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Fear and Delight by MisterInker Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

Simon has Regressor's Syndrome, rendering him and all other sufferers on the planet around two inches in height. Normally, he lives in a specially designed colony with other people of his height and disposition, but this week he's visiting his normal-sized sister, Milla, who's just out of college and living on her own for the first time in her life. Simon's ready to cut loose and enjoy the big-person world for all the delights it has to offer... but he didn't count on one factor: Milla's roommate Beck, who seems to have a strange fascination with our tiny hero's size...

But Simon is an optimist. He can make friends with anybody, especially somebody his protective big sister loves and admires. Will he win Beck over? Or does another fate await him?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Fantasy, Gentle, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35190 Read Count: 75625
[Report This] Published: November 05 2021 Updated: April 04 2022
Reviewer: Burelot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: SIMON SAYS... HELLO!

I've just registered for this site to tell you this is the best size change story I've read in a very long time - I'll admit that I haven't been following this site much for a while after reading too many stories that consist of the woman screaming that she's going to kill the tiny for 50 chapters, followed by 3 sentences of her swallowing him. I'm going to have to read those stories you said were your inspiration.

It makes me smile how much you apologised in all the chapter end notes for developing the characters, when of course that made the payoff so much better in the end. So thanks for writing believable characters with a believable reason for swallowing each other. And thanks for such excellent writing to bring it all to life.

You said that this is the end of this story arc: are you planning a break before writing the next part? Or will you be carrying on?

Questions for Simon (mainly): about how many tiny people are there in the world? And how many in your colony? Is it common for tinies to travel into the normal world, and do you know of anyone else having a tiny/normal relationship?

For Milla - and apologies because it's rather a sensitive topic. You said you're very conscientious, but it seems quite reckless to eat from the plate your brother is on if you can't see him. Did this incident have a big impact on you?



Author's Response:

Hello and welcome! You registered just to review my story? I'm so honored!

You've hit on exactly why I wrote this story. I've always thought there was room for so much tenderness and affection in this kind of erotica, and all that potential was being squandered on cruelty or epic worldbuilding or... I don't know. Skewed focus on the parts that don't really matter. I wanted to write a romance, and that necessitated characters who cared about each other for believable reasons. 

This is the end of this particular arc, and I'll probably be calling this story CLOSED once I post the answers to the Q&A. But fear not: Simon and Beck will have at least one more arc of adventures in FEAR & DELIGHT 2 (title pending!)

Thanks for commenting, and I can't wait to hear what you think of what comes next!

Reviewer: Burelot Signed
Date: April 13 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: SIMON SAYS... ASKED AND ANSWERED!

Well that was fun! I take it from Milla's response to my question that she knows Beck had swallowed Simon - I'd love to see her reaction when they told her! I can't resist but poke around the edges of the suspension of disbelief in well-written shrink stories, so in this case I'm just imagining the reaction when the first baby was born with Regressor's. Especially if the mother hadn't had an ultrasound scan :-D

As for what might happen in the next part, I've looked at your past stories, and signs point to vore. I'd imagine Beck would be more nervous about doing it again though after she struggled to bring Simon back up. In a story like this with willing & gentle vore I've always liked the idea of the tiny taking a light down and having a look around - maybe Simon would be up for that?

A Snack to Go (Forbidden Dish story) by girlfood Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Lindsay is a waitress at the Forbidden Dish, a restaurant where people can be shrunk down and eaten by the attractive waitresses. One night, Lindsay accidentally brings a shrunken person home. 



Categories: Sci-Fi, Giantess, Adventure, Vore, Mouth Play, Entrapment
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11076 Read Count: 109634
[Report This] Published: January 09 2022 Updated: January 09 2022
Reviewer: Burelot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A new Forbidden Dish story?! The original series (both yours and oishi1's) have been some of my favourite vore stories ever since they came out, so it's great to see more. I'll have a look at your Deviant Art some time soon.

I'm sure Lindsay was much younger in the earlier stories, so I take it this is set some time later. I always wondered how long it would take the Forbidden Dish to run out of people willing to be shrunk :-p

The Girls Can't Help It by MisterInker Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Two-inch-tall Simon Groff never figured he'd meet somebody like Beck Phillips. 

But after a chance meeting in his normal-heighted sister's apartment, Beck melts Simon's heart and opens his eyes to a new world of possibilities in the big-person world. 

It's not just that he risked everything on a once-in-a-lifetime trip down her throat (and her pants). He might actually have real feelings for this girl… even if she's a thousand times his size. 

But before the lovestruck (and size-crossed) pair can explore their feelings further, they've got to survive a night on the town at Studio H, the notorious tiny-inclusive bar, where girls with more sinister interests in Simon's diminutive size lurk. Will Simon's luck hold?

Or does another fate await him?



Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7117 Read Count: 7710
[Report This] Published: August 09 2023 Updated: September 02 2023
Reviewer: Burelot Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 27 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Lost In A Crowd, Alone, and Drinking My Third

A great story so far, although it's not quite as charming as Fear and Delight (so far!). However, I still love your descriptive ability and pacing, and the fact that you've built a world with just enough detail to allow for a suspension of disbelief without going overboard, and characters who don't behave like they're in a porn film.

I hope we get to see how it ends some time. For a moment I expected Beck to come back as Simon jumped into Ash's mouth and think he was cheating on her!

Is Sweet Little Temptations on sale anywhere else? It's tempting, but I generally avoid Amazon.

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