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Paul in Wonderland by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Paul's love of all things Alice in Wonderland sends him down the rabbit hole when his entire family discovers his fetish and decides to do something about it.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9182 Read Count: 52499
[Report This] Published: August 23 2017 Updated: August 29 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: August 25 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

My timesink^whobby when I'm waiting for the next chapter: figuring out alternative endings.

They've been mandatory in Queensville stories for almost a year now, you know... ;)

Author's Response:

Hehe. Hopefully it's not a disappointment to hear there's only one ending to this one, though there's plenty of fun to come before that ending.

Tall Drink of Shrink by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

An inventor looking to get ahead in life accidentally helps create a phenomenon which will rebalance the world of men and women, and in the process, turn him into the perfect slave for his terrifying and beautiful boss Ms. Hoshoku.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25622 Read Count: 151514
[Report This] Published: August 25 2017 Updated: October 04 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: August 30 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That final question is probably the most unexpected dialogue I've seen in your stories (and that's after many surprises coming from you)



Author's Response:

It's definitely meant to stop one in one's tracks

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: September 04 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

After Judy Stevens I thought her subtle game was the best, but these chapters look like they're proving me wrong.

 

@AnonymousCommissioner I owe you a drink or something



Author's Response:

Ha! Well, to be fair, Hoshoku's subtle game gets more and more unsubtle with each chapter now.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: September 07 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

A gentleman would hold her weight, but I'll forgive him because he was taken by surprise... seriously, I love this story!



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it. More's on the way soon.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: September 09 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm trying to imagine Ms Hoshoku's reaction if she found out about Mariah&Ben in the elevator... mostly because it's less tantalizing than waiting for the marketing campaign :)

If (IF) I remember I'll try to comment a bit less here - I do love the story, but I'm disturbingly close to writing 50% of its comments, and it feels disturbing.

Author's Response:

We may yet get to see how Hoshoku reacts to others "using" Ben.

Ha! I mean, I appreciate getting feedback no matter the number of sources. This one seems to attract fewer opinions than some of the other custom stories I've been posting recently.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: September 13 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

He probably must feel bad if he can't even hold her, but I'm willing to bet

she will congratulate his performance instead (and he will wish she didn't).

Even worse, according to the tags this story is going all the way down, to an inch and below - I can't wait to see that! (and everything before that)

 

PS "displaying him in the afterglow his own..."



Author's Response:

The majority of this story is definitely spent with Ben at a comparatively larger size, like he is now, but by the ending we'll see him at a size much closer to the usual kinds of stories I write.

And good catch.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: September 19 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

After chapter 11 I was tempted to ask about Kendra - is she coming to the rescue? will she notice he looks distressed make him explain what happened? (I didn't ask because it sounded too similar to a previous comment of mine)

Turns out the answer was very surprising - as usual :)

Author's Response:

This story's world is basically a nonstop series of unfortunate turns for Ben and a loss of what small blessings he previously had

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: September 25 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Still no guesses about the outfit? nobody? Well, "chi fa da sè fa per tre", so...

1. gym outfit; would explain the importance of showering himself...

2. some kind of, uhm, "predator" -- tiger, cavewoman

3. something that should be only worn at home, say, nightgown and pink fuzzy slippers



Author's Response:

All possible but none exactly correct ;)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 04 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I thought she was going to share him at the office, and I kinda miss that it didn't happen.

Aaand his shrinking spurts are a bit too fast, unfortunately for poor Ms Hoshoku he won't last long.

 

There, I had to go out of my way to say bad things about this story :D



Author's Response:

It's fair to feel how you feel about the end. Ultimately this was a commission order, so it had a predetermined story path.

Family Punishment by Glazer Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

A 16 year old boy shrinks himself after being grounded to sneak out of his house but things take an unexpected turn when his mother catches him and shares him with the family to punish.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Humiliation, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25064 Read Count: 162409
[Report This] Published: September 07 2017 Updated: November 11 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 22 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Monstrous Mother

Giant men make me puke (nothing personal, just different tastes - now where is my brain bleach?).
Giant sisters... ugh...
Giant mothers - I mentally replace them with generic authority figures, or someone else's mom at least.

Yet I'm still reading and plan to keep on reading, hope you'll keep writing!

Author's Response:

Haha thanks, I'll take this as a compliment.  I'm glad you like it.  I'm not really a fan of giant men either but I just wanted to make the story a little different.

Thanks for reading and continuing reading!

