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Julia by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 450]
Summary:

Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134130 Read Count: 1102074
[Report This] Published: November 05 2011 Updated: July 20 2015
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: May 14 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60: The Miracle of Life and Death

It seems like Anna's death took most of us by surprise somehow - possibly because we assumed that anything bad would start from Julia somehow? You hinted she would be doing something to make her look bad in the next few chapters, I hope she'll take Anna's corpse and throw it away like garbage. Ok, maybe "I hope" isn't the best choice of words here, but since she spoke of the baby as a (bug? rodent?), just about anything that doesn't involve hurting Anna jr. looks suddenly better in comparison - a lot better.

 

On the bright side, carrying a baby is much easier than carrying a pregnant/weak Anna. That this is the only "bright" side I see tells a lot :(



Author's Response:

You're probably right on the reactions to it; up to now, it's been Julia snuffing people out directly. Still, I didn't want to just happily gloss over the fact that Anna's been going through a pregnancy in gulag conditions. Julia's reaction to the baby may surprise a few people as well, given her attitude to tiny people up to this point, though it's still not going to be an easy getaway.

You are definitely correct there: having to carry along Anna on the way out would probably have guaranteed failure. I guess we'll just have to wait and see now.

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Date: May 16 2014 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61: Everything Happens at Once

The way the chapter ended is just above comments - at least mine; I'll just say www.reddit.com/r/fffffffuuuuuuuuuuuu/.

 

While she may still be... well, herself with the child (count her as a new toy, leave her dad out of the game - you name it), now at least we can hope that whatever nasty thing she was supposed to do will not be against an infant ^^

 

The one thing that makes me worry is that the child still lacks a name - the smart thing to do would be to tell Julia, suggest a few candidates and ask her opinion, but given they had no time to think about it, Anna's death and about a zillion other reasons...



Author's Response:

Hmm, I suppose I've convinced you to come back for the next chapter, then?

You're correct about the baby. Julia's still Julia, but she's got a slightly different side to her that will eventually become more obvious now that the baby's here.

The baby's name will come into things a little later on, and you are right, there are a few more pressing matters at hand.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: May 19 2014 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His

"I saw a hole in the wall. Under the flower stool outside."

"There's a hole in the batrhoom sink wall behind the blow dryer stand"

 

It looks like none of us were really paying attention :)

To my (partial) justification, between tv shows and relatives/neighbors/whatever discussing how someone arranged somehing in their house, this topics bore me to the point I actively try to ignore them - kinda like the "shoe shopping" gags in scrubs.

Still, it's been there in plain sight.

For a few rl days.

RESPECT!

(and if anyone noticed and decided not to spoil the surprise - sorry, too latefor taking credit, but thank you anyway)



Author's Response:

Hehe. Glad to hear Jack succeeded in pulling a fast one on not just Charlie but you as well.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63: The Run

As another side effect of the long pause. it took me a few seconds to remember why they had to take the risk of running now rather than wait.

 

So now they entered a hole in the wall, they don't know exactly where to go, they have to decide while Julia is trying to get them, she knows where they are, her mind is... whatever it is, and unless the hole is unrealistically big she will have to try to catch them from the outside - or surprise them.

Someday that is.

A part of me wishes you had stopped right after chapter 62, you know?

On the other hand, it's more time to let things settle down and try to figure out wtf is going to happen, so I guess it's fine (it also looks like the next few chapters will be veeeeery important, so prepare them well).



Author's Response:

Oh believe me, I'm going to be taking the next chapters very seriously! I know there are a lot of factors to juggle to keep up the tension. Thanks for reading/reviewing.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65: Front Lines

I just can't read this story unless I have enough time and no distraction whatsoever, so it took me some time...
"I haven’t had the privilege in looking at" (is "in looking" ok?)

Just a quick comment; now if you'll excuse me I'll go back to reading, I have maybe 30/60 minutes left...

Author's Response:

I don't blame you; it's definitely a time commitment to read this story. Thanks for catching the typo.

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Date: June 23 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66: Sucker for Ultimatums

While they were running I couldn't stop thinking of a stupid kid movie with John Goodman - he has a stethoscope and he's looking for two little (elves, whatever) hiding like our heroes.

And "baby Julia" - it was pretty clear she wouldn't let Brian pick a name, but naming her in her 1st little speech was one of Julia's best moves imho.

And "the sound of chain links ticking", I thought it was a dog.

And for all they know she might shrink the maid.

And "The living room is huge, even" - "even"???

Aaaaand... back to reading dammit!

Author's Response:

Now there's an interesting connection. Glad you liked Julia's name pick. Shrinking the maid is a possibility, though Julia's smart enough to know when to pick people who would be missed and eventually lead back to her. As always, I appreciate your thoughts.

Mommy's Time-Out by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

A loving but strict mother disciplines her party-hard teenage son using a shrinking apparatus and a pair of high heels.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Couples , Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8107 Read Count: 121483
[Report This] Published: January 16 2012 Updated: January 19 2012
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: January 17 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Not Party Time

The wait is killing me... Keep going!

The Insole Girl by exiguus Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 100]
Summary:

A girl finds herself under her mother and friend's feet constantly, in a world where people wear other people in their shoes.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17619 Read Count: 210884
[Report This] Published: April 16 2012 Updated: May 16 2014
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 31 2016 Title: Chapter 7: The Gigantic Girl-Crush

"I had planned to put you right back in my shoe the when get home"

I'm sure your OCD will make you rush here and correct that, and then you won't be able to stop, and write another chapter... bwahahahaha!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: May 18 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Underfoot and Out-of-Mind

"you're lucky to me my daughter" :)

 

More seriously: reading slowly & side-by-side may be slow, especially with real life going on in parallel, but it's very rewarding.

