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Adela by scrymgeour Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

At the beginning of the school year, a student named Martin finds himself shrunk and in the clutches of his old English teacher, Ms. Holly. He soon learns that she and her daughter, Adela, may have bigger plans in store for him--and the world.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Holly's Library
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36380 Read Count: 297235
[Report This] Published: August 29 2012 Updated: December 02 2012
Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Lovely chapter.

 

You can sense something big is coming with Holly yet Adela still keeps her hand unshown for the most part.



Author's Response:

Yes. Something big is definitely coming. Thanks again for the review.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

The shit has hit the fan it would seem.

 

Well I've ridden it out this far thus there is no turning back now. Lead on good sir, lead on.



Author's Response:

The crisis had to come at some point (but I did want to surprise the reader a little). I hate stories that go on forever and then end with something to the effect of "and the two of them lived happily together like this, for a long time, in sort of the same way." (Still, when this story ends, it'll leave a lot of room for a sequel.)

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Adela is just one of the girls/characters who seem horrible but you just have to love them.

 

Holly may be in for the fight of her life.



Author's Response:

Yeah. I wonder what other people think of her. To me, every time she leaves the house it's like watching a huntress set out into the jungle, or something.

But personally, I like her too. Though I think she has one major flaw; she's sees love, etc., as something that's fundamentally absurd--at a basic level, she can't take things she thinks of as absurd and look at them in a serious way. This helps the story in some ways (but I won't go into that).

Also, I don't want her to fit into those sadistic/gentle or cruel/playful categories. (Most people are neither fully sadistic, gentle, cruel, or playful anyway--and I can't take writers seriously who think about their characters like that.)

Thanks for the review. I want to get this story done before November, and start something that really appeals to me.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Adela has now blossomed from misunderstood psycho to warm hearted goddess...

 

Martin is a lucky man...a potentially dangerously close to the fire...but lucky man.



Author's Response:

Agreed, in part. It's taken me fifteen chapters to show why this story is titled "Adela" and not "Holly." But I'm there.

Thanks for the review, AdamX.

--D

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

The plot thickens with the once terrifying Adela slowly morphing into a lovely young lady of virtue...well at-least a bit nicer.



Author's Response:

I like that: "lovely young lady of virtue." It's totally false, of course, but I almost wish it were true!

Thanks again for reading.

--scrymgeour

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Our little crazy chick is gaining a heart?

 

Very interesting read.



Author's Response:

Yep. Though it's raisin-sized, for the moment.

Thanks again for your review.

--D

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I have a feeling Holy knew already or at-least Adela thus why she didn't put her in her shoe to my knowledge for punishment.

 

Excellent chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm happy I wrote this episode. I was going to skip along something else, last night, but the idea of Holly 'punishing' Meredith in this way happened to strike me after the first or second paragraph, and I wanted it all down in writing. Never read something like that before. I didn't plan on Meredith's having a fetish, when I wrote her, but it seems pretty obvious now when I look back.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Kudos on not making Adela the -sympethetic soul- just yet or at all. I'm really liking this one.



Author's Response:

No, Adela is my designated psychotic or sadist for this story (I don't mind typecasting her). I got the name from Bruno Schulz's 'Cinnamon Shops/Street of Crocodiles' book of short stories, and was surprised to find that it's already been used on the site a number of times. (So maybe others had the same idea?--Its use here is way out of proportion to its popularity as a name.)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Adela is going to make a terrifying world leader...

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm looking forward to writing those last chapters. On the one hand, this story could end with a short, teasing epilogue, and on the other it could move into a Part II, which deals with the NWO scenario (maybe without Martin as the narrator). There are several interesting ways this could go.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed
Date: August 29 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Very interesting start.

 

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks. It's a variation on a common fantasy, and I think I'll enjoy writing it.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed
Date: August 30 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Well writen and crafted, I'm making this a daily stop...well whenever you update anyways.



Author's Response:

Thanks again. I've got a number of ideas for this story (as many as the categories I've tagged to it), so it may go on for awhile. Hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Another excellent chapter good sir.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I appreciate the rating (and comment). Keep reading!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

GLAD TO SEE IT BACK!

 

Was kind of hoping to learn what Adela was up to with Meri but that can be fleshed out later hopefully.

 

I await the next chapter good sir.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Ah. I may put in a retrospective--from M's POV--of that night and other events (like the field trip at the museum) during a later chapter. Could be interesting. I didn't want to snap the thread of Martin's narrative too soon, though, or give him the privilege of sharing too many of Meredith's experiences.

Anyway, Adela is coming back in the next chapter.

-scrymgeour

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Wonderful new addition and Adela makes things even more clearer to us but not the little one.



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the review.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Excellent good sir, you're crafting masterpiece. 



Author's Response:

Happy you like it so far. I'll type out the next few chapters tomorrow, when I have time.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Kind of peaceful and serene. You know what they are capable of but the fact remains if he follows the rules it would not be so bad being Martin.



Author's Response:

Yep. Felt the story needed a little contrast after all the tension and sustained violence of the first few chapters. Thanks again for following along. The next few chapters will be coming shortly.

-D

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I was curious when we were going to get to see a tiny woman added in. This really is becoming one of my favorite reads of all time.



Author's Response:

I haven't written about tiny/shrunken women yet, but I'll try to develop her over the next couple of chapters. Meredith will stay until the end, I'm pretty sure (which may be next week or the week after). - D

Sweat & Tears by kyary Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Joe gets a new roommate, amazonesque basketball player Alex. But it's not all roses when the pheromones released in her sweat seem to have a strange effect on him. The sweet girl might not be so nice forever when her trauma and desires comingle with the state of her dwindling roommate.


Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Muscle, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14086 Read Count: 141953
[Report This] Published: September 18 2012 Updated: October 23 2012
Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 26 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Honestly the shrinking can take as long as it needs. The interactions between these two alone are amazing thus even with the site format the size changing can wait as long as it possibly can.

 

Great stuff!



Author's Response:

Oh, I didn't mean to imply anything with the shrinking comment. Just saying. I'm taking the shrinking at the same pace I intended from the beginning.

 

Thanks.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I don't see her as evil/oblivious. Just nervous somebody would take away the one person who ever really loved her.



Author's Response:

You're absolutely correct with that interpretation. I'm glad that apparently got across already.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I commend you for taking it to the all powerful route but still keeping her loveable humanity.

 

I really like that demographic of the story and this is coming from a diehard humiliation etc lover at times.

 

Top notch good sir.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! I'm trying very hard to have the domination and humiliation action without making Alex sadistic or otherwise changing her character. As much as I love heartless giantesses most of the time, it's kind of unrealistic since I think most people are nicer than that. But I hope the way I write Alex is more believable, for what kind of fictional person she is.

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