I like that you can tell the differences in personality between Chloe and Carly. And even know you'd never have Chloe kill Jack, I like that it has to be a real concern for him because she could simply get too carried away during one of her games or lash out in a fit of anger.  

And also agree with another persons mentioning of the Freshman. Would love to see that picked up, if even for one final chapter, since you have said you are having difficulty finding inspiration, maybe just finish it off with a most unfortunate ending for Peter, it certainly didn't look good for him the way the last chapter ended. Just a thought.

Brilliant story Jack. What happened to Carly though? Not like she can be sent off to prison. Maybe the nut house? Actually, that might not be a bad story idea! Think about how much trouble shed be in, stuck with a bunch of other looneys! However, I like Carly too much to witness her going through that torture, she might be my favorite character ever, damn I wanted her to win! lol. You definitely surprised me with this ending, your stories consists of mischievous cruel giantesses, I wasn't expecting a gentle ending. Definitely a testament to your writing abilities to make me give a damn about how it all played out. So many of these stories are read just for the juicy parts but you made people actually interested in the story itself. Well done.

Uh oh, been 17 days since the last update, has anyone been in contact with Jack? He hasn't even responded to the reviews which is very unusual. Hope this one doesn't get left in limbo, I created an account just to comment on it! If any writer deserves a break it's Jack, the way he generated chapters was ridiculous, just hope this one doesn't fall into the bottomless pit of unfinished stories, it's too good to be left incomplete. 

Oh well, if this is the end, I'm just going to pretend the last scene didn't happen, i could live with that ending :D

Fantastic! Took 5 long years to break him but she finally did it. Carly is one of my favorite characters ever. Sophie better not screw this up! I think Carly is too smart and will be ready for Sophie, plus now Jack wants to stay with Carly, so that adds an interesting twist to any attempted rescue. Going to be very sorry to see this one end.

Carly should have been using these kind of methods all along instead of trying to make Jack see how much better off he is with her rather then someone like Jenny. Sure, if the choice was between Jenny and Carly I'm sure Jack would pick Carly every time. But when the choice is between Jenny, Carly and freedom, well of course he is going to choose freedom. Carly's delusional thinking has cost her some valuable time, time that could have been spent extracting that password with methods such as the one she is using now. Personally, I would have sung that password the moment I saw the ice cream appoaching, that's going ot be brutally cold, and tossed in the freezer to boot! Can't wait to see if Carly can break Jack or not.

Ahhh, back where he belongs. Maybe this will teach Carly not to be so careless with her things. The situation is getting risky for Carly, too many people finding out about Jack and she isn't even aware Sophie knows yet. I don't think a verbal warning to Chloe is sufficient, I see another tiny pet for her in the future, that will keep her quiet. Then Carly and Chloe can even have play dates with their toys! Going to be interesting to see how you tie this up.

Even with her world about to crumble all around her, Carly is still the master manipulator. Glad to see Carly still has a few tricks up he sleeve. She's one of my all time fav characters. 

I admit it, I have no idea how this is going to turn out, this is one heck of a story! 

Some of us love Stella, well, Adam X and myself anyway. Hope to see more of her.

Cary and Jimbob, this story has been a gentle giantess fans dream, Peter has barely endured anything! Let Jacksmith throw Adam and I a little action our way once in a while ;)

Author's Response:

It's definitely mainly a gentle story, but rest assured Peter will find himself in more sticky situations before it's over.

Wow, don't know who that was but wondering if they were aware that coud have killed Peter if he wasnt discovered.Must have been the same person who deposited him in the Tuba? Think that was the instrument? I don't think it was Mandy either, I think shed be much more likely to stuff him in her pocket and take him home.

You've crafted a very realistic tale here, Im usually detached from the tiny and fine if they meet their demise but I'd actually feel bad for this kid if that happened to him.

Of course, I still love the rough treatment, hope there is plenty more of that ;)