Penname: kenrios [Contact] Real name: Alejandro
Member Since: August 10 2021
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Summary:

The story of Allison Starr and Brian Bentley concludes! Brian’s innocence has been proven to the world, and he is about to reveal that he is actually alive, but only one inch tall. Now that Allison and Brian no longer have to live in hiding, they must adjust to a brand new world - one that owes Brian a lot of apologies. This becomes even more difficult when they are reunited with faces from the past, such as Brian’s little sister. However, their relationship is stronger than ever. As such, they’re confident that they can overcome any challenge, so long as they do it together.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Couples, Feet, Gentle, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52028 Read Count: 49167
[Report This] Published: April 30 2021 Updated: February 13 2022
Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: October 29 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Real Talk, Part 1

O hell dude. I wanted so much to see the continuation of this incredible story and I was afraid you would not continue writing it. Thank you so much for that.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the review, and I’m so sorry that you were worried about the story not continuing! It makes sense considering how long ago the last chapter was, but I promise that I have every intention to see this story to the end, and I’ll try not to have such a long wait for the next chapter. I’m going to work on it this weekend, so hopefully that will be enough time to finish it. Either way, I’m so happy to hear that you’re enjoying the story, and I hope you enjoy what happens next! Thanks again for the review.

-Pluto

Summary:

Tired of the giants' supremacy, Rennard, Milton, and Henry decide to strike back. Not trying anything too malicious, the three have a harmless prank in mind. However, they quickly learn how much things can spiral out of control, especially when giants are involved.

 

Set in a medieval style fantasy setting full of magic. Some plot, some action, lots of erotica. If you don't like feet stuff, this might not be for you, but the other tags make plenty of strong appearances (beginning of chapter 1 contains more specific directions on which chapters to look out for if you want things like insertion/mouth play).


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131883 Read Count: 132793
[Report This] Published: June 12 2021 Updated: July 02 2023
Reviewer: kenrios Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Girl in the Yellow Frock

I personally would like Henry and Ada to be in different terms. Basically, if Henry wanted to be with Ada, it was of his own free will. Slavery, while pleasant for Henry at first, will begin to dent his soul in the long run and when Ada no longer wants it she will dispose of him as a piece of trash. At that point I would like Henry to have the opportunity to leave if he wanted to. But knowing Ada, I don't have many illusions. Maybe that's why I didn't like that Henry lost to Ada, but not everything can be the bed of roses in a story on this site, right? What I would like is for Henry at some point to start fighting for his freedom before it's too late. Personally, I would not like this character to have a tragic ending even if it brings him pleasure. He seems too good a person to end up like this. That would be too cruel. I believe that life is not something so trivial as to dismiss it like that.

Summary:

A sultry thousand-foot-tall giantess who feeds on fear (and also people) satisfies her appetite in the city while her sweet normal-sized husband is conveniently out of town. Done as a commission.


Categories: Breasts, Couples, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13973 Read Count: 43929
[Report This] Published: September 07 2021 Updated: July 19 2022
Reviewer: kenrios Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL. I confess that I am not a big fan of stories of cruel giantesses destroying cities. But this one in particular caused me to laugh a bit because of the situations that Astraea sometimes finds herself in with moral conflicts about what her husband would say. So only criminals or felons are on the menu. The way Astraea deals with them is quite peculiar.

Let's see how this develops.



Author's Response: This is definitely meant to be a merging of tones, where the 'cruel' giantess would be much tougher on the city, if she wasn't concerned about her husband's feelings

Summary:

The sequel to Omega: Inheritance.

Lexi returns home two years after wrongful punishment in the hands of her titanic adoptive sister Bridget, ready to make things right again by any means necessary.


