic can sometimes waver)
Great work on this, am excited to read more.
Permanence is not in the cards, even if the end is uncertain, so don't worry!
Reviews are whatever. I'm just glad you enjoy the story!
Set around twenty years after the end of BFG Angleland the daughter of Sir Tucker and Jessica makes her own way in life. She wishes to be a knight like her father and her nine foot body and skill with a blade might just do the trick.
What happened to "The accidental tower" ?
That was such a great story :(
Inspired by 'Life in an Aquarium' by faaaks. A series of different stories based on his expanded Gullivers travels mythos. Extreme size differences are a common theme. Feel free to leave any suggestions in the reviews.
Size relations run high in tension for the people of the Prodigan United States. Girls who wish to be bigger, men who power trip on the smaller, authorities who abuse their position. Anything could happen.
Microputians < Lilliputians < Gulliverans < Brobdingnagians < Prodigans
Would love a follow up to this chapter :)
My girlfriend wants her and I to visit her younger sister across the country, but airline flights are too expensive for us at the moment. But there's a cheaper way to travel...
[Emphasis on hands and feet, and accordingly, fingernails and toenails. me 1/8th of an inch tall.]
[June 5th Update]: I was bored and drew a crude layout of Grace's apartment here:
https://i.imgur.com/R5McPM3.jpg
[June 6th Update]: I'm done. I wrote most of this while drinking, so if there are any big mistakes in the writing, grammar or story-wise, I'd love to hear about it in the comments so I can fix them. Thanks for reading, all you guys supporting the scene are great.
Hope we get a sequel, this story rocked
Unfortunately for her, Jackie has to take the "bus" after work to get home.'
*EDIT 07/16/20* Updated Chapters 10 and 14 AKA the ones that needed fixing. As well, some more chapters coming in the next few days. Keep on the look out for those, trust me when I say you don't want to miss them.
I am anxious for what Jackie is going to go through, and am still pining for the golden pair that is Jackie and Marleigh.
Kali!!! Arghhh, she's going to make me despise her, I just know it.
Another great chapter of this story however, and it does make me excited (and anxious XD) for more to come.
Kali!!!!!
ooof, I am both excited (for the feet content) while also pained that Jackie is being forced into this position by this bitch.
I am on the edge of my seat with excitement, and desire for Kali to get punched in the face.
You've done a fantastic job at keeping me hooked as always.
