Penname: breastclimber [Contact] Real name: David
Member Since: August 21 2023
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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author unless otherwise advised. No references or such of non public domain property were intentionally utilised in this work. No copyright infringement is intended. All characters are over the age of 19.

Exiled from his previous home, the corrupt Kingdom of Vascar. Leon vi Baster the squire is thrown into a new country. Where he is forced to integrate into a new culture and society where giantess roam and powerful beasts dwell. However he soon finds out his new life may not be so bad after all, as he begins anew with a new opportunity to become a better person. Stepping into a brand new political climate, Leon and his newly wedded giantess partner, try to change their society in a way never done before in its blood soaked history.

Additional Disclaimer: There may be some slight F/f content too in the future, it isn't tagged as it is not the focus. There is a side story to this one where it has more focus if you're interested.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Nose, Odor, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: World of Celessa
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 135566 Read Count: 41975
[Report This] Published: May 28 2022 Updated: April 06 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed
Date: April 01 2024 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14. An Avoidable Conflict III

Part III was very interesting.   Liked it!



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it. Hopefully you’ll like the last part of this series of chapters dedicated to the conflict as well!

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed
Date: March 24 2024 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13. An Avoidable Conflict II

So yeah, I did like this chapter a bit more.  Even seeing Ana and Leon at the beginning of the chapter helped a bit.    Maybe the other squad just put me off more.



Author's Response:

By other squad I’m assuming you mean platoon 3? If so, yeah. That’s fair enough. They’re made to be more rebellious and less prone to Ana’s ideology and way of thinking. More so representing the already present ideology of Ranate's culture that existed before. This chapter didn’t feature them, and Instead depicted platoon 1 and 2, which lack characters that are overly cruel. It’s understandable in disliking the platoon 3 members in that way. Though I will say, the next chapter will feature them heavily. 

Also, glad to hear you liked the Ana and Leon scene at the start. After these batch of chapters we should go back to the two! So that’ll hopefully be exciting. 



Author's Response:

By other squad I’m assuming you mean platoon 3? If so, yeah. That’s fair enough. They’re made to be more rebellious and less prone to Ana’s ideology and way of thinking. More so representing the already present ideology of Ranate's culture that existed before. This chapter didn’t feature them, and Instead depicted platoon 1 and 2, which lack characters that are overly cruel. It’s understandable in disliking the platoon 3 members in that way. Though I will say, the next chapter will feature them heavily. 

Also, glad to hear you liked the Ana and Leon scene at the start. After these batch of chapters we should go back to the two! So that’ll hopefully be exciting. 

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed
Date: March 18 2024 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12. An Avoidable Conflict I

Hmmm, I must admit I didn't like this last chapter as much as the previous ones.  I don't think it was the perspective shifting, but I really missed Ana, finding people like Rashtahl and forcing them to do what Ana wants.   This was one of the things I liked so much before is that Ana was even able to outdo Lisa.    So yeah, I missed that narrative touch of Ana's command to her people not being avoidable by them.   I did enjoy that Lavial was getting possessive with her little human, so I liked that bit.  



Author's Response:

That’s very understandable. However, it is a big conflict with multiple moving parts, I didn’t personally think it would make sense for Ana to have the main spotlight here. Overall, I do like having big conflicts as opportunities to focus on other areas that aren’t the main cast. Which I think is fair, considering the previous chapter was very intense with Ana. In that note, the next chapter also won’t feature her too much. 


The last chapter of the batch probably will  though. 

Thanks for reading! I know I took way too long with releasing this. 

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed
Date: February 19 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.

Are you going to come back to this story?  *Really* missing it!



Author's Response:

I’ve actually finished chapter 12, and am working on chapter 13 at the moment. Sorry for the lack of communication about it. I’d like for both chapters to be released close to one another to wrap up the war and conflict.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed
Date: December 24 2023 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11. The Human Experience

Really enjoying this story so far.   Maybe you should break the huge chapter into 2, so we can read a bit more.  :)



Author's Response:

The huge chapter may need to be divided into 2. As I’m not sure how I’d have all the planned scenes fit into 1 chapter. Regardless, glad you’re enjoying the story so far, despite some errors on my end with writing.

Summary:

A seemingly ordinary teenage boy is shrunken and kidnapped by the ant colony that lives in his own backyard. He soon discovers that the ants face a deadly threat he never expected-his own sweet little sister! 

He soon discovers an advanced technological insect world no human has ever witnessed before and realises that ants and humans may have more in common than he thought. However, there are darker forces at play and he soon discovers that his backyard ant colony is just one piece of the puzzle of a more significant chain of events. In order to discover the truth, he will have to venture out into the brave new giant world, bug-sized and face threats that he would have never cared about at normal size, including his family and friends.

