Hello LittleBigPlanet!

I've been following your story since the first chapter has been released and I gotta admit, this is THE story that keeps me coming back to this site. You inspired me to create this account, to write my own stories! (fun fact I had an account before but I deleted it 'cuz i was kinda ashamed of my fetish :/) Keep up the good work and good luck to you academically!

p.s. like what the previous reviewer said, more Asian Giantess content could be cool. I think you already have a potential candidate in the form of Max's classmate, Mei Lin Zhang! Would love to see her interact with some ants or, Max himself!

Hey LBP, been a while.

Contrary to the comment below mine, I believe Chapter 1 is quite peak, in fact, probably one of the best chapters you've written on this site. Some of the pop culture references you include are neat little period-appropriate references hehe and most of the times a reflection of your characters' mind, so, what they're thinking about. I'm afraid the set-up in Chapter 1 had me quite excited, not gonna lie. 

Maybe a bit too excited because I feel like Chapter 2 in the contrary was a bit more of a slow burn. It was by no means a terrible chapter but I just felt like the nightmare sequence was a bit too much and could have trimmed down a little bit. Like, I want to get to the action with the unaware Isabella and tinies, already.

Character development and exposition is definitely important but I feel like the sequence in Chapter 2 could have been shortened a little or you could have made this long nightmare a recurring thing instead.

Looking forward to what you have in store, next.

Awesome scenario and choice of nation this time. I look forward to the next chapter!

Interesting premise, would love to see more action with other tinies in the build-up chapters before we get to the main protagonist.

Damn, what a twist. I definitely thought the chapter title was going to refer to one of the OTHER girls but wow, there is definitely more to Aya-chan than meets the eye. Really, I thought she was going to be some joke character in Chapter 3. Looking forward to finding out more about Aya and the others!

Keep up the good work.

WOOO LET'S GO, MULTIVERSE!

IT'S ALL CONNECTED!!

Aya-chan spin-off next PLEAAAASE

Hello!

I was browsing for new stories to read on the site and found this neat little piece. Oh boy! After finishing the latest chapter, I immediately went back to read The Origin 1 and 2 and the side stories.

This is an amazing universe you have built! This is one of the serieses on the site that really tells stories in such a grand scale (pun intended hehe), I am afraid only a few series rival it. Just amazing characters that makes me want to invest in! Looking forward to this new story unfolding!

p.s. I saw The Origin showing up in Most Recent a lot of times actually but I wasn't interested until I found out there's these anime images that help visualize these stories and oh, they really enhance the experience!

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Lol, this is so cool. A macro story based on a hidden stage from a Mario game that just so happens to be called Macro Zone? Either you did your research or you're a huge Nintendo fan. Now, can someone make this sequence with giant Peach a romhack please :)

I must say once again, Aya was honestly one of the least interesting characters imtroduced in Goddess School, or at least, that's what I thought! Really thought she was going to be a gag character but you have really proven that wrong, and it looks like in this story we will dive even deeper inside Aya's mind and past, learning about how her antics came to be.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I'll do the same I did for the other comment and just talk more about Goddess School since I want to keep the direction of this story a mystery for now. This will be quite a ramble so feel free to skip reading if it's too long lol, it doesn't have anything to do with the current story and is just about my process in writing Goddess School.

The two-face/hidden personality was a gag/gimmick I'd intended to have on one of the main characters in Goddess School when I was first drafting the series. Meanwhile, the 'isekai' character was supposed to be a totally different character and hold more of a side role/only appear in the spinoff. So this is where the two characters that eventually combine to become Aya began.

Firstly, for the two-faced main character, she was supposed to be all cutthroat about graduating Goddess School because of a really serious secret backstory she has back on her home world(her family heads a conglomerate that leads many industries on her home world, but the Goddess is nearing the end of her term and they haven't managed to migrate most of their businesses out to a different world. To secure the future of her family's empire, she has to become a Goddess at all costs. There 's even more drama layered on top of that such as her older sister was the family's star who everyone pinned their hopes on, but she was the one who got picked instead, leading to jealousy and tension, but you get the gist of it). Sarah is naive and gullible, so much so that the character cannot even bear to take advantage of her when she sees her struggling with simple stuff(such as getting lost on the way to the health center), and even ends up helping Sarah multiple times despite her mind desperately telling herself that she shouldn't. Because of this, Sarah really respects and likes her and they end up becoming close friends. This, coupled with this character having a naturally kind personality despite her conviction, gradually makes her stop her cutthroat behavior.

As you can probably tell by now, the plot surrounding this character is way too bloated and convoluted to fit the vision of a light and breezy story I had for Goddess School(I would have to minimally triple the number of chapters, adding a lot of exposition and backstory reveals). And such, she was axed, and Sarah became the only protagonist in the story.

Now, for the 'isekai' character: she was meant mostly as a gag in Goddess School, just setting up a future side-story I had in mind about her return to Earth after receiving Goddesshood(sounds familiar?). I didn't draft too much of her personality yet at this point, I just knew that she was going to be a younger sister type character with her older brother not knowing about her true powers. After axing the second main character of Goddess School, I kinda had a vacuum to fill in the plot, which gave this isekai character the perfect opportunity to step up(since I had to show how she ascends to Goddesshood anyway if I wanted to write the story about her return to Earth). I gave her the two-face concept, but fitted it with the outward facade of an overly cute character to fit the little sister theme better. For the first character, I made her hidden personality kind, but for Aya, I made her true personality a little more rotten than that(it balances well since Sarah was already really kind).

Those were the initial building blocks for Aya and I just rolled with it, exploring as many ideas as I could while slowly constructing a comprehensive structure of who Koichiro Aya really is like. And that is how this story was born, and we will really go in-depth regarding Aya(personality, past, future, you name it). But you are going to have to read a LOT to get through everything. I really went bonkers with this story, so expect around...40+ chapters? I am a bit nervous about delivering her personality and its progression well though, since her personality is supposed to be conflicting and confusing, even to herself. But it'll be a good experience for myself as a writer either way, so I just have to hope it doesn't disappoint.