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Mother Changes His Answers by lilevil Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

A short story about a mother who stumbles upon her son's fantasy to transform into a thong for a week while reading his results on a goofy "online personality test". Mildly perturbed by what she reads, she decides to spare the world her son's dirty answers, but unintentionally ends up having way too much fun rewriting his answers in a way she finds much more funny. Unfortunately for him, she has no idea how real the test is, let alone the consequences of her changes.


This story is in every way a simple rewrite of an incredible caption done by JustAnBox on Deviantart. I highly suggest reading his version especially if you'd prefer the premise to revolve around a sister and pantyhose instead! Here is the link: https://www.deviantart.com/justanbox/art/Changing-His-Answers-926797626


Categories: Object, Adult 30-39, Unaware, Mature (40-49), Butt, Incest, Maternal, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3144 Read Count: 12325
[Report This] Published: October 28 2022 Updated: December 01 2022
Reviewer: Poe00069 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Changing His Answers

Hi!! 

Your writing style is great, I very much enjoyed it. If you are still looking for feedback on whether or not to continue, I vote that a chapter 2 would be awesome, with POV imagery and very slow realization of what went wrong, and where he actually is.

Thank you!! 

Reviewer: Poe00069 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Changing His Answers

Great Second Chapter!

Love how the turned up sensory settings are already overwhelming him! And how the permanent transformation makes him unreturnable.

That his mother is going to source of his "destruction" is perfect for this HorrorPorn Sub-Genre.

Thanks!!

Life in the Community Chest by Rose Saxon Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

He lost nearly everything to preserve his private life; now he lives in a Monopoly box, and his life belongs to her. One night, she decides to host a game night, with him as one of the game pieces. He was prepared for another night of humiliation, but there's one (small) catch. These giants look very familiar…

Edit: This entry was previously meant to be an ongoing anthology, but I've decided to leave the stories to stand alone, while I link them using the site's series function instead. In the long run, this will likely be easier to manage.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Couples, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Small Scale Studies
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10232 Read Count: 12571
[Report This] Published: December 03 2022 Updated: February 02 2023
Reviewer: Poe00069 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Life in the Community Chest: Part 1

Hi, 

I love this style of erotica writing and much prefer it to the more "rapid porn" styles that are typical in the genre. You directly touch on how the problems that contributed to the failures all of his previous relationships have not been addressed in part 4, by his silence (however at the current size can anyone hear him at all?), I'm dying to see how that plays out with the the rest of the more visceral reactions that are in store for him. His current size was a little difficult to figure out, afaik monopoly pieces are only 1/4 inch high.

Please continue!

Thank you!

po

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.