Penname: Jacksmith [Contact] Real name: Jack
Member Since: May 12 2011
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:

As someone who loves both creative writing and the giantess fantasy, I hugely enjoy contributing to this community.  My works vary wildly from the pleasantly gentle to the fetishistically cruel, and I hope to explore everywhere in between as well.  The most prevalent subgenres in my stories are feet, mouthplay, and taboos, those being my favorites, but I try to add variation to keep them entertaining.


Want to commission me for a custom story? I can write your ultimate macro fantasy, from a wide range of genres and lengths. Read details here: https://thejacksmith.deviantart.com/journal/Story-Commissions-698491757


I also have a side-shop for miscellaneous pre-written & discounted goodies, such as flash fiction, unfinished tales, and deleted scenes from series like Time-Out and A Little Blackmail. Check it out here: https://www.deviantart.com/thejacksmith/journal/New-Special-Stories-Shop-802615692


My Patreon for early-access stories and exclusive tales is now online! Hope you'll give it a look: https://www.patreon.com/JacksmithShrinkStories


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Reviews by Jacksmith
A Son's Demise by Jay Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary: This story is foot related and goes explicit detail of a boy's deadly attractiion to his mother's feet
Categories: Feet, Humiliation, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23695 Read Count: 201755
[Report This] Published: May 24 2006 Updated: August 22 2006
Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapters 1-9

I've read this enough times that, even though it's a bit older, I feel I owe you a review, especially since you've been vocal about my own work. This was actually one of the first stories I read on the site, and it's certainly one of my favorite mother/son stories here. You often mention in your reviews the kinds of scenarios you like, and you're actually damn decent at crafting them yourself. The foot action is all vindictive fun and you do a nice job playing off the twisted and worsening relationship of the characters. I honestly could've seen this story going on further, maybe showing a way that Timmy is able to grow to a normal size again, only to have Jane decide she wanted him small again, but if something's gotta end, it's gotta end, and it's your thing. I also really love the normal-sized build-up to the actual shrinking where you have Timmy scheming up ways to get closer to his mother's feet, such as telling her to wear her work shoes to the restaurant just so she'll want a massage later. Great stuff. You also illustrate the characters very well, showing Timmy's incredibly neurotic awkwardness in contrast with his mother's sweet and loving yet unintentionally domineering personality.

I have two small critiques I would be remiss to not mention. One is that I wish you'd found a different way to kick off the shrinking part of the story other than Timmy being stupid enough to have a written diary called "My Fantasies" left out in the open. As you do such a nice job on other elements of the backstory build-up, I think you could've done something stronger there. Finally, this is a small thing, but I wish you hadn't kept referring to Timmy's upcoming death throughout the story. It would've made the mother's fateful choice at the end much more surprising and impactful if we hadn't known prior to that about it.

Still though this is a very solid effort and one I find myself coming back to more and more. If you ever return to writing I'd love to see another one from this genre.

Summary:

Batman and his sidekicks are miniaturized and must rely on the aid of their female allies, the Birds of Prey (A shamelessly goofy piece of fanfiction. I regret nothing!).


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16919 Read Count: 160143
[Report This] Published: April 30 2007 Updated: April 30 2007
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

this was a funny little surprise; i like how you actually bothered to characterize the people similarly to their comic counterparts

Summary: A scene, formed of a day dream I had about a tiny man stuck to the flipflop of his mistress and forced to be at mercy at her feet.
Categories: Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Feet, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1101 Read Count: 24642
[Report This] Published: September 23 2007 Updated: September 23 2007
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Quick Fix: The French, The Foot, and The Flipflop

I like the idea of just having quick scenes if someone isnt in the mood for a whole story. Very descriptive and well done

Summary: A family of sadists each with their personal fetishes regarding little men
Categories: Giantess, Butt, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10928 Read Count: 298082
[Report This] Published: March 16 2010 Updated: August 29 2012
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed
Date: March 06 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Jaclynn Plays - Chapter 1

Just stumbled upon this, and not really sure why I didn't take a closer look at it during the last update a while back. It's quite a bit of fun. As a previous reviewer said, you have a very to-the-point style but you do a nice job still of bringing in the more impactful elements that give individual moments their weight. There's a handful of technical errors but I only noticed them because I'm something of a grammar nazi, so they're certainly not distracting. I actually liked the daring of your two-parter chapter between Jaclynn and the little boy. While it may offend some, I personally had no difficulty with it, being that when I read a story like this I often project myself mentally onto whatever shrunken male character is being toyed with, so it didn't feel so much like an issue; I particularly enjoyed the gentle interaction she had with him in the first half. Anyway, good work. It would be cool to see this return sometime.



