A toy meets a woman who sees him for what he is, and asks him where he came from.
DXMachina, what can I say? You're the Tolkien to our fantasy, the Lovecraft to our horror. You're just the best. I particularly appreciate the quality of plot, writing, and editing, which set you so far apart from other writers. It's also been rewarding to see you grow as an author over the years. I've been hooked since "Change for a 22". Keep it up!
Sincerely,
Atrus
A depressed young man seeks psychological treatment, but ends up getting more than he bargained for when he shrinks in the office of Dr. Sandra Adams, who has a very unusual appetite.
I'm likely your work more and more, especially the "A Little Blackmail" series. Especially recently.
This was very different from that in terms of the "giantess" character, and I think it was really terrific! I applaud your decision to flesh it out and give it a last chapter. I think that makes the doctor, and the plot, much more interesting, and makes the story a true pleasure to read. I'll admit, I'm a bit inspired, and that's not generally what I go to this site for.
You have my thanks.
I've moved my stories and their continuations over to the Kindle Store. The Website won't allow me to delete the story, so I'm sorry for having to remove it like this.
Hey! You seem to like reviews, so I thought I'ld leave you one. I like the setting, and the dialogue is a higher standard than we typically get. If I were to recommend anything, I would not introduce any more characters, because I don't really know who everyone is.
Keep up the great work!
Well, I only request reviews so I can tell if my story is being well received, that and I'm quite interested in catering it to the tastes of my audience.
As for the recommendation, I'll take it into consideration, but the reason I'm adding so many, is to create multiple rivalries within the group of fifty students. That way, I can lead up all the different aspects of the fetishes within different groups.
It will enable me to incorporate a lot more action, I'm just putting in the ground work. If you'd like, I could write up an alternate chapter that summarises all the different characters?
Thornton
Thanks for the review, any favourite characters?
A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.
This story just keeps getting better and better. Please continue!
Terrence is about to be married to someone other than Kitty, which she can't tolerate.
Hi Aborigen! As a long time GTS fan, I think this story shows a lot of promise! It seems like you see this being a sort of wide-ranging, travelling story, but I love the chemistry between the two characters you've already introduced. I hope we'll be seeing more interaction between them soon.
P.S. I never thanked you for "First Deconstruction" :
"I didn't hear any of that," said the young woman, removing her jeans. "I'm too sexy for my ears to work properly, as you can see by my curvaceous, firm young bottom in frilly lace panties. Observe as I proffer my nubile frame to you, a miniaturized version of a strange man I've never seen before, yet I libidinously take to you like a duck to water." She thought a moment. "A duck that really wants to have sex with water, that is. A duck that, upon finding a strange little shot glass of water, not knowing what's really in it, wants to put it into its body anyway."
OH, I laughed so hard.
Thank you! I'm surprised to run into anyone who remembers the old material. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope this story turns out as well as you imagine.
Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.
Gah, this is REALLY good. It's odd, I haven't really seen this scenario played out before in GTS. Good tension. I feel like Julia's just a really awkward person, so she has no idea how to respond to Jack's "affections". Really interesting.
Wow, you really have a huge amount of this story written already! But you say it's unfinished? This is a silly question, but how much is unwritten, would you say? Although, given your "A Little Blackmail" series, I guess this is still in its early stages...
Anyway, I wanted to highlight a story on Giantess City which I'm reading at the same time as I eagerly await more tales of Julia and friends.
It's "In Fran's Hands" by Micro Ozzy. http://giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=88981
I feel like Julia and Fran are sort of similar in that I get the impression, especially from recent chapters, that Julia really doesn't have a lot of friends, or good social skills with people her own age and size. The school nerdette having a "private hunk" at home is really intriguing.
Micro Ozzy's style is actually rather similar to yours as well. Much less words, but still... certain key phrases that are especially evocative.
The line this chapter: "As Julia reaches for me, her tongue pokes outside her mouth, not in a licking kind of way, but almost in a greedy, thoughtful way."
So good.
Please continue!
I'm not sure how much is unwritten. I have major plotpoints planned in my head, but I'm not sure how long those will end up being in words.