Executive Decision by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

A college kid's infatuation with his flirty older neighbor and her beautiful feet will trap him unwittingly into a mutually beneficial arrangement.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9865 Read Count: 111536
[Report This] Published: September 24 2017 Updated: October 31 2017
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: September 29 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This looks very promising!

And while I'm not sure I wrote it down, someone using the prmd to have consensual fun is something I wanted to see, so a HUGE(*) "thank you" to TalkingHead for the commission!



(I tried writing the scripts for a few custom videos and got stuck on choosing what happens. They've been there since 2015 iirc, so if you see a custom video on c4s with say five alternative endings it's probably me :)

Author's Response:

Consensual fun with a PMRD is something I've toyed with using more before in my stories, so it was a good fit to have a commission so in that vein.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 01 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yep, but next chapter will be the end of tall drink, and if we average we get (goodnews + badnews)/2 = I have no strong feelings one way or the other ;)

Author's Response:

A kind of harmony there

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 19 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Shrunken without noticing? That must be the most - ok, you know it already; just make Judy take that as a challenge if you can :)

@Carycomic fyi one of my first guesses at how the story would go is that she would catch them and have him stay shrunken for a stupid amount of time (too much of a good thing etc)

Author's Response:

Judy's likely accomplished that at least a few times in Scott's life.

It would indeed be awkward to be caught now.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 31 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

For some reason I thought it was going to be longer, but still... :D

Author's Response:

Well, there may be a longer one sometime if it gets commissioned (hence its open end)

Are you still alive? by Luidgi Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Annie is a shrinker.

She ran away from home to live her own life in New York city. She meets Marilyn, the woman who's got the appartment above hers. 

Read The Insole Girl for reference. I would like to thank Exiguus. This is a fan fiction of what you created.

Enough said.

 

 

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Lesbians, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3031 Read Count: 43452
[Report This] Published: October 11 2017 Updated: April 17 2018
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting the Ballerina

Fan fiction of the insole gitl? Xmas came early this year!!!

 

For the record, I was thinking of commissioning something in the opposite direction, ie someone goes from some big city without shrinkers to some place where they are common, but this story will do - 2nd time in a few weeks that someone writes something akin to something I wanted to commission, can you believe it? :D



Author's Response:

I do! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 19 2017 Title: Are you still alive?

As much as I dislike cigarettes, I'll be glad to make an exception this time :D

Author's Response:

There is something about it that I like, even if I do not smoke. Perhaps attitude, an object of dominance. 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 23 2017 Title: Are you still alive?

I thought her tears would be the only surprise in the chapter, and I was wrong - I just didn't think I'd be SO wrong!

Waiting for the next chapter just became more difficult...

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 25 2017 Title: Are you still alive?

Two minor notes to make the wait more bearable

  1. dirt doesn't regrow in this world - "doesn't unshrink" in the words of Exiguus.
  2. because of the story twist, here's my (now obsolete) prediction - Annie ends up paying the rent to live in Marylin's shoe. Btw, do you have the plot laid out? Just to know if playing "guess what happens next" is ok, you know :)

 

Btw, something you have in common with Exiguus: re-readability.

Partially because he makes so many edits and rewrites with every new chapter (which makes him so slow), I always end up rereading the whole story whenever he posts anything; well, I found that you & Exiguus make some of the stories that I enjoy rereading (often) the most. Not sure why or if others agree, but for me that's how it is.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the extended review, I really appreciate it. You're right that dirt shoudn't unshrink, I just kind had the feeling Annie would feel dirty, maybe I'll go back and change it. As for the plot, it is laid out in my head. Sometimes I write the whole story and publish chapters one at a time, sometimes I just write a chapter and publish it when it's ready, which is this case. Playing what happens next is just fine :P

Thanks for your comments. I re-read one of my own story recently, "Lisa and Mary" And there were things in there that I had forgotten I wrote, it was funny to read it again. 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 27 2017 Title: Are you still alive?

Probably the first time Marilyn enjoys Annie AND lets her know - I'm sure Annie is expert enough to realize it. After all the bad news, about time!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 28 2017 Title: Are you still alive?

I just noticed that the "Still alive" that opens the story was NOT while dancing, it was at work in December, ie three months after the story begins; somehow I missed the dates and ended up misunderstanding a few things.

Oh well, good to know it (probably) ends in the best way :D

Author's Response:

You got it. 

The story is a leap in the past from that moment in December. ;P

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.