Categories: Vore, Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 96497 Read Count: 71072
[Report This] Published: October 20 2021 Updated: March 17 2024
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Date: February 25 2024 Title: Chapter 26: Break

I think that a good therapy for both sisters could be a meeting with "that child" again. If we look at the facts, they remained unfinished for Tyler. I mean, Lexi was lucky enough to find a family but Nathaniel wasn't and it was brutally taken from him which led to the events of Inheritance. Always caused by lack of understanding and hatred. I think that if Lexi wants to get her mother off her back and put a tombstone over her image, she has to forgive Nathaniel and vice versa. Maybe it's the only way for that persistent voice, no doubt produced by the hatred and mental nails her mother placed on her in her conversation in Jenna's tank, to go away. It's just my opinion but as Lexi thought trying to correct errors with more errors has not exactly produced the expected results.I think that is approaching the conclusion of this story that has kept us in suspense for more than 8 years. I hope it's not the end of the Omega universe either. I am not such a good writer but I would like this universe not to die, it is very good and gives us a good message. Keep it up Jack.

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Date: October 26 2023 Title: Chapter 25: Run

Certainly a chapter full of a lot of tension. God, you could feel the pressure on Lexi as those three looked at her. And then the presence of Alma's ghost in Lexi's mind. It was an exciting chapter, well written. Keep it up, Jack.

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Date: May 10 2023 Title: Chapter 21: Rewind

Oh wow, this time it's for real. The advanced part of that book is… oh my Kayla. This is getting very serious. Lexi is considering sending her sister to her...? No, it can't be, it's just the nightmare in chapter 2. Although that time in the palette, Bridget did something similar. But if Lexi really does it, it would be I think... the encouragement that Omega would need or what would definitely end their relationship. I like how Bridget compares her sister to a real Enforcer without having passed a course on it. That meeting with Jenna... umm, could it be that she gave her some recommendations :D?. Nah, just kidding. What I mean is that progressively Lexi's thinking is more like that of an Omega.

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Date: December 12 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Corporal

Well, it wasn't as big as I supposed would be Bridget's manual. And from what I can see it is only the beginning. I would have liked Lexi to follow Bridget's instruction and go to the advanced part if was only for a moment. I mean... if the columns of Did you know? rom the Beginners area horrified Lexi I imagine she would faint if she read the horrors committed by Alphas that gave rise to these advanced punishments. Well if Lexi can't lean on Evelyn I guess she could trade some experiences with Jenna, you know... Enforcer to Enforcer. The most enthusiastic Enforcer in all of Aegis with the first and only Alpha Enforcer in all of Aegis history. Hahaha it's a joke.

In retrospect considering the manual I would say that Bridget was soft with Lexi not doing more damage than necessary or at least that's what I understood. It was still huge but I guess this last consideration will somehow affect Lexi's determination. Let's see what happens in the session.

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Date: November 16 2022 Title: Chapter 17: Favor

Oh, wow. It is what we imagined. I start to think and when I read this it reminds me of Melody's case with her sister Ashley. The Omega was unable to do what the Aegis Enforcers did. And yet she reluctantly had to discipline her sister. Bridget launched a spear at her sister. Do you prefer someone else to do it? WOW Although good in theory if that happened that Alpha would have to be caught and placed with an Omega. Oh Lexi what a titanic task, you will have to suffer what Bridget suffered doing this or worse. Since at least your sister did it thinking that she imparted justice but in your case... you don't have that escape. Who knows if the remedy will be worse than the disease.

The other funny thing is that Lexi studies Bridget's manual. A document known only to Aegis Enforcers in its preparation. But could Lexi read it? I mean, there are no issues like the size of the book? The Omega books must be huge in size for an Alpha. Someone would have to help Lexi with this task. And good to recommend Lexi to focus only on Class C sanctions lest the A is read and the unthinkable happens. :)

I would like to know what Lexi's acquaintances think of this. Especially Evelyn. Or will she stay secret? Let's see.



Author's Response: At least some of these considerations you have are answered in the next chapter. Thanks for reading.

