Reviewer: Wizalex Signed
Date: November 26 2022
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Grief
What a fantastic story! Thrilling all the way through and constantly intense. Great job with the delightfully horrific characters too, they were a joy to hate.
Burning out the G37 is such a visceral scene, especially with Vasquez’s usual brute force approach to it.
It definitely makes the most sense here for Vasquez to grow, but I'm still really intrigued by the other options. Especially by what a grieving Jennifer might have done to Amber if she didn't get to Vasquez in time.
Can't wait to see your next work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was terrified the entire way through that I'd somehow compromise quality, so your words mean a lot. I still think I can improve this last chapter and will for sure flesh it out more when I have time.
The only way with Vasquez is brute force, haha. She's pretty much wrath distilled into a 55 foot tall woman.
I'm most looking forward to the Jennifer timeline tbh.
I have some ideas for short stories (a size theft centred plot and one maybe tailored around the seven sins as growth triggers), but I'm eager to start the continuation of this story too. I have a lot of ideas that never got included in this that can be.