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Julia by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 450]
Summary:

Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134130 Read Count: 1101992
[Report This] Published: November 05 2011 Updated: July 20 2015
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Date: August 08 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Bright Side of Life

Charlie makes an interesting point, you have to take some joy in the small stuff or you'll go batshit insane.

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Date: August 15 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Beth

Well Julia has managed to outwit Carly in one mannor, "Eliminate the problem before it becomes one".



Author's Response:

as Julia is quite a bit more murderously psychotic than Carly, naturally she's obsessively paranoid as well

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Date: March 06 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: Booby Trap

The plot thickens....



Author's Response:

that it does, sir. thanks for reviewing

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Date: January 22 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Flesh Sin

Another excellent chapter that leads me to the awaiting climax whenever it shall come.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review

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Date: January 07 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Dream Girls

A wonderful mysterious chapter that will no doubt leave me thinking till the next update or the answer is resolved.

 

Great to see this back.



Author's Response:

mystery was definitely the intent there!

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Date: November 21 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Grub

I've been waiting for this a for awhile now.

 

I can sense big things coming and can't wait to read each one.

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Date: October 20 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Sorry got the wrong story mixed up in my post but I kind of imagine Julia is in some way a student at June and Carly's school lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. It's not a bad theory. Through tiny cameos and references to similar devices in the respective timelines, though, I do have an interconnected universe of sorts for all of the stories I've written for this site, but it's kind of hard to notice if you're not looking for it.

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Date: October 20 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: The New Room Order

I know want to know what that school is doing to these young ladies...

 

Also another brilliant chapter.

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Date: August 13 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: The Visitor

It's game time folks.

 

It's 3rd and 1...what happens next has me most interested. 



Author's Response:

it is indeed game time, although Julia's probably the only one who would view it that way

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Date: August 20 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: The People Zoo

Not sure how this will end but damn crazy Julia is going to add for some fun times in the final act.

 

 



Author's Response:

undoubtedly so. thanks for the review

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Date: November 10 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

I have to say this is an excellent stop over while waiting for the escapes of Carly and hopefully down the line Alison...

I enjoy the fact you added the bit of realism with the pregnancy as taboo as it is in a fetish format it adds a bit more sympathy to the two characters directly involved especially Brian.

Excellent work.



Author's Response:

thanks! i felt like it would be an interesting risk to take to toss in that part of the story. carly will return soon. alison i'm not so sure about; i'm not sure if there's a ton of interest there for people

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Date: August 18 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Judge, Jury, and Executioner

I want to be said for Beth but I kind of view her as a potential martyr if the story plays out how I'm thinking.

Still you wrote one hell of a memorable death scene good sir.



Author's Response:

thanks!

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Date: August 17 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: New Member of the Family

*sits patiently for the continuation*

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Date: October 09 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost

I am stunned to say this but this may be one of your best chapters ever. You really feel hs mind slipping away with each paragraph.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad I still have the ability to up the ante.

A Little Blackmail 4: Big Sister Diaries by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 89]
Summary:

The sadistic tales of Carly Arton as she abuses and toys with her shrunken brother Jack.

Set between A Little Blackmail 2: Carly's Pet Brother and A Little Blackmail 3: Life of a Toy.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40786 Read Count: 267692
[Report This] Published: December 17 2011 Updated: May 30 2015
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Date: February 10 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Attack of the Fifty Foot Sister

How I've missed Ms. Carly.



Author's Response:

:) thanks for reviewing!

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Date: October 31 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Third Wheel

In Carly we love, honor and obey.

 

Though for being the big bad here you kind of feel for her a bit. Nice job painting Brad as sleezoid.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review. my goal with this 4th story is definitely to at least let people feel things from Carly's side, if not sympathize a bit despite her craziness

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Date: February 18 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 1)

CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRLLLY!

Author's Response:

Bonanza!

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Date: April 01 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Arton's Dogs

How could you have Carly lose you mons...I mean yes a fine chapter in scientific studies and human nature. 

 

Bravo old bean.



Author's Response:

I will never be forgiven for Blackmail 3. I've come to terms with that.

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Date: May 30 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: A "Big" Sister

If Duke Nukem forever can come out then Half Lif...er Blackmail 5 can too. Also I still love Carly the only downside is I still wished she had a sister to torment...though I am kind of wondering if at some point in the future she meets up with Julia or at least June.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hopefully Blackmail 5 is more of a Toy Story 3 than a Duke Nukem Forever in terms of payoff for a long wait. And isn't one tortured sibling enough for Carly to have??

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Date: February 26 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 2)

Carly just has a way at making everything she does no matter how mundane, humiliating or even dangerous just so damn amazing.

Looking forward to part five my good man.



Author's Response:

Thanks man.  Carly's one of my favorites to write.  I swear part 5 is coming someday, probably once I'm closer to ending one of my unfinished stories.

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