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Date: October 16 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Walk

Damm suspense XD... Jack you are killing us here :)



Author's Response: Answers are on the way

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Date: October 05 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Advent

Uff I forget rate. There are here

Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: October 05 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Growth

The suspense again... this is getting more and more interesting. Will Bridget ask Lexi to give her a session? But Lexi doesn't know how to inflict "pain that causes empathy with those you hurt." She got over that pain when she was out for two years. Not to mention that inflicting that pain on her sister is…so hard for her. Let's see what it will be in the next chapter.



Author's Response: These are definitely fair considerations to have, if Lexi was put in a position like that.

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Date: August 23 2022 Title: Chapter 14: Turntable

Damn suspense xd. I think we are reaching if not the climax at least a crucial moment in this story. Bridget seemed very determined that her solution would be the final one but I don't think what I'm thinking of happened in such a short amount of time. I guess we'll have to wait and see what happens. Jacksmith is not a predictable author at all and I suspect that he has a surprise prepared for us hahaha



Author's Response: "Crucial moment" is a good way to put it.

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Date: July 25 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Catch

Oh wow, what an intense chapter. I don't know what effect it will have on Bridget though. Lexi is either a good sister... or a really terrible one. Bridget must have been scared to death. Luckily Evelyn didn't go into Sanctuary with her or things would get worse. It's like a step by step but this really was a very difficult one assuming it worked.

Evelyn will probably put Lexi in an asylum after this haha



Author's Response: This is a case where it may have taken some extreme measures to make anything happen on Lexi's part

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Date: June 15 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Pilgrimage

So that was it. Sanctuary is... like a refuge from what I understood and from its characteristics I think I wasn't so wrong before. It is a place of peace and relaxation for the mind. That haven is for betas apparently who don't want contact with alphas out of trauma or precaution. I think a reviewer at Inheritance said that when I was talking about Nathaniel and his purposes criticizing the mixed zone system. Although there are also Omegas, I think that their main objective is the Betas if their security is so strict. I mean, Lexi could only get through because she was authorized by Kayla. Interesting place, but from the look Bridget gave her adoptive sister, I don't know why I sense that this isn't going to be easy for either of them. I mean, assuming there's a solution. Jack gave us some hints, Chapter 2 Lexi's ghostly appearance, "She could never afford to appear in Lexi's presence", Bridget did, her sister appeared in her presence Chapter 4 Bridget's upset when she broke up her sister's house by mistake Imagine how she feels now after unfairly hurting her sister all because of "unwavering loyalty to the mission of the Omegas". Let's see if she fixes these sisters' relationship at least to some extent. Although it will be difficult.

Author's Response: Yes, that is basically Sanctuary. Mainly a Beta haven with a limited number of Omegas and approved Alphas. Whatever happens next will indeed not be easy for anyone.

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Date: May 07 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Advent

Wow, wow. I assumed that a meeting between Lexi and her mother would happen at some point in the story but I can't even imagine what Lexi would say to her mother after 12 years. Her mother taught her to carry out genocide against the Betas and Lexi was the victim of injustice because of one. Wow, that would kind of confirm in Alma's eyes what she told her daughter. And there are two fundamental facts, Alexandra's 'betrayal' of her mother and the fact that she has not visited in 12 years. Wow, I can't even imagine what those two would say except insults. We will see



Author's Response: It will most likely not be a lovey-dovey conversation

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Date: April 19 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Willpower

Oh, wow. This gets interesting. So a surprise. Umm that didn't sound good at all. Coming from Jenna I think it will not be pleasant for Alma. But judging by what Alma has endured in these 3 chapters, I don't know what could be worse. Let's see



Author's Response: It's definitely a different kind of surprise than Alma is used to with Jenna

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Date: March 10 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Shrink

If there is something to be recognized in Alma, it is that despite everything, she maintains the same ideas. She hasn't changed her mind despite being with the most enthusiastic Enforcer in this entire universe, until now. Although I think that last thing Jenna did may make her see things from another perspective, but in the end I think she will continue to think the same.