Author's Response: Thanks jacksmith, that means a lot coming from you; your stories are excellent and very well received in our small, strange community. I agree completely on the grammar...I don't review and edit nearly as much as I should, and it has been 6 yrs since a college english class. On Jacylnn and the little boy: if ppl get offended and stop reading that's up to them. The little boys fate is not good if I ever start typing again.

Summary:

A giantess captures a tiny thief in her house. What will she do with him?


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4233 Read Count: 58550
[Report This] Published: May 09 2010 Updated: May 12 2010
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

short and sweet with good descriptions, nice work

Now and Then by Cayce Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: In 2009, high school junior Aaron Ledbetter is diagnosed with adult-onset minutism, a condition that will cause him to gradually shrink over the next year or so.

In 2010, high school senior Aaron Ledbetter is still adjusting to his tiny size when he finds himself a prisoner and totally at the mercy of an unbalanced ex-girlfriend.


Categories: Feet, Gentle, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8912 Read Count: 22013
[Report This] Published: July 29 2010 Updated: July 29 2010
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yet again, great work. your descriptions are vivid without getting overly wordy, and i particularly appreciate the effortlessness with which you bypass the speed bump of doubt required to get past the reason for the main character shrinking. normally this aspect pulls me out of the story a little, but you did it admirably here

Summary:

This will be a collection of my various fantasies. Many of my stories will center around incest, vore, mouthplay, lesbian and gay action.


Categories: Mouth Play, Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Maternal, Incest, Instant Size Change, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1961 Read Count: 9541
[Report This] Published: April 14 2011 Updated: April 14 2011
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Joining the Parker Family

This is a great chapter.  It's incredibly intense with tight descriptions and character interactions.  I'd be awesome to see it continued someday, particularly with these characters.

Summary:

A timid young man fresh out of college gets his first job at the public library, only to discover all his coworkers are towering amazons. He finds ways to make it work, but after some time he learns that it isn't a mere coincidence that all the women he works with are tall...


Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Maternal, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56492 Read Count: 627113
[Report This] Published: May 24 2011 Updated: August 10 2011
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed
Date: August 10 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

An apt ending for a very fine story. You very clearly cared about writing a story that was not only technically neat and tidy, but easily readable. What this is is a story first and foremost, and a well-crafted fetishistic fantasy second. That's what I'd call a positive rarity.

Fairytale Night by Malaka Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Lucy and Livia take their relationship to the next step, with some help from a shrinking potion.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7569 Read Count: 40758
[Report This] Published: June 11 2011 Updated: July 01 2011
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

In response to your last reply on my comment, a longer 3rd story with another more major conflict would be really cool. I would particularly love seeing lucy become large again, those scenes in the first story were easily my favorite of their interactions

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

nice ending; the lack of extensive gts content is of course forgiveable because it was a satisfying story conclusion.  seriously, bud... PLEASE do a 3rd one more in line with the adventurey style of the first one.



Author's Response:

Hey, don't worry, I'll get around to writing a 3rd one eventually. But it won't be my next story, since I like to vary my style from one story to the next. Also, I write extremely slowly, so don't expect a 3rd one soon...but it'll happen, I promise! ;-)

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

there's a pleasant sense of calm and casualness going on here, meaning i don't have that terrible feeling of dread that normally looms when things are going really well for characters in stories like this.  i'm not sure whether or not you plan to introduce a more major conflict into this story, but i honestly don't think i'd mind if you did or not, providing the story doesn't become a novel, because this is quite nice where it is.



Author's Response:

This story is just about this one night, so no major conflict this time. But maybe I'll write a longer, more epic story with these characters afterwards, since there are so many possibilities. Either way, I prefer pleasant stories over terrifying ones!

Best Friends by ArtimusG Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A lonely man finds himself at the mercy of an unaware woman with a head-cold.


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6094 Read Count: 81362
[Report This] Published: June 15 2011 Updated: August 19 2011
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed
Date: June 15 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Foundations of a Friendship

I like the unique set-up and good descriptions; you are correct that there isn't much "nose" content around here. I had wondered at one point why so few people experimented with this, so it's cool to see it here. (ultra-random/childish connection: There's a magic school bus episode this reminded me of where the class shrinks and goes up the teacher's nose; i remember even as a really young kid seeing that just thinking "now that's not bad at all") hehe ignore my ramblings and please continue this

Author's Response:

I was a little iffy about putting as much, what is essentially, nasal-vore in this story, but I figured thatI could make up for it later.  Speaking of the magic school bus, I love that show!  Don't forget the episode where they shrink and go up that other girl's nose!  Thanks for the review!

Summary:

Two missing parents, one hungry daughter.  With feet?


