Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed
December 09 2014
Chapter 19: TEMPTATIONS
This was a wonderful chapter! I love how you put some of our comments in and we got there reaction. I wish you would of got el_rootos comment. Hopefully you can still add it, "I for one welcome my new "cheeky" overlords!" Id love to see there reaction to that one.
-While typing that I though maybe your next story should be like this where you implment comments, It was definetly interesting getting a reaction from the characters-
Hopefully the next chapter is spectacular, this was a great story! It sure is a shame to see it go, but I am looking forward to your future work!Author's Response:
oh trust me, i really wanted to put el_rooto's in there!
Im not sure if it will have a place in the last chapter, but I'll see if I can fit in there...in fact..I dont think there'll be any reason why not :)