Many thanks for this fascinating fiction. If the fictional character, “Brent Tucker”, is a female, this would be an excruciating story. For instance, in Chapter 4, as the author - “Jacksmith” wrote, “Though Larissa’s foot was noticeably smaller than Ms. Perkins’, when he stood at half the size of a human thumb, the hapless office worker couldn’t much appreciate the difference.”. Consequently, if I was underneath Larissa’s supple “size-six foot”, supposing that any part of her sole is pressing on my breasts, I would be in immeasurable pain!

While submitting myself to a mammogram is painful to some extent, but it would be awfully excruciating to be place in this fictional scenario, especially if it happens during the week before my period, as that’s when my breasts will be most sensitive. Keep in mind that breasts are compose of lobules, ducts, for the most part, fatty and fibrous connective tissue, that’s very delicate!

Many thanks for this scatological creative writing. While I realize that it is an imaginary tale, imaginably, a set of thorough descriptions of the imaginative taste of the excrement would be an enrichment. By the way, from a lady’s perspective, there is no need to gently spread apart the vaginal lips to pee.

Author's Response:

Haha thanks. I guess porn has lied to me!

Greetings Kenny,

Many thanks for the valuable feedback.  I’ve been integrating the cultural/moral difference between the Ladies Supremacy Republic (LSR) versus the Asiatic Nation (AN).  Apart from the cultural similarity that both nations are of a female dominant culture.  What's more, the AN has mastered the technology of artificial procreation, so it’s unnecessary to have any male citizen in the AN society. 

Grounded on your storyline, most of the LSR ladies wouldn’t consider any minuscule guy as homo sapiens.  Hence, all minuscule guys are merely consumable products, and this view has been moulded in the LSR’s culture.  In due course, Tess would meet Mark, and learn about his ordeal as a minuscule guy surviving in the LSR.  For the time being, I’ve written a new chapter to bring in the LSR cultural view regarding minuscule guys.  I opted to use an indirect approach by utilizing two Asiatic Nation characters being unsympathetic to the situation that there are frightened, minuscule escapees hiding/moving around in the LSR surroundings, and they merely become accustomed to the LSR ethos.

https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&chapter=40&textsize=3

Sincerely,

Tess

Dear Kenny,

I’ve written a few chapters on various scenarios when the Ladies Supremacy Republic (LSR) team gathers with the Asiatic team.  I placed various subtle hints towards the cultural differences between the two nations.  For example, in the following chapter, I described the different viewpoints on the way that the LSR ladies would view miniscule guys as just a product, such as being used as shoe inserts.  While from the Asiatic nation’s perspective, miniscule ladies have equal rights.

https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&textsize=4&chapter=35

Please have a read & comment.

Tess

Greetings Kenny,
Interestingly, you mentioned that Dianne “could just as easily be Italian” in your earliest chapter, “To the Airport”.  I like to offer a feminine perspective, as it would be better if you would put additional focus on the elegant qualities towards the character.  This way, you would present your appreciation towards her elegance and sophistication.  For example, as follows:
Dianne has all the attributes of the essence of “la bella figura”, the Italian beauty motto, which represents as the “beautiful behavior”.  She has benefitted from a deep Italian upbringing, as she endeavours to conduct herself with articulacy, good manners, and elegance to maintain good relationships with her friends and loved ones.  She has a classic, distinct characteristics that heighten her Mediterranean physique, besides her olive skin, dark eyes, and dark hair, she has aristocratic, high cheekbones, and a nose with a prominent slightly aquiline bridge.  Her figure is somewhat slender women with medium breasts and narrow hips, yet she retains a little curve. 
Cheers, Tess 


Author's Response:

Hey Tess,

Thank you for the review, and I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

Thank you for your suggestion.  To be clear, I'm being deliberately vague with whether or not Dianne is italian (or anything else for that matter) because, in my experience, it's very difficult to actually know where somebody comes from based on appearance alone, and also, because I'm fine with the reader coming up with their own ideas and details for the character, as i think that peoples own imagination often can do a much better job with filling out character details then anything i can write, at least for all readers.

As such, it seems you have come up with your own ideas for the character, which I'm happy works for you.

Kenny

Greetings Kenny,

Your writing style is very imaginative and fairly realistic, it could be enhanced by considering the feminine perspective.  While I am not an airline hostess, if I need to be on my feet, serving meals on a long flight, I would wear a pair of comfortable ballet flats with a 1/2 inch heel height.  A black leather upper will ensure a classic look, while a foam footbed will mold to my foot to ensure comfort.  The key point is that the shoes ought to be comfortable and nice-looking, so I would be able to do all the tasks during the long flight.

Therefore, perhaps it would be better if you include a description of her shoes.

 Tess  

I’ve sent a few
replies to your queries.  Please have a
read.

Hopefully, this soft reminder will give you a bit more of a nudge, I’m enthusiastic to receive your feedback.

Most high-quality hiking socks are made of moisture-wicking threads, which is designed to transfer the perspiration to the surface for swift evaporation to keep the feet dry.  That would mean Dianne’s sweat will be transferred to Mark’s oral cavity rapidly, so Mark should have gotten plenty to drink.  

Allow me to make a suggestion, as I suppose that it would be comical if the stewardesses decided to take Marky back to his native country, where it is legal for women to use miniscule men as insoles.