Penname: Yeso [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: January 05 2022
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hey there, I'm relatively new to designing and writing comics, but not to living out the giantess fetish.

It is important to know when you read my stories that my preferences are on the cruel/gore side of giantess fetish and I am particularly concerned with the darkest side of the human soul.


You can find me on deviantart. 


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Summary:

The lone survivor of a horrific Shrinkee massacre is left dealing with the four giantesses responsible for the bloodbath as they compete to become her sole owner. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 411107 Read Count: 246183
[Report This] Published: September 01 2020 Updated: February 18 2024
Reviewer: Yeso Signed
Date: April 14 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

I would like to warn herewith that I make speculations about the end and do not want to spoil anyone's fun if I should have cracked the "code" (Even if I do not believe that, but warning does not hurt).

However, to explain my wishful thinking, I must first classify how I see the story systematically. It becomes more and more apparent with each chapter, from my point of view, that there is not just one major strand of development, but two. The first development thread is the more obvious one and from my point of view a trap for us readers. Annabelle loses her humanity in competition with Poppy with each chapter. (Here one should not only pay attention to the body, it is about the "idea" Annabelle). At the beginning Annabelle stood among many other shrunken humans as a representative of a human being, the idea of being a subject, but with each chapter she becomes more and more a "pet", the idea of being an object. This is what the debate is about, whether Annabelle in the end preserves her humanity and escapes (subject) or eventually becomes a will-less slave (object).

However, this debate necessarily presupposes that there is a legitimate reason for Annabelle to escape, which of course seems obvious at the beginning of the story. However, one must pay attention to the second plot line, which changes the "rules of the game" more and more. The "rules of the game" because of which there is a debate about the first storyline. Namely, while Annabelle loses her humanity, the FF will - I suspect - gain more and more humanity and stop being pets of their parents (+ world) themselves - so that these four, of all people, end up reaching the ideal state of humanity that Annabelle is trying to preserve. The FF are not only portrayed more and more human, they BECOME more and more human, that is to say self-autonomous beings. However, I'm afraid that the FF's humanity will only finally come through when they lose Annabelle to the object. The moment they lose Annabelle, the human Annabelle, the "idea" Annabelle will live on as a subject in the FF, because Annabelle will have made the FF from pet to human, while the FF will have made Annabelle more and more from human to pet (by the way, you pet animals, too, you don't just torture them through. Just because the FF become nicer and nicer to Annabelle does not make Annabelle human to the FF). For the turn, however, a bond of the FF to Annabelle is necessary, which is built up more and more. At the same time a world is necessary, from which the FF will emancipate themselves at the end and fight for the idea of Annabelle, the subject position of all (!) humans. The realization will probably take place with the FF, however, only when Annabelle is "gone" as a material being. In the moment where Annabelle finally becomes a pet, the FF will finally see in Annabelle the pet what they have always been to their parents (+ world) and break out. The person Annabelle is then gone, but the idea Annabelle will live on eternally with the four.

Or to explain it another way. The FF, without realizing it, make Annabelle what they actually are. To the pet. The FF break Annabelle so that Annabelle becomes what they are to their parents (+ world). Annabelle on the other hand breaks the FF more and more to the human being, means to the subject. The FF will become more and more the self-autonomous acting being, what Annabelle has been in the beginning. At the beginning of the story Annabelle was the subject, the FF the objects. At the end, Annabelle will be the object, but the FF will be the subjects. Annabelle will worship FF as Poppy, but the FF will cry about it, that's why they will hold up the idea of Annabelle. Poppy will have no one to desire at the end, maybe even Annabelle will be "saved" with it at the end.

In my theory, the *person Annabelle* may be gone then, unfortunately, but she has achieved what she always wanted. To preserve her humanity, carried by the FF. It is not only a competition between Poppy and Annabelle. It is a competition between Poppy (body/desire) and idea Annabelle (spirit/idea) for the person Annabelle, her legacy. However, it may also be that Poppy wins, but still dies in the end, because the FF want Annabelle back, from the moment Annabelle becomes Poppy. Maybe this will even make Annabelle grow again and become the fifth in line. Poppy, after all, can only survive as long as the FF are specifically pets (of the parents and the world) and therefore want to be desired by the pet (Poppy). However, the moment the FF become the idea Annabelle, when Annabelle becomes the objects Poppy/FF, Poppy dies, since Poppy will have no one left to desire. Annabelle can therefore defeat Poppy, to return to the first plot line, not by escaping, but by the FF becoming Annabelle. However, Poppy loses if Poppy ends up being able to desire NONE of the four.

(Don't wonder, deleted the post several times to correct it).



Author's Response:

Yeso, I believe this is your first time commenting, and yet you've utterly wrecked my mind. 

I've said this a couple of times, but you guys are so damn perceptive. Obviously, I can't declare any validity to your theories without spoiling anything, but I will say that I like how you're thinking.  

I'm really debating adding this part, because it may be delving into spoiler territory so read at your own risk. 

