Reviewer: F_G_F Signed
November 12 2011
Chapter 5: Sanity Questions
So far I have really enjoyed this story. It is very well-done.
In response to your comments preceding the chapter, you are right, no decent human being would do such a thing. There are plenty of decent human beings in the world who would do the right thing. Sadly enough, there are plenty who would not. I think it is a reality of the human condition. Unfortunately there are those who seek to profit, gain, or simply derive pleasure from the suffering of those around them. I could elaborate but it is too philosophical a discussion for a review.
Meanwhile the story continues to draw me in. One thing I noticed though is that you have referred to Tiffany's blonde hair a couple times but at one point you say that "the brunette sat on the couch..." An easy fix. Author's Response: Thanks for your comments, this is a pretty deepe subject, I agree, maybe not something for a review...lol.
Glad you enjoy the story, your comments are always appreciated.