Finally got around to reading this one, interesting worldbuilding choices and I like the main characters. It seems like there are meaner giantesses out there than Cait, though it looks like most of the ones she hangs out with in the "present" are pretty nice too. Looking forward to more!

I like it a lot, the elves and the humans are both in a very strange position where they've unwittingly entangled the other over time lol.

I liked it a lot! I see we're starting on day one of the invasion, I'm guessing Procerita will manage to do better than Clara did at evading the Aelmari? Either way it's off to a good start, Glalans are always fun characters to write, I think you got their mindset pretty well. I'm hoping that she and Max get closer, it's a harsh galaxy out there for a fugitive catgirl!

Also as for adding to a series I think you just go to the series page while logged in and there's an "add to" thing below the description, I double checked to make sure it was open. Here's a direct link to the series page since the series listing on the side of the homepage seems to not be working.

https://giantessworld.net/viewseries.php?seriesid=9386

The last couple chapters were pretty nice, glad to see our protagonists get a little downtime. You've really made Glalan Prime an interesting place. Looking forward to hearing about Procerita's past as a gladiator and the Viriditas, I wonder how much it knows about the universe? If it hosts fighting tournaments it's probably seen some interesting types over the years.

I enjoyed the last couple chapters, glad to see Procerita is picking up more strays. I'm curious about the origin of the human woman, I'm guessing she's not from Earth if translation nanites don't work.

I wouldn't worry about the names, you've done a lot more to make them creative than I have lol.

Haven't gotten a chance to review the last couple chapters until now, just wanted to say I'm following the story here and I like how the protagonists have grown closer. I'm sure these space pirates don't know what they're getting into. I didn't think this chapter was particularly bad by the way, but I totally get that sometimes you've just got to move a plot forward.


Author's Response:

It’s definetely not awful, it’s just the first chapter I got particularly flustered with. Near the end I was just throwing ideas at the wall because I couldn’t get the idea that Peira had human-proofed the room out of my head. 

A nice ending to a story arc, it seems like Max and Procerita are going to stick together in spite of everything which is nice to see. If you ever decide to write more about their adventures I'll be waiting!

Nice chapter! Procerita really is a Glalan Champion, immediately kidnapping and ravishing a human. Looking forward to seeing what kinds of things the two get into when they land!

Interesting plot being set up, I like the idea of an "executioner" Aelmari, probably something a bit heavier duty than Lyrei and Isstvell I'm guessing. Maybe Max can talk it down, or maybe the two of them end up on the run, either way glad to see Max isn't totally adverse to a space adventure, because he's in one now.

I like your worldbuilding additions to the appendix stuff, the "blood of the gods" staining the Glalan atmosphere for example. There are a few more reasonable Glalans on Prime of course, Telara for example, but Procerita as a hardened and famous marauder might not be the best advocate for a less aggressive foreign policy. There are only rarely Aelmari on Glalan Prime, so it should give our protagonists some breathing room. That executioner, I'm getting vibes like she's not only still alive she's maybe forgetting about that Aelmari Mission and is maybe developing some... extra features in the same way that Aelmari do in the main story, but in a far less positive way lol.

looking forward to where this is going, keep it up!