I hadn't seen this story until you posted the latest chapter.   I really like the idea of this relationship, but I can't really see how Kelly wouldn't see herself as a Goddess.   Not only can she manipulate size, but now she is manipulating time itself?   Seems way more powerful in the latest chapter than in previous ones.   But that is not a criticism, I find it very interesting.   Also, I think in one of the earlier chapters she said something about eating the entire Earth?   I mean geesh, if that isn't god-like than what is?

I really enjoy how Kelly seems to be almost trying to seduce Mike by making him become more and more familiar with every "little" bit of her body.

Anyway cheers for coming back to the story!  I hope you decide to make updates a regular thing as this story has a lot of potential!

This is most plot heavy story I have ever read on this site, and I loved it!  All of the twists and turns in the story were great!

A couple of small points

1) Eren's role was really diminished at the end.   I mean I loved Jisoo throughout the whole story, but Eren was so dynamic in the beginning of the story, I was just a bit disappointed at the end that his role was even purposefully subverted because he would have wanted the diminuation?  (not sure that makes a lot of sense, but maybe having him more involved would have been more true to his character.)

2) When Jisoo gained all of her powers it would have been nice to see her take some small revenges on the worst of the worst people.    I know she was trying to deny she was a goddess, but come on, she totally was.

3) Jade's nanomachines were kind of forgotten, but they did touch Eren, and therefore when he was re-united with Jisoo they would have touched her.  I would have been fine with Jisoo seeing them and obliterating them with her godly powers, but it wasn't even mentioned.  Nor was Jade's fate particularly touched on either.  Maybe it would have been fun to have Jade try to control Jisoo in God mode, but have Jisoo obliterate the nanites, and turn them against Jade.

4) Eren and Jisoo's daughter was too "tame". I would have liked to have seen her enjoy her powers a bit more.  Not outright rebellion, but more like someone who wouldn't mind occasionally cheating on their diet.  I keep thinking about how the daughter might be a fun short story on her own.

5) The whole thing about Jisoo not being able to regrow people seemed a little far fetched when her power grew to be absolute.   I realize you wanted that for plot purposes, but maybe you should have just let it happen that way.

Despite these nits, I loved the story, really I did.  The only reason I mention these things is because of how much I got into the plot.  Really fun stuff!  If Eren had been more active at the end I would have given this a 10 out of 10.  I really viewed Jisoo and Eren as the two main protagonists of the story, and so that disappointed me a bit, but not enough to make this one of the best stories I have read here.

Wow, what an emotional chapter!   Great to finally get back into this story, thanks for writing more!

I keep loving this story!  I hope you find some time to work in spelling and grammatical fixes.   Here is the list for this chapter.

broken / fixed

appartement / apartment

fear of being found off / fear of being found out

wiggle into her toilets / wiggle into her toilet

for God’s know / for God knows

strop trying to ignore me / stop trying to ignore me

Like our parents were / Like our parents had

get back on her usual demeanor / get back to her usual demeanor

fish him out of their confine / fish him out of their confines

Small were already / Smalls were already

I didn’t knew she / I didn’t know she

you being here add to it / you being here adds to it

What did had told you / What have I told you

have to call sick / have to call in sick

con-con-consi-der / con-con-consi-ders

And if he remained here but that this Giantess terror killed or sent her sister to the hospital? / If he remained here, what what would happen if the Giantess terror killed or sent her sister to the hospital?

Wow, lot's going on in Chapter 17, love it!

As usual here are your fixes

bedrunk / be drunk

learnt / learned

get out of here in one place / get out of here in one piece

too far off a door / too far off from a door

full of peoples he now / full of people he now

got up to quickly / got up too quickly

gang he was a part off / gang he was a part of

who was couching blood / who was coughing blood

I really enjoyed this a lot and I am disappointed you never wrote the epilogue you spoke of.

I don't think the elves would think of this lightheartedly at all.   They all knew something was wrong for a long period of time and this would have explained it all.

In fact I think the mage with the religious text might realize it was a mistake to not share that religion with Marcus so that he would understand why they would never have hurt him in the first place.

Also I really like the idea of Marcus marrying.   I think that going into the details of that more would be quite interesting.  

I know it's been a while since you've gotten a review, but given how much I've enjoyed this story, maybe I can help light that spark to get you going on that epilogue, or maybe even a sequel better yet!

Cheers!

I really loved the solution at the end with the big scrying circle.   I noticed this story is marked as Complete:No, but you have an epilogue and everything.   Is that just an oversight?  It looks complete to me.

Ok, I saw the title of chapter 21 and that helped me a little bit.   I think I was so confused because the transitions between the past and the present day weren't very clear to me on the first reading of this chapter.   I guess if you are going to mix past with present, maybe you could try to delineate it a little more clearly.  Thanks!

So I am not exactly sure on how to make the font size changing thing work, but my guess is that you are pasting in from microsoft word?   Maybe you need to save the file separately as just text and paste in the text only version?

Part III was very interesting.   Liked it!