Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: February 08 2022
Title: Chapter 6: Visitation
Oh wow How many omegas. There are some that I know, and others I don't think so. I don't remember that Alexis Bandera. I guess she is a new character in this story. Benett seems to me that he is the son of the teacher of the history of Omega: Keeper. Dawn I remember her from Omega: Hostage and Claire is always with her imposing attitude from her but at the same time empathic from her. Although she did say something in her speech from She to Lexi that makes me wonder. How will the Omegas make sure that what happened to Lexi doesn't happen again? I remember a reviewer at Inerithance saying the same thing. A beta could do the same to an Alpha and if nobody proves his innocence of him he will be punished just like Lexi. But anyway, I guess you could count on Kayla in those cases. Let's see how the story unfolds.
Another thing that I would like to see at some point in the story is a meeting between Jenna and Lexi hahahaha. That would be nice. Kayla in a conversation with Abby told her that Jenna was the closest to Fire of all the Omegas of this generation. She enjoys her work more than she should and does it with all enthusiasm. But seeing firsthand that injustice can go both ways must have caused something in her mind to contain that sinister Fire. Or maybe she didn't do it at all.
The other most worrying thing about what is happening is Bridget's situation. If Lexi doesn't rescue her from herself she'll collapse from madness. The Alpha has to be strong, this will not be an easy mission.
In short, great story. When I read it I imagine the scenes in my mind as if I were a spectator who empathizes with the characters and therefore feels their emotions. For me it is a true work of art. Let's see how it ends. I honestly don't know how this story doesn't have more reviews or comments because it's a very good story and those comments help motivate the author to continue it.
However, Jack, I assure you that even if it is not enough, I will always be a faithful reader of this literary work.
Author's Response: Because a lot of this story is in Lexi's perspective, we won't actually see what Claire was referring to, but it's safe to say something more active was done than just being extra vigilant. Jenna will be making an appearance in this story. And Bridget is definitely in need now.