How are the ants so advanced at a civilisation and cultural level? Where are they originally from? And are there sinister schemes at play?   

Ma15+: Contains frequent strong coarse language, complex, mature and political themes, graphic descriptions of violence, blood and gore, adult sexual references (not involving underage characters), pop culture references, 

I have actually had the ideas and concept for the story for a long time since I was 12 years old, but only now am I actually writing it 😅

Don't be shy to leave a review! 😊 I always respond to all reviews eventually.....

 


Categories: Legwear, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Animal, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Violent, Insertion, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92497 Read Count: 41893
[Report This] Published: July 30 2022 Updated: November 18 2023
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Little Monster

Hey there, I was going to wait for more of the story to be written before writing anything, but I have to say a few things about this story.

1) I love the imagination here.   I've seen some stories that use a mix of creature/humans to write some fun stuff, but you are using mostly unaltered insects here.  The idea of making an ant seem attractive somehow is really very good!

2) I love the scenery you have imagined.  Admittedly a lot of it is variants on real things, but you have put some very imaginative twists on how things are different.  Design/materials. etc.

3) I love how the information about stuff is being developed.   Gaia was a human, the ants are aliens.   Putting this kind of stuff in the story makes it interesting and adds a lot of great long term future story stuff into the mix.

4) I love that you finally had an erotic scene with the ant and the aphids.   I know it was a morality lesson, but hey I really do reading about giant/small interactions sexually, so I enjoyed that part of the story.   Maybe a gentle element can be added in later in this regards (flashback to Gaia maybe?) 

5) Keep up the pace.   I would be very happy to keep seeing updates on this story.   It is one that I will click on every day to see if an update happens.

One question, how long do you anticipate the story is going to be given what you have covered so far?  Any idea how many chapters you will have given your outline?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing 🙂

I have always loved the concept of talking sentient animals in stories which is what led me to create talking ants that live similar lifestyles to humans but also combine real anthill structural hierarchy and society. Most people focus on human-human interactions or anthropomorphic animals but I like to get creative with human-animal interactions. 

With the attractive ant I am assuming you are talking about Princess Penelope, yes she is indeed very gorgeous 😍. We are going to get more intimate with her anatomy later on...

I like to get very descriptive since I am creating a whole new hidden world and society so I am very glad you love the scenery. 

Gaia is coming up very soon and we are going to find out exactly who she is and how she found the ants in a chapter backstory. 

I am happy you liked the sexually explicit scene with the ant and the aphids. Usually, I focus on feet, crushing and vore macro interactions but I like to expand into more hardcore interactions as well. The ants and the aphids and the humans and the ants were also there to show the true size scale of life and insignificance. 

The next chapter should come up next month, hopefully. I have some preparation to do since I graduate from university at the end of the year but the next chapter is already 80% done. 

I am estimating this story will be around 30 to 35 chapters and  I will be writing this for a good 2 to 3 years based on my outline. But things get interesting so I recommend you stick around for the long haul......     

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed
Date: January 25 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Little Monster

Ok, my face has turned from red to blue to purple.

Any idea when you will get back to this?

Not to nag, just a huge fan of the story!



Author's Response:

Hi there 😄

I have had some major life changes but I am slowly cracking away at the next chapter. I also have other short stories planned as well this year which should be exciting. 

The next chapter should be out in around 2 to 3 weeks (hopefully). It's my best chapter I have written so far and contains a range of macro interactions 😊. It will also be my longest, lol. 

Summary:

For years Arthur dreamed about being shrunk and dominated by the powerful mages of the Elven realms, and his dreams came true when the Archmage Tyrael recruited him into her household. Now he serves as her live in manservant and shrunken toy on command, exploring his desires at the hands and feet of the Archmage and her apprentices. Life seems idyllic, until one day without warning Tyrael announces that they are embarking on a dangerous journey across the Human realms, and into the wilds in pursuit of a goal she won't reveal.

A story about an elven archmage on a quest with her favorite human, and all the kinky uses they find for shrinking magic along the way.


Categories: Odor, Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Fantasy, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25754 Read Count: 21396
[Report This] Published: June 10 2023 Updated: July 31 2023
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed
Date: October 17 2023 Title: Chapter 5: Emperors Gone By

(free proofreading).   I saw a lot of errors in your other newer works too.  If want me to do this for them too, I'd be happy to.  Once you fix these, let me know and I will delete this post.