But well, I think we will agree that if there has been a true antagonist in these three stories, it has been Alma. Not even Nathaniel, I would say that Alma has been the true villain whose heritage and actions have reached her daughter in an unhealthy way. Let's see what happens to her in this story. I don't know why I have the impression that she will once again do her thing.



Author's Response: You're definitely onto something with Alma and her significance to Lexi's character + the stories she'd appeared in.

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Date: February 15 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Visitation

Sorry for this review after another of the same chapter. I would not want to be considered spam because that is not the intention but I wanted to clarify something. Now that I read it for the fourth time I realize something.

I think a meeting between Jenna and Lexi would be awkward because now I think I understand what the author meant when he said "knowing exactly what the young Enforcer had sitting in a glass cage in her bedroom just a few houses down." If my hypothesis is correct, considering the ending of Omega: Hostage, I would say that she is Lexi's mother, Alma. Although in the end Jenna swallows it, I don't know if she died because of it. Maybe that's why Jenna didn't go to the visit at the Cade house. Oh wow, I hope I'm not spoiling (as always) but I think now I can see why Jenna didn't go to the party.

Wow, incredible, it is very subtle how the situation is described and without using so many words. It is simply magnificent.



Author's Response: Jenna will definitely be making an appearance in this story and her absence from the party will be lightly addressed.

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Date: February 08 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Visitation

Oh wow How many omegas. There are some that I know, and others I don't think so. I don't remember that Alexis Bandera. I guess she is a new character in this story. Benett seems to me that he is the son of the teacher of the history of Omega: Keeper. Dawn I remember her from Omega: Hostage and Claire is always with her imposing attitude from her but at the same time empathic from her. Although she did say something in her speech from She to Lexi that makes me wonder. How will the Omegas make sure that what happened to Lexi doesn't happen again? I remember a reviewer at Inerithance saying the same thing. A beta could do the same to an Alpha and if nobody proves his innocence of him he will be punished just like Lexi. But anyway, I guess you could count on Kayla in those cases. Let's see how the story unfolds.

Another thing that I would like to see at some point in the story is a meeting between Jenna and Lexi hahahaha. That would be nice. Kayla in a conversation with Abby told her that Jenna was the closest to Fire of all the Omegas of this generation. She enjoys her work more than she should and does it with all enthusiasm. But seeing firsthand that injustice can go both ways must have caused something in her mind to contain that sinister Fire. Or maybe she didn't do it at all.

The other most worrying thing about what is happening is Bridget's situation. If Lexi doesn't rescue her from herself she'll collapse from madness. The Alpha has to be strong, this will not be an easy mission.

In short, great story. When I read it I imagine the scenes in my mind as if I were a spectator who empathizes with the characters and therefore feels their emotions. For me it is a true work of art. Let's see how it ends. I honestly don't know how this story doesn't have more reviews or comments because it's a very good story and those comments help motivate the author to continue it.

However, Jack, I assure you that even if it is not enough, I will always be a faithful reader of this literary work.



Author's Response: Because a lot of this story is in Lexi's perspective, we won't actually see what Claire was referring to, but it's safe to say something more active was done than just being extra vigilant. Jenna will be making an appearance in this story. And Bridget is definitely in need now.

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Date: January 10 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Ready

Oh, wow! This gets more and more interesting. Wow, this chapter was a bit short but it contains some important news. That party Evelyn is throwing, wow, I have to read it. Jack please follow this story please don't abandon it. If you can, finish it, it is a very good story. Every time I read it I have a need for more. That Lexi encounter with the Omegas will be crucial. Let's see to what extent Alpha has overcome her fears. I imagine there will be some of the most important people in the Omega universe. Like Claire, Jenna and Melody. Oh crap! I'm already guessing again. Even so, I still worry about Bridget's situation, if that torment causes the Fire to awaken in her it will be fatal. Let's see what comes of all this.



Author's Response: I 100% guarantee that this story will be finished.