Just a little guy lookin' for love.
Turn-ons: Anal, gas, insertion, pubic hair, being put in panties, and stories with happy endings.
Turn-offs: Feet, vore, straight-up torture (i.e., fire, burning, electricity, etc.), and the main character dying.
Jennifer's brother visits her sorority for a weekend where he gets the royal treatment.
Love it! Have you considered doing another story like this, because this site really doesn't get much good butt stuff. It's mostly feet and vore.
Would you at least think about doing another story like this, maybe with a little farting, or full insertion?
A few months ago I actually wrote brief outlines for 3 more parts to this story, each part would be a new day for the weekend, except part 2 which would be a continuation of the first night.
I may never end up writing them, but there are a few parts in the outlines that might make me deeply consider returning. Probably not for a long while though. Right now I'm focused on three giant stories that take up most of my giantess writing time.
A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.
I love what you've done so far, but the market has been completely saturated with feet material. Can't you do something else? I mean, at some point Jack HAS to be inserted somewhere! Vagina, asshole, armpit, I don't care! Just something other than feet.
the main reason i stick so heavily to feet and mouthplay, etc, is that in particular, vaginal, anal, and armpit insertion all those things that have a very negative effect on my ability to write these stories. i mean no disprespect to people who enjoy those genres, but to me they're kind of a gross-out, so i avoid them
No! I was starting to like Chloe!
This was... interesting. The story has pretty much devolved into foot, crush, repeat, hasn't it? If there is going to be something more, please inform me. I do have other options in whacking material.
i normally see no need to defend my stories, but as long as we're taking unnecessary swings at each other's respective preferences, if this story's devolved content isn't getting you your fix then i encourage you to go find a clogged toilet tale to get it. nobody would blame you
YES! I want that Carly bitch to die!
Or maybe enter into servitude under Princess Chloe...(emphasis on under)
See what you can do.
Come on... lets see that bitch Carly burn!!
She either has to die, or enter into servitude under (and I do mean under) Princess Chloe. Either way would be deeply satisfying.
You know, I have to say, I'm not normally into the whole foot genre, but you've made me give it second thoughts. You're one hell of a writer.
Worth. The. Wait. Thanks a zillion!
A fitting end, if you'll pardon the pun.
Okay, I'm sure you're seeing this a thousand times already, but if you do do a spinoff, can Carly PLEASE be Chloe's pet? We never really got to see any of her perversions, and we're all dying to know.
So, think about it?
we're sort of treading on tricky ground with chloe. even though it is just a story and i'm not necessarily sexualizing chloe herself, simply the GTS concept she's participating in, some people get kind of sensitive when kids get tossed into these stories in any way, so i need to be careful there. chloe will make another appearance in the spin-off, though, as will carly.
A young 16 year old shrinks. Join him on his little adventure.
(dramatically) Dun dun dunnnnnn!
This is, and I am being serious, like a really good movie. Just when you think you know what's going on, everything changes!
I eagerly await the next installment.
Awwww.... a fitting end. I loved this story from start to finish, and I'd like to thank you.
That being said, I'm not fully certain there's anywhere you can really go with the story after this, barring something cheesy, so I'd recommend starting anew with something from the Challenge section.
But I'm not a professional writer. Whatever you do is up to you, and I'm sure you'll make the right choice either way.
Sorry for the long comment. Good story!
Yeah, the vore wasn't all that good... but no one really cares. There's literally hundreds of other stories like that on this site.
What this story has is a fascinating plot! Nicely done.
Intriguing...
I had thought the story might be drawing to a close, what with him growing and all, but this mysterious stranger adds a whole new level of story to the mix.
In case you didn't feel like reading that, Nice Job!
This is turning into an amazing story! I mean, I normally don't follow stories with this much feet, but this is fantastic! The emotion, the revenge, the sheer terror you just know the rapists are feeling...
Fucking fantastic man!
So now he's back with his momma? And she's grown a tad? Hmmmm.... I don't know what to expect, butt I know it won't be pretty.
Thanks for the review! Was the "butt" mispelled intentionally? or was it just a typo? lol.
Ah, the best dirty writer since Shakespeare updates again, and our favorite little boy gets lost once more. I know something good is cuming up.
And no, I never misspell.
I love the progress you've made, but I feel like the foot thing has gotten a little worn out. There's only so many ways you can say "he was in her feet."
If I was you, I'd try to branch out a little more, and maybe do some more butt stuff. Those parts of the story were by far the best. Please do more butt?
Thanks for the review! I totally agree with you. I've also noticed that I've been doing a lot of feet lately. But don't worry, now that he's with Samantha I plan to make him do much more than just play with her feet. If ya know what I mean ;)
I do hope he eventually gets back with Becky. She just made anal insertion seem so... pleasant. You got the feeling that he liked going up her ass. I do hope he gets the chance to go up again.
Nice work! You're working fast on this thing. I love what you've done with the most recent chapter, and I appreciate you bolding the good (although you said bad) parts. Keep it up man!
