Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: May 10 2016
Title: Chapter 90: What Did You Do Over Lunch Hour?
I like very much Katie is much more talking to Tom in this chapter. It really improves the quality and the reading experience. If possible please continue in this and incorporate such dialogues into your next writings.
I like Katie's dominance is natural and she feels comfortable giving him orders, teasing him, humiliating him and of course using him as she wants. She clearly gets pleasure from dominating Tom and having him helpless. However she does it the way it wakes his submissive site up. She understands how to play with him to press his submissive buttons - so he is aroused and he wants to be helpless at her mercy and used :-) Actually he wants that she wants to use him :-).
I like you always bring some small details I enjoy :-). E.g. in this chapter I liked how on purpose she put down the pen tube and the elastic band in front of him just to make him nervous and excited what she is going to do to him. And then just ordering him to lay and fastening him to that tube to make him helpless - very nice moment.
Then "tormenting" helpless Tom at Janine seat by lowering her ass was also very nice. I liked she laughed when he got scary.
And then the amazing moment was when she brought him very close to the climax but then denied him the pleasure by moving him away - that was an excellent moment. I like very much she controls his orgasms - keeping him constantly aroused increases even more his desire for her. I would really love if you continue to include this teasing & denial aspect into the story :-)
I have a feeling Katie created that pen tube on purpose and she is not done with it yet ;-).
She put her panties into the drawer and unlocked the doors. I am curious. Probably she is not going to leave the class room for long because somebody could easily discover the panties. Also if she walks without panties somebody could see it e.g. at staircase. Also teaching without panties with pen tube inside would not be probably very comfortable - maybe I am wrong. I have a feeling something else is going to happen. But what?
I am looking forward for the next chapter :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the lengthy review. Based on some feedback I thought a dialogue rich chapter could help explore the dynamic forming between these two. I'm not sure the pen was comfortable for either of them but it was a means of keeping him within her for an extended period of time. More to come
Author's Response: Thanks for the lengthy review. Based on some feedback I thought a dialogue rich chapter could help explore the dynamic forming between these two. I'm not sure the pen was comfortable for either of them but it was a means of keeping him within her for an extended period of time. More to come