I read this review and was initially going to respond quickly and angrily at it but decided that it would be better to think over it a few days before a response. It calmed those feelings and made me remember that not everyone likes every story and that is how it is with writing, then you wrote two reviews and that is when it got interesting. I still decide to wait and respond to think and respond accordingly. I will try to be nice for this one. This story is from a previous author that left the story on writing.com as an interactive story so I decided to make additions, the different authors should be noted who wrote it, that is how the premise of the story is. I have rules and stuff for the story additions I make so try to follow it with my own ideas. The main theme of the story is that Steve is losing control of himself and his life as the women in his life try to take advantage of it, get drunk on it, and manipulate him. He thought he was ready but he wasn’t and an accident caused a chain reaction caused somethings to change in his female friend’s desires and lusts. I also take suggestions and reviews and try to put them in the story as best as I can. That is part of the nature of this story and you seemed to have beef with the readers then as they help along with the story, the weak willed is part of how the story plot goes with him having to lose control, else it doesn’t go anywhere, and reviewers asking to make him can’t control his lust around the women in his life, so you have a problem with a lot of readers here.