A man likes a woman too much for his own good.
I'm new here and see that this one has been around for a while. I really enjoyed it and have an idea for a similar story on my "to-do" list. I think it's always cool when you have an idea like this and then see someone else present something similar. It's good to know that you're not the only one thinking of these things.
Good story. Very well done. I see that this story has been posted for a long time now. I am curious if you have considered writing a bit of a sequel in which Amy gets a chance to make Sabrina pay for her gaffe?
A Young girl fancies herself a super-villain, but first she needs to take care of her caped nemisis, Supergirl.
***Please note that this was not originally my idea for a story, the concept was borrowed from a single chapter unfinished (i think) story i found here a couple of years ago, i have simply made it my own and finished it ***
This is not my usual style of story telling, but i think it might apeal to a fair amount of people. A total of 10,797 words of smut, porn and fearsome amounts of sadistic torture (okay, that last part IS my usual style ^_^ )
I enjoyed the methodical and deliberate torment that Rhonda put SG through. And any story that ends with vore can't be that bad! I hope you'll add more stories in the coming months!
Great story. Sometimes I really like these short and to the point stories, and this one was a lot of fun to read. Great job. I plan on working my way through your other stories as well.
This was one of the first stories that I read after joining the site. Consequently it'll be one that I always remember. Cruel women and tiny men...what's not to like?
Thanks FGF. It was a fun story. I appreciate the high rating.
A tale to tease the mind.
Amanda, another fantastic story. In reference to your comments before the story, I wish my wife did look at me the way you look at men! Maybe I should be careful what I wish for, right?
Who knows what dark thoughts lurk deep inside our minds eye....maybe your wife does have plans for you??....a personal urinal??...a fantasy that could easily become a reallity for you.Or maybe a meal for her,do you really know what we think?...men are so gullable...easily led...be careful what you wish for F.G.H it become a reality for you....
Amanda xxx
Great read! I really enjoyed this one and hope you will be adding more to your work here on this site. Thank you for sharing this little gem with the rest of us!
This is going to be pretty Big. come and read about the individual fates of at least one hundred people.
I'm not sure if you meant this to be comical (the thought of humans being messily devoured alive certainly shouldn't be comical) yet I found myself laughing as I read this! And I mean that in a good way, I enjoyed your story. I do hope you'll continue the piece. It would be interesting to see where this ends.
Teachers pet can be a dangerous position to be in.
I absolutely enjoyed this one, as I have many of your other stories. I think it's awesome that you have these fantasies. It gives charge to your writing. I'm starting to have fantasies about being about 2" tall and alone in a room with you.... ;-)
Hello F.G.F not visited for the longest time, i still dream of these things, long for them.....
dreams fade into mist they float along aimlessly until man makes them a reality....i wait ...hoping that the day will come,a day where woman will feed upon man.....one day all our dreams will becomen a reality...
Amanda xx
Well done. I hope that you will eventually finish the story. I am interested in seeing how this one ends.
Two missing parents, one hungry daughter. With feet?
I enjoyed the deliberate and methodical descriptions in your story, especially for the mother since her situation is a little more dire than the father's. It allows your readers to empathize with the character, or I suppose even grow excited about his/her demise. I hope that you will add another chapter. It seemed this ended with a note of resolve by the mother. I'd love to see how she's going to get out of this mess!
Thanks! Though I hope none of the readers are excited about the demise of either parent...lol. You'll know how things turn out for them both only a few short hours after I do, haha.
A depressed young man seeks psychological treatment, but ends up getting more than he bargained for when he shrinks in the office of Dr. Sandra Adams, who has a very unusual appetite.
Outstanding story. A pleasure to read, very descriptive, and a satisfying finish. I enjoyed reading it, and will work my way through your others as well.
thanks for the review, i hope you like anything else you read also
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A dysfunctional family learns to deal with each other in an unconventional manner.
A very good chapter. The methodical and deliberate torment that Tiffany is issuing her younger step-sibblings is incredible. I didn't think that Tiffany was actually going to go through with it, so I applaud your refusal to back down from writing a hard-hitting and tragic story.
So far I have really enjoyed this story. It is very well-done.
In response to your comments preceding the chapter, you are right, no decent human being would do such a thing. There are plenty of decent human beings in the world who would do the right thing. Sadly enough, there are plenty who would not. I think it is a reality of the human condition. Unfortunately there are those who seek to profit, gain, or simply derive pleasure from the suffering of those around them. I could elaborate but it is too philosophical a discussion for a review.
Meanwhile the story continues to draw me in. One thing I noticed though is that you have referred to Tiffany's blonde hair a couple times but at one point you say that "the brunette sat on the couch..." An easy fix.
This story is a blank slate. You can go in any direction from here. So much potential. My suggestion is that you just hammer away on your keyboard when you have writer's block. Maybe something will develop. I'll be checking in for updates!
I hope you'll add to this story. It was a great start and I think you would be able to turn it into something awesome.
I really liked the other story you posted as well, and am wondering if you have any others that you will be adding shortly. I certainly hope so!
A little rushed. Could have done a lot more with it, as it is an interesting concept. I would encourage you to revisit and enhance this story. "Prison Memoir" is a whole genre of its own and can be very effective when the convicted knows his fate is to be swallowed whole.
BTW: "Budget Cuts" made me laugh. Well played, sir.
A young boy in a secluded village is selected as the annual sacrifice to the land’s powerful and unforgiving goddess.
I liked it. Simple, to the point, descriptive. A good story all around!
Samantha has just finished with her freshmen year of college on scholarship. Unfortunately, she's not a fan of her teams mandatory birth control rule, and when she drops the pill, it takes something more with it. Now, she needs to find that little something before her train leaves for home.
This is a cool story and I like the concept. I found it tough to follow, though. That is something that a quick edit job can fix. Subject-verbe tense agreement was a problem throughout. Punctuation could improve. These things make the difference between someone glazing over it to get a general idea or actually taking it in.
Also, I have a question. Why did you choose to write in present tense? Not that there is anything wrong with that, but it is a challenging style to write in.
What happens when my girlfriend finds out about my fetish......and what she does about it.
UPDATE: I am constantly rewriting and editing my current chapters as I figure out better ways to express certain things and what I would need to add in to have things make more sense.
Good start. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who writes in 1st person here. I'll continue to follow and see how your story develops.
Thanks!