Fantastic story and one hell of a cliffhanger to leave us on. Jack assumes he's going to be abducted back to her place, but who knows? Maybe Caitlin has other plans. If she really is as angry as she seems, she may consider getting Amber involved to help get the info she wants out of Jack. Or maybe she does take him home with her for round 2. Or maybe the abduction gets stopped by something. Who knows. 

I really do hope that this story is resumed some day and we get to find out.

What a great story this was. Loved the character development that so many got, loved the plot, and the descriptions of the interactions between the various sized people were very well done. You really are a talented writer.

It's a real shame that the stories talked about in the chapter end notes never came to fruition. It feels like there is still so much more to tell about a lot of the characters here, not to mention all of the mysteries raised (how the hell did Kayla end up being some sort of god? How/why do people become Omegas? What exactly is the Fire, and is there any hope of stopping it from pushing Omegas down a very dark path?)

Regardless, even if those questions are never answered, I'm still happy with what we got. Hope Ackbar is doing well, wherever he is and whatever he's doing.

This story was a lot of fun. Despite the large cast of characters introduced in such a short time, I ended up invested in all of their lives and they way they were entwined. Dave in particular was particularly interesting; his story was so tragic and I was really hoping things would get better for him eventually.

I know this story is very, very dead and I'm probably typing into the void, but in case you ever read this, great story!

I feel like this whole story is a metaphor for...something? But I might just be too dumb to understand what, exactly. Abuse? Bullying? Social hierarchy? I dunno, the whole thing feels dreamlike in that some things make sense, while others don't. 

It's a strange story, and I'm pretty sure I don't understand what it was going for, but it's well-written and I liked it anyways lol. Good work!

This is great, I love how patient and empathetic Kayla was trying to gain Rose's trust. Hope this gets continued someday.

Read both this and your other story and thought they were both great. I'm really curious about why the princess is the way she is. I hope Kaathe tries to help out Daisy at some point; her situation is so profoundly unfair.

You're a really good writer and I hope you continue writing someday.

This was unsettling. Really captures the essence of a broken man better than most stories I've read.

Fascinating story. Happy to see Brian and Allison get a happy ending, relatively speaking. Cathy is still a bit of a wildcard, though. She did imply that she'll keep her mouth shut about the situation, but it goes without saying that someone who gets off on torturing and killing people is inherently untrustworthy. Cathy's reason for being a Chevalier were meant to have some ambiguity, but it really does seem like she's mostly there for the pleasure.

The SPAR system is deeply fucked up, but not entirely unbelievable. There's always a tragically large group of people who think criminals are treated too softly and it's pretty easy to imagine public support growing for something like SPAR if the worst crimes were trotted out in the news day after day in support of it. It is suspicious just how many people are being tortured and executed, however. Makes me wonder if there might be something to the conspiracy theories that Allison was worried about.

Anyways, good story, and I see that there are sequels so off I go!

This story is fantastic. The way their relationship has progressed is really cute and cozy and I absolutely adore the dynamic between the two. Just the best vibes.

Lexi is having less problems going through with this then I thought she would. I wonder if comparisons to her mom are gonna start creeping back into her head, even though she seemed to have conquered those demons. There's risk in being too comfortable with the punishment, even though Bridget is functionally impervious.

Still not convinced this is accomplishing anything useful. I hope it either goes off the rails in some way or Bridget has some other, hidden purpose for these sessions.

It's kinda interesting that Lexi comes across like a true believer in the Omega justice system. She really thinks this might work. It makes sense why Omegas would be dogmatic because of the Fire, but Lexi is more surprising.