Reviewer: VelvetColossus Signed 



Date: March 15 2026
Title: Chapter 4: Hell
Seeing as this will is the final chapter, I'll just say, this was hot.
I love the way you describe the dirt, grime and horror in this story, the sheer dehumanization and cold disappearance of the care this god once had for her, which has not turned into sadistic hatred, but unfeeling disregard. It is also delicious to end it on hopelessness instead of death.
I wish I had someone dumb enough to send themselves over like that. Nah, I probably do, just need the tech.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you enjoy it! It looks like it really didn't resonate with too many others, but that's okay - it was a fun exploration of a few ideas and I'm happy with the result.
One thing I'll note - is it clear that the pet actually ever cared for Melanie? The hope was to make it abundantly clear that Melanie never really viewed her pet as a person, in so far as she never actually calls her her real name, and it's not clear that Melanie even knows it... but that the pet, at least now, objectifies her as well. She clearly has no issues exploiting, ruining and torturing a bitch's life even as she performatively acts as the uwu cute girl she usually pretends to be, so did she ever actually care for Melanie too and her feelings were left to rot, or was this always the true her?
Either way, I'm still happy to hear it hit the mark. The despair and hopelessness were definitely the centerpiece of what I was shooting for and glad it hit the mark.