February 2024 Update: I’m slowly making progress with writing again, and I hope to have a new chapter out in the near future. I’m truly sorry for the horrendous wait, but I’m gonna try and make a real effort.
-Pluto
A young man discovered karma comes in all shapes but mostly sizes.
Hey, congrats on the first story! Really glad to see you here, and I hope to see you more in the future! This story was great - a simple premise, but excellent execution. You did a great job setting up your main character at the beginning, which made his fate much more satisfying and made the irony land that much harder. Although unaware + cruel isn't usually my cup of tea, I still really enjoyed this one. Anyway, congrats again on the great start, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you! Until then, I'll see you on the discord.
-Pluto
Thanks! Glad it worked! :D
Twenty years ago, a dangerous virus swept through human civilization, transforming regular people into hostile, dangerous, pack-roving aggressors. Known as wolves, these mindless hunters overran society and forced humanity into smaller pocket communities for safety. Life as we knew it completely broke down, as the wolves were left to roam the streets of our old cities in packs. In the havens, humanity began to know safety and peace once more.
A rogue scientist, however, was about to shatter that sense of relative peace. Though she hoped to restore the infected and save humanity, she will instead teach humanity that the wolves are not the most dangerous thing out there...
Author's Note:
I wrote this back in early 2018, and only now mustered up the courage to post it here. Let me know what you think - there is a second part I will post in a little bit, but feedback is encouraged! This is a relatively short and finite story (2 chapters), but could be expanded a bit more into a 3rd chapter if people enjoy it.
Depending on feedback, I might try to get back into writing more stories, as well. :)
This story is really interesting! The backstory caught my interest immediately, and I felt like you did a good job giving enough information to get going without dragging down the pacing. The post-apocalyptic zombie setting was really unexpected to see in a giantess story, and I liked it a lot. I suppose my only real suggestion would have been to maybe expand on Sylvia's character a bit - her backstory, motivations, internal process - but I understand that there's only so much you can do in an introductory chapter, and I'm looking forward to finding more out about her in the upcoming parts! The actual erotic content wasn't really my cup of tea, but that's solely reflective of my personal preferences, it was still really well written. Anyway, this was an excellent first chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you in the future! Take care.
-Pluto
Thank you so much for the review!
When I wrote this, she was definitely a one-off character I hadn't put much thought into - more the driving force of an idea or expression. So I can definitely see where there wasn't a lot of exposition on her, her needs, her beliefs, her purpose and whatnot. Internal process - I could definitely do this better justive, so I appreciate that suggestion!
I'll get around to posting the second part sometime later this week, I think!
A man discovers his passion, and a woman shows him hers.
I was a bit disappointed for the shortage of good legwear content. So this story was originally my solution to that problem. Be the change you want to see in the world.
10/10/21: I am having a lot of fun drawing out simple scenes. I hope you like them so far, there will be some serious snuffing coming up.
If you like it, or if you don't, I'd really appreciate a review. I'm new at this and guidance would be helpful. I'm very open to criticism, I'd like to improve.
Wow, this is extremely well written! You're doing a fantastic job with your descriptions, it's really evocative. I'm also definitely very interested in the setting and characters, particularly your two mains. I'm curious as to what Sarah's deal is, and if there's anything more to her than pure cruelty. I'm also extremely curious as to how she's going to interact with the protagonist. I think the actual erotic content might be a bit too cruel for my personal taste, but that's purely due to my own preferences, the setting is more then enough to keep me interested. Great story so far, and I'm really looking forward to more! Take care.
-Pluto
Thank you so much! I've been trying to be really descriptive so it means a lot that it was am enjoyable aspect of the story. I really appreciate the review and I definitely have plans to add more from Sarah's side. The cruel aspect is of course my own personal taste but this story will be branching out a bit to have more variety. Sarah's characterization will bring some depth and hopefully more lewd.
Thanks again!
Meet Alina, an anime obsessed neet. One day, she finds some guy, Baisho, injured and outside her appartment door. After he moves in with her, Alina notices somthing strange happening to her new roomate. Will Baisho stop shrinking? Will Alina admit she has a crush on him? Will I be able to commit to doing the 10+ chapters for this story? WHO KNOWS?
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Really, really cute start! I like your mains already, and I'm really looking forward to seeing how their relationship develops as the shrinking happens. I always love a cute gentle relationship, so I'm excited to see more. Great work, keep it up!
(Also, the series tags automatically go away when you upload the story. Don't know why they show up on the preview, but you're all good now. Take care!)
-Pluto
A man is ready to say goodbye to his friend moving to a different country, reluctant though they may both be to stop spending time with eachother. Thankfully a new technology has just hit the market that might let them see eachother after all...