And most of the changes are very effective (one for all: her mom's refusal to go to the hospital looks way better now; and having read this chapter, the part about her mom "going easy" on her makes more sense).



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for pointing that out.  It's fixed now. :)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2014 Title: Chapter 10: The Secret-Secret

I think I took the habit of rereading the previous chapters of this story when you switched POV in the classroom&Anna chapters, and it's been always worth it.

I'm not done yet because I have the previous versions saved and I'm reading them more or less side by side, ie slowly - but unless you've been bitten by the same bug as Jacksmith, I should probably finish before you're ready with the next chapter ;p

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad the revisions aren't bothering you. I sort of see the chapters as still being in a "first draft" form. You'll probably more than anything notice some shifts in dialogue, if you're comparing them side by side.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: February 26 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Momma's Little Insole

Looks like Alisa and I are the only ones who can't wait to see Ms. Pattie again :(

Seriously, it's great to see you're back!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: March 08 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Sister's Keeper

XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD

 

I can't help re-reading Ms Pattie's last sentence and think of what that "something" could be...

Anyway, great to see you seem to have enough spare time to write two chapters in a few days!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 23 2012 Title: Chapter 7: The Gigantic Girl-Crush

It's great to see you keeping the story in good shape rather than just adding!

I was wondering if there's a clean way to see chapter 6 as it was before the rewrite thoug -- I have it on my hard disk, so np for me, but I think that getting to see both sides of the story is a definite win.

Now I can't wait to see Ms Pattie.

 

 

 

Keep going!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback.  I figured someone would ask that, and I did give that option some thought, but I do think the story flows better without the distraction of switching characters.  Also, I did make enough changes to the dialogue that things don't align perfectly anymore, so I would have to rewrite the original chapter again for it to truly make sense.

Thanks for commenting!

Pawned! by ShrunkByGrrlz Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

A teenager and his friend are used as chess pieces by his mother and teenage sister.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Mouth Play, Maternal, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6134 Read Count: 54515
[Report This] Published: September 27 2012 Updated: April 06 2013
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Queen's Knight

Even if there hasn't been much action (yet?) I love this story -- the way it's written makes it worth to wait for such a looooong time between updates ;p

Time-Out 3: Son of the Year by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Scott Stevens’ life becomes a living hell when his mother Judy gets her shrink ray license, giving her legal permission to use it on him and his siblings anytime she wants. 

A prequel to the Time-out stories.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10294 Read Count: 100888
[Report This] Published: October 24 2012 Updated: November 07 2012
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 07 2012 Title: Time-Out 3: Son of the Year

I think I've run out of compliments some chapters ago.
Glad to hear there will be another episode in this great series.

Author's Response:

thanks for the review

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Judy's Beginning

“I have… TWO feet”

I love the way such a trivial sentence can be so effective.

Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Law Won

I can't comment much because... well' there's hardly anything atm :)

Anyway I think the episodes of this series are your best stories -- the first 2 episodes were great, I have no reason to doubt this prequel will be just as good.

 

Thank you for writing them!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: October 30 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Kicking Back

Glad to hear it will be longer than 5 chapter, it definitely didn't look like it as close to the end.



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Irresponsible

"Then in that case, you can add on an extra day to the punishment" -- I love the idea, and the way it fits naturally in the chapter is worth a whole giantess story.

The only bad thing is.. well, the wait is killing me! I should probably banish myself from this site and come back when the story is finished ;p



Author's Response:

this story is mostly already written, so the wait won't be that long

Time-Out 4: Boot Camp by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Scott Stevens once again finds himself shrunken and in the hands of his sister Maggie, who brings her tiny sibling along for a week of soccer camp. When her teammates discover the miniature teen, he'll find himself in problems even deeper than giant shoes.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14746 Read Count: 125609
[Report This] Published: November 29 2012 Updated: December 09 2012
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed
Date: December 03 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark

Imho the story is just as good s the previous episodes, both in the story itself and how it's written. 'nuff  said.

Re the sister thing, I'm quite perplexed.

Myself, I don't like the idea -- it's the very reason why I din't read the blackmail series, and by "didn't read" I don't mean "read without commenting", or "read and complained afterwards": I just din't want to read it, so I didn't.

Yet this story is not really disturbing to me(*): they haven't done anything disgusting, you wrote they wouldn't (I trust you on that!), and I can't really imagine the story making any sense using a neighbor/friend/schoolmate/whatever(*), at the _very_ least because the beginning would become absurd; and as long as the story is good enough that

  • I don't know what's going to happen next ("it wasn't Maggie")
  • Reading it N times is always a pleasure


I guess I can just stay focused on what's happening rather than who Maggie is.
But maybe it's just me.

 

 

PS

When you finish this story and move to something else, please consider moving to "Mommy's Time-out 5".

 

 

(*) other than the "big/little brother", but nvm
(**) Where's his girlfriend from the 1st episode btw?



Author's Response:

I may take a break from the series before moving onto the 5th iteration, but it'll definitely be back since the short episodes don't take long to write, and as it happens my plan was to bring his girlfriend back from the first story to participate in the fun again.  thanks for reviewing/sharing your thoughts

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