Maybe, kind of spoilers:

I think your thinking may shift, when more is revealed about the imprinting process (all is not what it seems). The binary nature of Annabelle/ Poppy or Subject/Object as you so astutely put it, may possibly become less binary as the story progresses. 

I can say that you are absolutely correct about the relationship between the FF and their parents, and the relationships between the FF and Annabelle/Poppy.  I'm not sure if the FF realize it yet, but a part of what makes obtaining Poppy so attractive, is the agency possessing her will provide. As of now, they are "pets" to their parents--as you said--but with Poppy under their control, they would become freer in a sense. 


Ugh Yeso, you've forced a lot more out of me than I intended (other commenters have done the same). This comment section is dangerous. 

Anyway, excellent analysis. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. 


Reviewer: Yeso Signed
Date: October 01 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Would like to write a post where it's more about the story itself than a chapter specifically: 

As for the believability of the story, there is a weak point in my view, but it is very easily remedied by an explanation in the story. 

People take it too easily for granted that the coffins are empty. If the BSA has been running their operation for decades, then it simply can't work that the world takes it for granted that the coffins are empty, no one really asks, there is no research on it. The father is even not really surprised to have lost two daughters in this way.

(But maybe this is explained somewhere and I just missed it)


However, it can be explained by the fact that the same scientists who think that shrunken people are not capable of surviving on their own, also think that the "sudden shrinking" could be intensified by fear of life. With the explanation the world resigned itself why with fake accident places of shrunk ones no corpses can be found. 

According to these scientists, the fear of death should trigger shrinkage, which is why bodies are sometimes not seen at accident sites. However, no evidence can be collected on this, because the experiments on this would be unethical. 


Apart from this, the story seems so frighteningly believable that I could almost believe here secret messages of a person from the upper class are sent. 



Author's Response:

Hey Yeso,

Interesting comment about the coffins...can't say much about it, but it definitely is (briefly) mentioned again in an upcoming chapter, so good catch. I will say you're right in that there is a general societal understanding that Shrinkees will often die in ways that don't leave much of their remains. I can't speak more on it, but keep your eyes open in the chapters after the FF's home visits. 

As for the believability of this story--thank you and I apologize in advance when this story jumps the shark in 3-4 chapters hahaha

Reviewer: Yeso Signed
Date: January 09 2023 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Poor Nell. Has to do without despite a possible size fetish due to a moral code. No wonder she is obsessed on Annabelle, since Annabelle is virtually THE solution to the moral dilemma. Annabelle should just beware, since Nell can likewise only see her as a "means to an end". 

Nell's good nature to Annabelle in the end serves less to take Annabelle's will into consideration, but to satisfy her own moral gut feeling, to finally be able to live out her size fetish without "bellyache". 

Poppy also seems to have sensed that Nell has the potential to degrade one into an object. 



Author's Response:

That's a really good point Yeso. Annabelle really is the perfect answer for her.


...Ugh, I like wrote an entire paragraph as a response to this comment, but I can't post it without spoiling the next chapter. So instead I'm just going to say you are extremely astute. I'm interested in what you'll think of the upcoming chapter then. 

76 by SophieLenna Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Katie shrinks and trains tinies to be good and proper slaves. After almost a year and a half, she decides she wants to train a tiny for herself. Unfortunately, his training may come at the expense of the other tinies in her care.

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This is a cruel giantess story, and I hope to make it crueler as it continues. I hope you enjoy!


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26654 Read Count: 71793
[Report This] Published: May 30 2021 Updated: November 02 2023
Reviewer: Yeso Signed
Date: January 05 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1: 76

I really like the structure of the story, especially the characterization of hopelessness. 

Summary:

Description:

Adrianna, a woman performing parlour tricks and palm readings decides to learn real magic. However, she has no idea how much power she will gain. She wished to be a goddess among mortals, but not even she imagined it would be anything like this. She has no idea what she will become, and the power she will unleash.

Content Warnings:

This story features cruelty, domination, vore, insertion, destruction of cities and some descriptions of gore and digestion. This is my take on a more cruel giantess, so be warned in case this kind of thing is not for you. If you want to read this story, I hope that you enjoy it. 


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Growing Woman, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14991 Read Count: 25783
[Report This] Published: November 03 2021 Updated: August 31 2022
Reviewer: Yeso Signed
Date: September 08 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Adrianna's Hunger

Love it. Very lovely especially the detailed description of the devastation. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I was really hoping people would enjoy that.

Summary:

Levi decided to stay home while his family went on holiday. But as he shrinks himself with a forgotten shrinkbox, his sister decides to take him along as her secret plaything. 


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Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109392 Read Count: 234463
[Report This] Published: November 06 2021 Updated: January 02 2024
Reviewer: Yeso Signed
Date: April 15 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

What I find so fascinating about the story is the fact that, from my point of view, it's neither "Gentle" nor "Cruel." For gentle, the victim suffers too much, for cruel, the victim doesn't suffer enough.

For gentle, the sister is being too hard on our brother, for cruel, it's still the sister knowing that it won't “hurt" him.

I find the story funny because of this.



Author's Response:

That is really kind of you to say, it's the exact mix I'm going for! :)