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A Brand-New League by Franchise Writer, 2KFSK, NRawkGTS Rated: X

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Summary:

Power has shifted dramatically in the Pokémon league. As all the regional champion's gather to discuss new rules and policies, the all-female league led by the Sinnoh champion herself, Cynthia, vote on a brand-new law to be implemented. One that will give the women of the world a much better standing in society as a whole.

This is a series of short Pokémon stories featuring the lovely ladies of the series.

Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Object, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Furry, Futanari, Incest, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Nose, Odor, Scat, Slave, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 108115 Read Count: 314077

[Report This] Published: September 24 2019 Updated: February 06 2022

Reviewer: Axolittle Signed
Date: December 20 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction.

Urm aktually

+3 STAB 0 0 atk lv 48(meteor mash learn level) serious lucario VS 0 hp 0 def lv 60(wild tapu lele level) tapu lele is a guarantied ohko

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also Olivia is a skill issue, sure dgleam to take out the gible and honchkrow in one turn, but you have PSYCHIC TERRAIN BOOSTED SUPER EFFECTIVE STAB PSYCHIC but noooo you use neutral moonblast when psychic would have outsped and OHKOed 100% of the time, assuming olivia does not knot lucario's levels and statspread, psychic would be miles better than moonblast. If thats not a skill issue i dont know what is

also natures madness halves health, so cant really do much to knock out lucario, psychic would 100% be better than natures madness here

and thats all for now. idk mb ill analyze another battle, mb Iris and the beartic, that one sounds the most wrong after this one lol.

Author's Response:
So, fun fact and I don't know how this changes the math, but the Lucario is only level 29 and was bred with the move Meteor Mash. I referenced that the boys' mother was a former ace trainer and is currently a move tutor, so her having bred the move onto Rylee made sense to me.
Also, the Pokémon depicted in this story used the movesets available to them in USUM's generation (https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Lucario_(Pok%C3%A9mon)/Generation_VII_learnset#By_leveling_up). Lucario couldn't even learn Meteor Mash naturally until Gen IX, which this story was written long before came out.

As for Olivia's move choices, I mean, yeah she could have easily OHKO and won the match, but her Trail Challenge is meant for Trial Goers who have Pokémon around level 30 if I remember correctly. Despite the state of the world they are in, she is one of the few trainers that still wants fun and engaging battles. She handicapped Lele because it was more than twice the level of the trainers she should be facing as the island Kahuna, and after seeing how well the youngest boy battled, she didn't want to end it like that, she wanted to give him a chance to win (since that's technically her job).
Also, again, as this is the wild, uncaught Tapu Lele from USUM (https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Ruins_of_Life), her moveset would be Nature's Madness, Extrasensory, Flatter, and Moonblast. She wouldn't even have Psychic for the fight.

Still, thanks for fact-checking and calling me out had I been wrong. I put a lot of research into making sure the numbers and math worked out properly, so you doing this makes me feel completely validated for doing as such lol
For this chapter, I don't think I gave anyone IVs, but Rylee is level 29 with the ability Inner Focus and a Jolly nature, and knows Metero Mash, Bone Rush, Power-Up Punch and Detect
In the chapter that focuses on her, she's level 43 with all the same stuff above, and the Skrelp she fights is level 45 has the ability Adaptability, and knows Hydro Pump, Aqua Tail, Double Team, and Gunk Shot. The hot weather mimic the effects of a Sunny Day, lowering the power of Skrelp's water moves, and I don't have it's nature in my notes, so assume something neutral.

Reviewer: Axolittle Signed
Date: January 14 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction.

+3 Lvl 29 252+ Atk Life Orb Lucario Meteor Mash vs. Lvl 60 0 HP / 0 Def Tapu Lele: 182-218 (105.8 - 126.7%) -- guaranteed OHKO

Assuming their mother knows pokemon sets, EVs and IVs movesets and items, Lucario still would have OHKOed lele at LV29 with three attack buffs

i dont know the EV's of wild lele, but ill bet its 0 0 0 0 0 0, i hardly play mainline, mostly competitive singles on smogon.

even if the lele was a competitive set, i dont think it would be bulky? most lele run 242 spa/4spd/252spe, and meteor mash is physical.

Author's Response:
Rylee didn't have a Life Orb though. If she did, I would have mentioned it in the story.
After looking over my notes and the story again I will apologize about something I was mistaken about. Apparently, Tapu Lele doesn't naturally learn Dazzling Gleam in Gen 7, which means I must have swapped out Flattery for it for the battle. This was likely so she'd have an AOE attack that could OHKO the opposing field and Rylee was just lucky to have Detect to avoid it. After that, Lele only have one opponent left, so she could stick to Moonblast or Extrasensory, I just like Moonblast more. But, with that in mind, here are the official stats I used for them and calculated on this site: https://calc.pokemonshowdown.com
Gen 7 (Sun and Moon)
Lucario - Level 29, Nature: Jolly, Ability: Inner Focus, IVs: All 31
Item: None, Buff: Atk+3

Moves
Detect (0 - 0% HP damage)
Meteor Mash (59.3 - 70.9% HP damage)
Bone Rush (19.1 - 22.6% HP damage)
Power-Up Punch (3.4 - 4% HP damage)
Tapu Lele - Level 60, Nature: Hardy, Ability: Psychic Surge, IVs: All 31
Item: None

Moves
Nature's Madness (50 - 50% HP damage)
Extrasensory (300 - 354.5% HP damage)
Moonblast (238.6 - 280.6% HP damage)
Dazzling Gleam (201.1 - 236.3% HP damage)

So, as you can see, even with the +3 to her attack stat, Rylee isn't going to OHKO Tapu Lele. Even with the marginal chip damage she took from, at best two, but more likely one turn of Sand Tomb damage. Even if you give Rylee 252 Atk EV, it brings her Meteor Mash damage up to 74.4 - 88.3% HP damage. These are not smogon competitively built Pokémon, and while I still don't know why I decided to give Lele Dazzling Gleam over Flattery, I feel like Rylee more accurately represented a Pokémon in the process of being trained up to take on stronger trainers. Honestly, given how young and inexperienced her trainer was, it would be better to assume her EVs were all over the place and once he knew what he was doing better, he could have gotten the items that lower EVs to build her stats properly.

Though, again, thank you for taking the time to fact-check these sorts of things. It truly does validate the extra work I put into researching these stories :)