Chapter 1

realeased / released


Chapter 2

working his toes / working her toes


red eyes appearing the dark / red eyes appearing in the dark


I’ve love a bed / I'd love a bed


Chapter 3


dragonscale weight too more / dragonscale weight took more


Chapter 4

naturally haver certain… instincts / naturally have certain… instincts

                                  or naturally have, er, certain… instincts


Chapter 5

nostalgia and loss thinking / nostalgia and loss, thinking


I read this as "loss thinking" the first time and was confused.


further into the much / further into the mulch (?)  Not sure if that is right.

Summary:

A Lilliputian girl who was been bullied all her life has been granted the greatest gift and opportunity, she won the Brobdingnagian Lottery. what will she do with her new life.


Categories: Adventure, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9064 Read Count: 24176
[Report This] Published: July 08 2023 Updated: March 13 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed
Date: February 22 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dream!

You posted the same chapter 3 times by mistake now.

Summary:

On their way towards Eron in hopes of riches and fortune, Garrick and Martin were captured by a giant named Liza. Liza keeps them imprisoned at her cabin for no purpose other than to satisfy her own perverted desires, all the while trying to teach them how to enjoy this new way of life. But Garrick won't give up so easily.

Will the duo escape and regain their freedom, or will Liza keep them in her clutches forever?


As the title suggests, this story is a sequel.


Categories: Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Insertion, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21578 Read Count: 23194
[Report This] Published: July 30 2023 Updated: February 10 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2024 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I really like how in this story and in the previous story you have really ramped up the stakes for our little protagonists.    I very much enjoy how you have devised situations that make sense for Garrick to escape, and I found the twist of slave 4 to be unexpected and very cool!

I realize this story is completed, but I am still looking forward to how things develop when Garrick gets to town.   How he can notify the guards without being caught by the corrupt guard.

Thanks for an interesting story with a great plot, and a real sense of adventure.



Author's Response:

Feels great reading your kind words, glad you like it!

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2024 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Aha! I thought Garrick might have trouble with Mia!   It's too bad he didn't come with the girl, but I like the way this is going so far.  Looking very much forward to reading more.  Hopefully the other two guards remember that Garrick is supposed to meet the officer.


Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11 2024 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well, I really enjoyed the 2 stories you posted on this website.   I liked the creativity of the "hardgum" mechanic, the plots to overcome it, and the eventual harrowing escape.    I thought the plotting of the story was really solid the entire way through.   It might have been nice to see some voluntary action at the end with the guards who believe in freedom of choice, but hey, it's a good solid ending.


Thanks for posting these here, really appreciate it.



Author's Response:

I also thought about adding something at the end there, but oh well. I figured Garrick was veeeery tired by that point.


Appreciate the words, happy you enjoyed it!

Summary:

Years after the events of Amazon Country the former lady Griselda has left the Queendom behind and has started over as a tavern keeper, deep in the Mannish lands. When a group of lizardfolk assassins storm her tavern, looking for an Amazon noble, she assumes them to mean her, and readies herself for battle... but instead they seize her barmaid, a young woman and orphan named Annie, who they insist is the lost scion of a powerful Amazon family. Now, on the run with Annie and the few friends in the world she has left, the disgraced former noblewoman must teach a girl who has never known the Queendom how to be an Amazon, and take her to reclaim her birthright.

A commissioned follow up story to Amazon Country following Lady Griselda, and her new protege, a girl learning the ins and outs of her new size and strength.

COMPLETE


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Amazon Country
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45952 Read Count: 9215
[Report This] Published: August 03 2023 Updated: September 09 2023
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2023 Title: Chapter 1: A Tavern Brawl to Remember

I have really been enjoying the Amazon stories.   Especially the original one where you used dreams as a mechanism for greater height with the priestess.   I was really hoping Dirk would marry her too early on because I wanted to see a dynamic between them all as more of an intimate trio rather than separating them out.

In this one I really like Annie even though she is so new at being an Amazon.  It's fun that you have a Dark Elf to shrink the humans with!

I have been in the process of reading your entire library of works, as I like the tone you set for your stories in general.   I even got my wife who isn't into GTS to read some of the stories in your short story collection and she liked them.   The GM witch, the succubus, the mile high story.

Anyway hope you keep writing, and OMG what a cliffhanger on this one!  Meanie!! lol.



Author's Response:

Yep this one's a literal cliffhanger almost lol. Anyways glad you and your wife are enjoying it, these Amazon stories are fun ones to write, lots of adventure and action to go with the smut. We will see a little of Dirk, Cora, and Cynthia by the end of this story, it's a sort of post-script for the original Amazon Country after all.

Summary:

Mika is a young archeologist with confusing and often absent memories of his childhood, often featuring a mysterious ruined temple in an impossibly large jungle. When he sees photos of the far flung Lemurian Jungle he realizes the secrets to his past are there, and sets out to find them. Now, in the jungle and waylaid by agents of a sinister conspiracy spanning his entire life, he finds his only friend in the world is a hundreds foot long man-eating Naga named Chloe, one who seems to be missing parts of her own memory. Can the two unlock the mysteries of their past? Will Chloe give in to instinct or will she and Mika find friendship, and more?

