When shrinking is finally possible, you volunteer to be your sisters toy for the holiday
Love it! Hope to see more soon, I love how she dropped the gummy bear in her panties! Can't wait till it's actually him, I hope she stays cruel and does go soft after he does shrinkl.
Amazing story, really hope it wasn't abandoned.
Your long time friend is about to move several hundred miles away from you, and it looks as if you missed your chance to tie the knot with her. By a twist of fate, you shrink and fall into her purse, and are unawarely taken with her when she moves! Things only get worse when she finds you, doesn't recognize you, and has plans for your new life...
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I never would of guessed this was your first story, it's pretty amazing! I like how shes angry about ben and takes it out on heer slave not knowing its actually him. I'm not to crazy over feet but this story is still pretty damn good. Can't wait to see what else you do with this!
Dan lets his two female housemates in on his amazing abilities. He has no idea of the adventure he's embarking on.
Seems like a pretty good story so far. I hope he doesn't tell them his secret right away. He could have a little fun, maybe get stuck in a form, or get caught doing it.
I think we may be on a similar wavelength haha
It a story about a guy fallling in love with his old best friend
The story started off really great. I loved the what did she do to her ex boyfriend. I took it as a she shrunk him or somthing. Obviously whatever she did wasn't that big a deal as he wasn't scared of her or anything at the party. That was a real downpoint for me, I would of prefered a more sadistic break up, not a pathetic one.
At first I didn't care for the chapter length. I prefer a few paragrahs over the one or two. But you fixed that after chapter 2.
Obviously they seem to treally love each other but I'm not to crazy over gentle giantesses. I'd prefer situations where he's not to crazy over whats happening to him. Either she gets caried away or someone else gets him. Maybe even have some misunderstaning between them.
A man is in for the strangest day of his life.
Ireally liked! Wish there would of been more to what happened to him really make him suffer or maybe permant toy.
Follow the two teen Nerds Alex and Fred as they use a magic Lucky penny to posses and become anything. And see what thier two older sisters, Rachel and Anna, are completely unaware of.
Amazing story!
What was supposed to be the greatest night of his life takes a turn for the worse. It starts with some heavy ass material, but will include but not limit to: Foot, Boobs, Oral, Panty Entrapment, Face and Stomach Material. (Unaware Body Exploration Story)
First I'm very happy to see something from you again. What really caught me was the title, out of your choices I really like the one you chose. Hopefully you start from the beginning before he gets stuck. So far this seems to be a story I will keep my eye on. Great to see you back!
Thanks! I think you'll like the next chapter.
Thanks! I think you'll like the next chapter.
A high school senior with no future is shrunken will he find an opportunity for a new life or a quick route to death.
Most of this isn't very erotic for me, I really don't care for feet. My tastes lie more in butt, insertion and breasts. The chapter with Priya was really good. I prefer the dominant aspects, but the past relationship with angela is interesting. I'll definatly keep reading to find out whats actually going on because it's bugging me, lol.
I totally understand your sentiment and don't worry future chapters will have a greater diversity of erotic material including insertion and breasts. Also you reminded me that I have not included any butt material yet so I'll get into it in the next erotic part.
As for Angela she's not going anywhere and will return back into the story shortly
Originally I really liked this story. Then you added the prologue. Before it was a simple, his friends shrunk I assumed probably sold him or somthing. But you added the new first chapter where theres kevin. Now they shrunk josh instead of kevin because they were told to. Then theres the whole don't say your josh your kevin now.
Now I am interested it's definatly got me thinking and wondering whats happening. So keep it up can't wait to learn more.
Thank you for supporting my story stargate1990 It's good to hear that your really interested into whats going on.
I'm really sorry about all the confusion It's just that this story is part of a series i'm writting and as I'm still planning said series I can't risk throwing to many plot details out there and then have to live with them throughout the entire series.
I can tell you that I will start getting more in depth as to why he was shrunken, taken, and saved and for what reason(s) in about two more chapters. i just gotta finish things up with Paige first.
Look foward to reading a comment from you again.
Jack's best friend calls him over for a day. He stays alot longer than that. She's got a secret to show him, one that he'll surely NEVER forget.
I love the change of attitude. He's finally getting what he wanted, too bad he doesn't want it anymore. I really hope to see more reluctance from him and more persistence from her. Please keep the chapters coming!
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Follow Jake, a half inch tall teenager as he adjusts to his new home life at his new shrunken size. In a world where a rare few are shrunk by a virus, and in which the shrinkees are typically abandoned or put out of their misery, Jake thought he was "lucky" to be going home with his family from the hospital, however, his three older siblings, a brother and two sisters, and their mother, might not have his best interests at heart as they each deal with their little brother in a variety of ways.
I really loved skylar, I'd love to see something with her for an ending. It doesnt necassarly have to end with his death maybe have her pretend he's dead and keep him as a sex toy. It could also be interesting to see him die with her anal beads or a butt plug.
A story that Smushed Boy on Deviantart asked me to write, here is a link to his art: http://smushedboy.deviantart.com/
You take on the character of Kyle who works at a spa that shrinks people down for the female clientele. One of your regulars rents you for the night and adventure ensues.
I can't wait for the next chapter! Much prefer the younger character vs the older woman. This is a great story can't wait till he finds out he wasn't rented, maybe he won't even find out, stuck with Emily maybe passed to her friends or a nice little sex toy for her room! I really hope you go beyond feet, it's not one of my personal favorites. By expanding on this you could draw in more people and maybe this story will really get the attention it deserves. This story is pretty amazing just keep up the good work!
Hey thanks! Feet are pretty much my main fetish, but I am working on a sequel, I'm hoping to have at least one chapter on insertion and one mouth related, it will take awhile because I'm working on my PhD right now...
Rob gets a lot more than he bargained for when he shrinks in front of the sorority house filled with beautiful young women.
This story is really great you should really continue it.
After falling victum to a terrible shrinking accident in High School, Adam is kept for many years by his high school sweetheart Jennifer. It has now been 10 years and Jennifer is moving on with her life. She is now married and trying to have children. She can't keep Adam around forever...
Please continue i also want to hear what happens!
So this is a story about a guy named Mark. He's a really big pervert, and always takes advantage of every girl he sees. However, he soon gets what he deserves. But what might happen if he is punished for the rest of his life?
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This is really an amazing story, it's about time you posted it here! I really hope to see other stories from you.
He just cant stop thinking about her and her greatest Asset. Through a string of unique events, he gets his wish, but the ending is not what he expected.
Awsome, 3 months very long wait! But I love this story so it's sort of worth it. Can't wait to see what you do with ??? and what will happen to the little pervert in this story!
I think you'll like it
Another gem! I just hope you get carried away and continue writing, I really like this story and I would rather not see it end so soon. Amazing work, I'll be wating anxiously for the next chapter!
I just added 300 more words so hopefully that will help you out in the meantime!
I hope I get carreid away too. these past 2 chapters were originally oging to be under 1000 words and now there close to 4,000! the problem is theres not much more to add to the story. I already have the ending in my head and its what your expecting and not what your expecting at the same time
While I'm anxiously waiting, I'm also dreading the next chapter. Will it actually be the last chapter, or did you get carried away? This is an amazing story, I'd be a little disappointed to see it end. I really love this story!
Thanks! I hate to see it end too, I enjoyed writing it. Theres at least 2 left
It is amazing how much you can describe this and she hasn't even found him yet! Brining up the "what if" was great. You could probably do a chapter on each of the other girls if you wanted to! But now finally we might actualyl get some interaction. Wonderful story!
