In an all new story, I shrink myself to spy on cheerleaders in the shower, but what'll happen when I stay shrunk?
Wonderful story,This new chapter takes it to a whole nother level. I love alex, Can't wait to see what she has in store for him if he survived. Great story hope to see much more!
My beautiful upstairs neighbor has a new security system that can shrink any intruders. At first I find it terrifying, but later on... exhilarating.
[July 27, 2013: Chapter 6 added. Story ended]
Wonderful story, disappointing ending. I HAte feet yet even though thats the main focus it's a great story. I wish it could of been expanded to other categories. I loved the whole security system, I wish she would of mistoke him for a theif. The ending was rather disappointing could of been expanded on. Would be nice to see whats going to happen to him now.
You babysit a friends sister while thier parents our out of town when you shink. It doesn't help that the sister hates you.
I really loved your story, I wasnt't to into the piss and poop stuff but It was really good. Hope you do more like this! I especially liked tthat she was aware the whole time and the ending.
Your girlfriend is having a sleep over with two of her girlfriends. You aren’t invited but your friends convince you to crash it. What could go wrong?
Can't wait to see what happens to him. Love your stories hope you keep making more! Just one suggestion let him live, have her do somthing horrible and he survives and she finds out its really him or thinks hes just a toy or somthing. You don't need to kill all them off all the time, somtimes leaving them survive makes it more excitinbg for your readers because they can imagine what will happen to him after! Will this be the rest of his life, how long will he survive, will he return to normal?
You and your classmates are coming home from a football game when you all shrink by a little girl who likes to play sick twisted games with little people.
I loved the previous stories better, this one was alright. I hope you continue making stories, your really good!
Your girlfriend is a sweet girl who wouldn't harm a soul, but what about her sister...
I actually like he got taken to camp, not to crazy over the whole family finding out he's shrunk. Still can't wait for the rest!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Love your work, sorry I dont review often but keep it up!
This one looks really good, can't wait to see what happens!
About 8 years after being rescued, you return back to visit Sarah's family. Everything is fine until an accident brings you face to face with your worst nightmare.
Cant wait to see what happens now!
Meet Becky and Dan. Formerly boyfriend/girlfriend, both are beginning to accept their new roles in what seems to be a pet/master relationship after Dan mysteriously shrinks to just under an inch. Becky's opinion of the situation is unusual...and her interest in what she calls "Scent Reprogramming" is alarming! To make matters worse,Becky's life and opportunities begin to change and she is eventually forced to seek help from a friend of hers...
Almost 5 years, and your first story, hard to believe! I loved the ending. Bring his hopes up, sort of, then have it crash around him. A follow up would be nice, But I loved it anyway. Hopefully we see something else from you sometime soon.
I definatly can't wait for the next chapter, finally got to the good stuff, this chapter was great! I just love Brittany!
This was a wonderful chapter! I love how you put some of our comments in and we got there reaction. I wish you would of got el_rootos comment. Hopefully you can still add it, "I for one welcome my new "cheeky" overlords!" Id love to see there reaction to that one.
-While typing that I though maybe your next story should be like this where you implment comments, It was definetly interesting getting a reaction from the characters-
Hopefully the next chapter is spectacular, this was a great story! It sure is a shame to see it go, but I am looking forward to your future work!
oh trust me, i really wanted to put el_rooto's in there!
Im not sure if it will have a place in the last chapter, but I'll see if I can fit in there...in fact..I dont think there'll be any reason why not :)
BRITTANY,
Who cares what your friend thinks, If you want to do it so badly just do it!
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Great story, Can't wait to see how it wraps up!
Casey accidentaly shrinks her older brother. At first she doesn't know what to do, but pretty soon she realizes that she can have some fun with him.
Loved it , just wish you would of stretched it out a bit. Amazing work!
Jake is the youngest member of an all girl family, two devious older sisters and an overly protective mother. If he thought his home life was rough before, how bad will things get when he shrinks thanks to a freak accident and is at the mercy of all three of them, each with their own feelings towards him, and with their own method of coping with his new situation.
First off I apologize for whoever rudely commented last time to make you stop. This story is really amazing, I love Skylar so far and the older sister could be interesting. This story has a lot of potential. I’m not too crazy over feet, but for the beginning of a story its ok, I hope it escalates more. I can't wait for more, I hope you will continue!
Joy, a tiny person who lives in the the kingdom of Arcken during the Medieval era, has to find a way to survie from the rest of the world. Can she trust the princess of the lands, or is she as bad as the subjects that live there?
Not really somthing im interested in. One I dont care for shrinking sotries that are completly aware I like to keep it betwween the shrunken person and the giant, Two I also prefer real time stories not in the past or future.
This is just my personal opinion if someone wants this or if you want to write this it's entirly up to you. I'll just look forward to your next story!
Charlie wanted to propose to his long time girlfriend, so he headed to her job at school. Will everything go as planned...?
Hope to see more sammy!
Now this story sounds interesting! Can't wait to see what you will do!
When shrinking is finally possible, you volunteer to be your sisters toy for the holiday
Very Happy your back! Your doing an amazing job. But also agree with the previous review, it would be nice if he wasn't completly liking the experiance maybe have a few things he doesn't want to do.
Thanks! In retrospect I think you are right.. Maybe I'll change it, or try to make him more reluctant in the next chapter.
Love it! Hope to see more soon, I love how she dropped the gummy bear in her panties! Can't wait till it's actually him, I hope she stays cruel and does go soft after he does shrinkl.