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A Little Blackmail 3: Life of a Toy by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary:

A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96870 Read Count: 691242
[Report This] Published: August 24 2011 Updated: March 31 2012
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Date: February 01 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Revenge Fantasy

I'm not sure what to think here but I definitely curious.

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Date: February 04 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Rescued At Last?

Apparently god is also trapped un Carly's toes as his messages are not quite being received.

 

Excellent twist, you are fire lately.



Author's Response:

could very well be, considering how often carly is perfectly content trapping things underfoot. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed
Date: February 09 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Feeding Time

I love Carly as much as the next guy and this story but at this point your just fucking with the poor guy more than a lion does with a gazelle.

 

I still look forward to each update though.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed
Date: February 14 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail

At first I was thinking Stockholm Syndrome then completely suicidal then I snapped back to how well this worked for the gang Julia was keeping...but bravo good sir you have hit the proverbial home run here.

 

I am hooked now reel me into the boat with the next chapter.

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Date: February 17 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: The Fall of Carly

You sir bait and switch more than Vince Russo...it doesn't mean I don't love reading the hell out of this for as long as it goes.

 

 

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Date: February 19 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Jenny

Alright...

 

So the little guy is -back- with Jenny to reinforce why Carly is just so gosh darn loveable compared to the alternative.

 

Not his best two days so far.

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Date: February 19 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: No Ifs, Ands, or Butts

I liked it.

I expected her to be rather evil/bratty with him going in and you nailed it nicely. Though I am begining to wonder if even getting back to his family will be enough to ever -truly- get back to normal.



Author's Response:

especially after the ordeal of this chapter, i think i'd have to agree with you

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Date: February 22 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Freezer

I'm getting Saw 3 flashbacks here.

 

But it's crunchtime so it's time to see if Jack is a franchise QB or another Rex Grossman.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed
Date: February 24 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: We All Scream for Ice Cream

Pour Jack got himself in a heap of a picke, ain't no way he's gettin out of this bucket o syrup...

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Date: February 27 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever

Jack is plum damn goofy but lucky for us he has such an excellent writer and fun as hell big sis to keep us coming back for more.

 

Also this begs the question...if one tiny can do all that granted he had more time then how did the entire group fail with Julia.

 

Honestly as a one off sometime down the road we need Julia, Carly, Alison and all their -pets- to have sit down interview. A Writers Guild of Crazy Giant Girls if you will.

 

Keep on doing what you're doing.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed
Date: March 03 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

You are a horrible man jacksmith of 222 Mockingbirg Lane, Langford Illinois.

 

OK silliness aside he finally gains happiness...legit happiness somehow and Sophie FINALLY decides to put 2 and 2 together.  I look forward to see where this latest turn plays out.

 

 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed
Date: March 30 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Carly's Last Game

...

 

Wow, well I'm not surprised how Sophie acted Jack pulled a bit of a 360 towards the end there.

Regardless of what happens I am glad the world got to see Carly in all her glory as she was without a doubt one of the best writen characters I've ever read.

Hats off to you god sir and keep up the good work on your other tales.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed
Date: April 01 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue: Six Months Later

Very nice and I would love to read more especially about what became of Carly. Bravo good sir, bravo.

 

P.S. If you are doing more epilouges I still will push for at-least a peek back in Alison and Ash.



Author's Response:

someday, i will indeed do a check-up on the Family Reunion characters, although it probably won't be for a while. thanks for reading!

The Freshman by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 506]
Summary:

An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life.  When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Couples, Giant, Legwear, Odor, Unaware, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 82 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 179462 Read Count: 1057048
[Report This] Published: September 01 2011 Updated: May 26 2019
Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Sides Meet

*reads more new Julia*

 

*replys to this well done chapter*

 

*goes to bed*

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Date: March 03 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Shadow School

Another excellent dream sequence. 



Author's Response:

thanks man

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Date: May 03 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Take Stock

You're alive! Now more Julia please.



Author's Response:

I'm gasping out breaths of oxygen as best I can, so technically... yes?  And there will be more Julia just as soon as I write/post it, if that weren't already obvious.  Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: February 17 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Tightly Wound

Mrs Watson sounds wonderful, good stuff



Author's Response:

She's a real charmer, ain't she?

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Date: September 16 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek

God bless you, Stella!



Author's Response:

I figured this would be your reaction.

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Date: September 20 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Double Dare

Stella needs her own tinies, good stuff.



Author's Response:

Too bad for her that Peter's the only one in this world.

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Date: June 05 2016 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: Rub Down

Best teacher ever!



Author's Response:

Somehow I expected you to side with Ms. Watson.

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