Wow, this looks really promising! I'm a big fan of the teasing friends dynamic, and I'm really looking forward to seeing how Annie treats him when he's small. This has the potential to be extremely sweet and cute, so I can't wait to see where you take this. Congrats on the great start, and I hope to see more soon!
-Pluto
Simon has Regressor's Syndrome, rendering him and all other sufferers on the planet around two inches in height. Normally, he lives in a specially designed colony with other people of his height and disposition, but this week he's visiting his normal-sized sister, Milla, who's just out of college and living on her own for the first time in her life. Simon's ready to cut loose and enjoy the big-person world for all the delights it has to offer... but he didn't count on one factor: Milla's roommate Beck, who seems to have a strange fascination with our tiny hero's size...
But Simon is an optimist. He can make friends with anybody, especially somebody his protective big sister loves and admires. Will he win Beck over? Or does another fate await him?
Wow, just wow!! This story has been exceedingly fun so far, I’ve tremendously enjoyed every chapter! It’s rare to see a gentle story that’s this high quality, and I’m loving every bit of it! I love it when the tiny is confident and has an actual personality, and Simon and Beck are so cute together. Vore isn’t even my thing really, but you’ve definitely been pulling it off well here. I’m really curious to see how their relationship develops from here, especially after Simon has completed his little expedition into her stomach! There’s so much potential here for a cute and interesting relationship, and I can’t wait to see where you go with it. Congrats on the great start, please keep it up! Take care~
-Pluto
Hi there Pluto! Thanks so much for the excellent review. You've really hit the nail on the head with your comments: I wanted both Simon and Beck to be fully fleshed-out characters, so that any potential romance between them could seem genuine, even if it happened very quickly. The funny thing is, I originally envisioned Beck as the more confident one, intending for there to be a scene where she had to race against the clock to describe her desires to Simon before Milla returned... but when I started writing Simon's character for the first time, he turned out to be far more worldly and confident and the dynamic of the tiny being the braver of the two struck me as very novel... so that's how it ended up in the finished draft.
Thanks for reading - there should be more very soon!
Traversing across the empty expanse of space, a lonely and somewhat obsessive goddess sets off to an intergalactic journey to find her soul mate. The giantess will do anything to get with her one true love, from pampering, world domination to otherworldly fun. Will the two of them last?
A small tale of a gigantic goddess and normal sized human in their exploration of love on whether If such a strange relationship can truly stay afloat.
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Reviews and Feedback are greatly appreciated!
FINISHED STORY
This story looks really interesting! I'm very curious to see how she interacts with her tiny soul mate, and how he'll react to her. Will he be a totally willing and submissive partner through his own will, or will the feelings be forced on him by some magical force? I have to imagine it would be a pretty confusing and crazy experience to suddenly have a Goddess show up one day and claim you as her partner, so I'm really excited to see where the story goes from here! I also always love a gentle and loving relationship, so this looks right up my alley.
In terms of suggestions, my only one would be to include a distinction between the normal text, and what your main girl is thinking in the moment. For example, at one point you have "I can feel you, I can Sense you, I Must Have You. I think in my head while biting my lower lip." Since the story is in the first person, it might be easier to read if you have thoughts in italics, like:
"I can feel you, I can sense you, I must have you, I think while biting my lower lip." You could also use quotation marks instead, as if it was a piece of dialogue, followed by the "I think" dialogue tag. Other than that, though, this is a great start with a really interesting premise, and I'm sure you'll get better as you write more! Thanks for sharing your work with us, and I look forward to the next chapter! Take care~
-Pluto
OMG it’s Pluto Pendragon. I really like your story of an innocent man. One of my favs in the entire site.
Anyway, I think your completely right about the italics, again I’m quite new to this but using them to offer a distinction in the writing is a really good idea. Thanks for your Input!
After a fight caused by Evelyn’s controlling and manipulative nature crossing the line, Hue is forced to break-up with her, though despite his decision, still holding lingering attachments. After finally garnering the guts to cut her off for good and move on, rather than try and piece their crumbling relationship together, he is met with a rather surprising reaction, Evelyn’s desperation to keep him clearly having pushed her to an interesting choice of action. One that’ll take away any say he might have had, putting him in her merciful, or not so, grasp.
This story is extremely promising! The premise really intrigued me, and this chapter did a great job of drawing me in and making me excited to see what happens next. I'm really curious to see more of their dynamic, as well as how that changes once the shrinking stuff comes into play. Congrats on the great start, and I'm seriously looking forward to more! Take care~
-Pluto