A commissioned story heavily inspired by Felarya starring a young man and a Naga, and their relationship as they explore the mysteries of a lost civilization.

The commissioner has requested updates every two weeks, so that's the expected release schedule.


Categories: Insertion, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Fantasy, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 139955 Read Count: 34444
[Report This] Published: August 11 2023 Updated: May 17 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Darkest Jungle

I found this latest chapter really elevating the story.   I'm not a huge vore guy (meaning that I'm not into it because it gives Chloe license to eat more bad guys), but I like that Mika and Chloe have come to a real understanding about her role in the world, in a way that makes sense given the characters, the world, and the background.   I appreciate the story for the plot and the relationships even if I am not into the particular kink that this story caters to.   I think you are doing a really great job on this story and I look forward to reading more!




Author's Response:

Thanks! There's a lot going on in this particular story, a lot of stories and art with giant Naga seem to brush off the vore by saying the people getting eaten are bad guys (or at least assholes) but I wanted to examine it a bit before jumping into that.

Summary:

The Stelans, a mostly female race of 20 foot tall women, conquered Earth and brought it into their Imperium decades ago. With it's abundant source of biologically compatible males, Earth managed to leverage itself into being one of the Imperium's most important commercial hubs, and almost all major Stelan corporations and organizations have offices in Earth's "Green Zones." Steven has lived most of his life outside of them, residing in human only areas, but now finds himself moving to one for his new job. Allura is a fresh immigrant to the blue planet, eager to advance her career and bag herself one of earth's men. How will each handle the culture shock of life in the Green Zone?

A commissioned story about giant office ladies from space


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, Maternal, New World Order, Odor, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 76168 Read Count: 94685
[Report This] Published: August 13 2023 Updated: May 09 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23 2023 Title: Chapter 10: Lodestar

Yay! So glad this story is back!!  I really like the conflict of desires, and the idea of compromise.   I also really love the breastfeeding scenes.    Maybe you'll get to insertion at some point too.



Author's Response:

Forgot to respond to this one, but thanks! I'm sure we'll get an insertion scene before the end.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2024 Title: Chapter 13: Amun Ra

This was a really fun chapter!   I like how Steven's imprisonment was written, and his relationship with the Old Kingdom woman.



Author's Response:

It's a more hostile relationship than he's used to, we'll see a little more of her before the end!

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed
Date: March 08 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Green Zone

Is this one on hiatus again?



Author's Response: Mostly due to my own irl scheduling issues, I should have a new chapter for this one this weekend or early next week sometime.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Green Zone

With every new chapter, I keep loving this story so much!   I am looking forward to more of the espionage plot, and am anxious to see how the conflict develops.   If you get to the point where they go off world, I would be excited for that too.   Great job, as usual!



Author's Response:

Thanks, we'll see the Stelan homeworld near the end of the story, we've got about 4-5 chapters left from here.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed
Date: January 31 2024 Title: Chapter 12: A Night at the Theater

Fun as always!

I know this is beyond the scope of your current plans,   but I would love to see the Old Kingdom do a surprise attack and actually temporarily win.   They could start converting earth males from bonded to non-bonded including Steven, and it would be up to Allura to save him!   

Just found one typo in this chapter:

error / fixed

glard / glared



Author's Response:

Typo fixed!

The Old Kingdom will make a move soon, and while they probably won't take Earth, they might take a certain Earth man...

Summary:

Two enemy soldiers, a human and a tiny, find themselves stranded on a deserted island. Though tensions are high, the two band together to survive, working together as they await a rescue that may never come.

A thousand miles out from the war embroiling their homes, perhaps their begrudging alliance can bloom into something greater.

Now Complete!


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Muscle, Odor, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48712 Read Count: 39080
[Report This] Published: August 19 2023 Updated: November 25 2023
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1. Lost

I really thought this story was the total package.  Good characterization. Good descriptions of the environment, and some really nice sex scenes.   I loved it!   I could tell that you spell checked and went over grammar, and I wish more people would do that too.   I will look for more of your writing in the future, keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm quite proud of how this one turned out. Hearing that my environmental descriptions were good makes me happy because I struggle with that more than the other two things you mentioned (though I'm glad you enjoyed those too!). I always proofread and revise every chapter before uploading it. I think doing so is kinda the bare minimum when sharing writing. I take pride in this stuff, and it'd bother me if it were full of errors (admittedly, I can't always catch everything during revision, but I try my best). Thank you for appreciating that.