Reviewer: SunWarrior343 Signed
Date: April 10 2021
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
This world is very interesting, with some explorations into classism and the potential consequence of advancement (like Mao Zedong's "Great Leap Forward"). However, the one thing I think was handled poorly (and I don't think it's your fault) was part of the main premise and the reason for it to be a giantess story: that only girls got the serum free. I think it would make more sense if the serum just didn't work on many males, because there is no way the male-dominated Senate would agree to make it free to only girls.
That flaw may hamper the story but it doesn't ruin it, as I do still enjoy these GH-X2 stories.
Author's Response: Hey sunwarrior!
Thanks for the review, first critique as a matter of fact, while I agree that this ideology of girls getting the serum for free is a thing that's surprising to think about, think of this as an alternate reality where alphas have existed for a long time thag more and more women have gotten into power also whos to say alpha men on a liberal side supported this bill as well?
I tried to make this story like a prequel to Imagin8's story, and he established that the govt made this event happen, I just figured I explore it a bit more. When I read this I was surprised on how something like that would even be fair to guys, but in this world, it can be a very cruel place. I tend to follow his rules and just expand upon it :)
hope that helps! And thanks again for the honest review!
