Crossing the Atlantic on board the SS Queen Mary in 1953, Mrs.Elizabeth Swan notices a young man with a broken heart. She has a taste for young men with broken hearts.
Awesome, just awesome. Love the humor and the villainy of Mrs. Swan.
A depressed young man seeks psychological treatment, but ends up getting more than he bargained for when he shrinks in the office of Dr. Sandra Adams, who has a very unusual appetite.
I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this. Good job so far!
thanks; hope you like the ending
An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life. When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.
Nice story. It actually caught my interest and kept me reading. You've got a great perception for detail and describing intangible things.
thanks! that's one of the fun things for me; it's like a puzzle to word things that don't really have a wording, if you know what i mean
Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.
Dear lord man, the last two chapters have really taken a horrifying turn for the worse. I'm really interested to see how the hell they'll get out of this girl's grasp. (or even IF)
yes, "if" is a very good factor to be taking into consideration right now. thanks for reviewing
Jeez... story is brutal. I like it though. It's a more realistic take on what would actually happen in this situation. Like kind of exploring what the character and mental state of people would have to be for a) the perpetrator (julia) and b) the victims.
Someone mentioned comic relief and another questioned Jack's sexuality... I'd say after the chapter with Beth getting viciously murdered, any chance of comic relief at this point would feel forced and out of place. As for questioning Jack... Um... I can't imagine any reasonable human being finding any sexual satisfaction in the acts he's being forced to do, especially considering he is the only one that can affect the outcome of his friends' lives. I'd say, his actions are perfectly normal. It would be odd if he didn't react in such ways and kinda paint him as being a bit psychotic too. Which actually brings up a good point. If you're going for a darker ending... Could be that none of them get out of this and Jack kind of loses a bit of grip on his sanity and is forever captive to Julia.
PS: Deleted my previous comment because I forgot to rate and put it on the wrong chapter. =P
thanks for reading/reviewing. i'm glad that you like the tone i'm using here, and that you get my reasoning with avoiding explicitly comedic stuff. as i continued writing this and found it getting bleaker and bleaker i decided my best bet was to just go all in and make it a darkly depressing slog of giantess content. while i don't want to give away the ending, it's probably no secret based on the previous chapters that the conclusion won't be the prettiest thing
Well, this is a bit of a surprise. Where is Jack planning to take this?
well, besides Julia's nipples, he's planning to take it to [spoilers]
Inspired by message board posts. Various shorts about big girls.
This chapter was seriously funny. You win.
22 passengers on a bus are in for the ride of their life.
A disaster leaves one small girl straining to survive under the harsh reality of the new world she has been thrown in to.
Will update summary as story progresses :)
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OF course, the police show up and all hell breaks lose! haha, I'm liking the story so far. You're writing style is fluid and enjoyable. Keep it up!
Doesn't it always?
Though... who said anything about it being the police? ;) Stay tuned to find out...