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Instant Size Change, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Innocent Musings Over Meals
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5848 Read Count: 47539
[Report This] Published: June 16 2011 Updated: August 28 2011
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Innocent Musings over Breakfast

figured i owed you a bounce-back review.  i've said this before, but so far you're really the only micro/voyeur-based writer i've been able to read the content and enjoy it as much as the genres i'm generally more comfortable in.  i like the uncomplicated nature of this one; no tangled plot to follow, just a clean-cut, description-rich little tale.  good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!  I'm glad you enjoy it.  I will probably write the final chapter of this one sometime this weekend.  I appreciate the rate and review!

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2011 Title: Chapter 4:

Good ending.  Linguistically flavorful, and it concludes with a wonderfully simplistic yet impactful image.  I'd say this is easily your best story.



Author's Response:

Again, thank you for your kind words!  I wrote this last chapter 4 times, the first with Anita dying, and Frank survivng, then the opposite, then with them both surviving (which ended up needing a fifth chapter) and finally this last variation.  I'm glad you enjoyed it!  Now if I could only get as many reviews as you do... :)

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 18 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Innocent Musings over Breakfast

I tend not to like unaware/micro a great deal, but this is well-written enough that i found myself enjoying it. Very good stuff.

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21 2011 Title: Chapter 2:

once again, i've found myself uncharacteristically enjoying a micro story.  very nice, your description of the bottom of a foot to a micro person was great, and the relative simplicity of the story is a good thing.  you put time into details, which is excellent, and not something you see in many stories around here



Author's Response:

Awesome! I'm glad you enjoy it.  I tend to prefer micro/voyeur over other genres, but I think my next attempt my be something different...who knows!

Summary:

A dysfunctional family learns to deal with each other in an unconventional manner.


Categories: Body Exploration, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Mouth Play, Maternal, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19546 Read Count: 175299
[Report This] Published: June 28 2011 Updated: November 28 2013
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Sanity Questions

I'm liking this, particularly your first 4 chapters; you as an author are kind of single-handedly proving to me that I am capable of enjoying micro voyeur.  And I do agree about the issue involved in "aware" stories; you have a realism hurdle to cross when a loved one of the shrinkies decides to become a mindless slave driver.  I myself find this to be a tough one to deal with.  From this 5th chapter, it seems like your character isn't quite there yet, as she thinks she's crazy, at least for now; personally, I'd say try and leave it at that, you could very easily get some good meat and potatoes out of the story simply on the sister being like "well, it's not real, so why not?".  Wow, this was a long comment, haha.  Anyway good job.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot man.  I heavily debated even including a non-voyeur part of the story, but I didn't want it to become a re-hashing of everything else I've done.  I think that is my plan, though, at least for now, to keep Tiffany is a blissful "they aren't real, therefore I don't care" state of mind.  I think it's the closest thing to realism you can find without beginning to violently twist the fabric of the human psyche to gross proportions of fantasy.  Glad youre enjoying it!

Summary:

The vore lesson continues for Brooke in the School of Civil Service.

 


Categories: New World Order, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1822 Read Count: 5905
[Report This] Published: July 17 2011 Updated: July 17 2011
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed
Date: July 18 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Quite enjoyable, I like how you tried to incorporate a bit of light humor. It might have made it easier to release this as chapter 2 of your other story rather than a new one though

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! I might do that for the third part. Glad you enjoyed it!

Summary:

A game show where one person is shrunk and has to complete some tasks while the other is left normal size and has to stop the tiny under their own conditions.

The prize? For the tiny, tons of cash. For the giant? Tons of cash... and a special secret prize.

But it's all just virtual reality, right?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7622 Read Count: 74906
[Report This] Published: July 30 2011 Updated: June 23 2012
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed
Date: July 30 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I like this, it's unique and yet you manage to integrate a lot of the descriptive conventions of the standard fare, i.e. conveying an understandable mentality through your characters. Good job

Author's Response:

Thank you! Something I think we as a community have struggled with is character mentality, especially on the big side.

 

I think we can all understand the mentality if the giant was just a massive fetish feeder, but as a realistic human?

 

I'm not sure if I'm deserving of a compliment that I conveyed a COMPLETELY understandable mentality, I will try more in the future.

The Caretaker by Hollow Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

Jake, a 16 year old boy, is shrunk after testing a new drug for a local pharmacy, his mother arranges for him to be cared for in Los angeles by a young woman, so he can escape the media.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19362 Read Count: 341093
[Report This] Published: July 31 2011 Updated: December 26 2011
Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 09 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Girls Night in

not bad, this chapter is probably the best of the story, you seem to be putting some effort into including some good sensory details, so good work there.  where i'd say put a little extra time is in your character development; given the speed with which your protagonist was thrust into his new life, it can in a few places be hard to believe the actions of these total strangers, although i realize some leniency is needed here since these are the more fetishistic episodes of the tale.  additionally, it might not hurt to go through and fix up incorrect capitalizations, etc, as it can make reading smoother.  keep it up!