February 2024 Update: I’m slowly making progress with writing again, and I hope to have a new chapter out in the near future. I’m truly sorry for the horrendous wait, but I’m gonna try and make a real effort.
-Pluto
A collection of stories I did for Inktobers.
I really enjoyed these stories! I think my favorite was probably the first one - I liked the classic “here comes the airplane” taken literally, definitely made me smile. I also loved the attitude of the big, very playful and loving which contrasted with the casual cruelty of her actions.
I really liked the other stories as well, I was impressed by how you were able to take those simple prompts and run with them! Very impressive, I like the way your mind works. Anyway, thanks for sharing these with us, and I hope you keep it up! Take care~
-Pluto
You’re very welcome! Thanks for the review and feel free to give more feedback later.
Nick unlocks a secret power within himself, and begins using it to fulfill his long-held fantasies with his beautiful, plus-sized wife, Cassie; but he soon discovers the dangers that such a power can bring, AND what could happen if he loses control...
Approaching 250 reads…🤗!
Important note: I’ve received some feedback saying that there have been formatting and grammatical errors spotted in several chapters, so if you should find any errors—misspellings, incorrect character names, or grammatical mistakes—please leave a review and let me know ASAP so I can fix them, as these can distract from and greatly diminish the story experience.
I absolutely love reading and responding to your reviews, so please keep them coming. Tell me which parts are your favorites, or something you think can be improved upon. Post feedback (suggestions, criticism, etc.) freely, though please be polite and constructive. Enjoy! I looking forward to hearing from you all!
Hi there, I've been reading this story since it started, so I figured I might as well contribute my thoughts. Especially since this seems to be a critical point in the story. While I would say that your story is certainly good, I have to admit that my motivation for reading has changed over time- transitioning from enjoyment to morbid curiosity. Please understand that I'm fully aware that this is a fetish story, and usually the fetish content is what comes first, but I do think that the flaws in this story have become more apparent as time has gone on. For me, it comes down to two things: the characters, and your overarching message (or at least my interpretation of it).
So, it seems pretty clear to me that you're saying that everything that has happened to Nick is his own fault. Saying that his desire for sexual experiences caused him to take risks that lead to his downfall and seeming death, if the end of the chapter is anything to go on. My issue with that is this- you did not do a good enough job setting up Nick as deserving of what happened to him, which has caused these events to feel more frustrating than anything else. From what I've read, the main conflicts in this story have been a result of things outside of Nick's control, namely Cassie and the accidental shrinkages.
I won't bore you with a bunch of criticism of Cassie (go back to ConceptorJoe's review if you want something that is pretty similar to my thoughts), but her character is a big part of why this story is so frustrating. It's not Nick's fault that she became abusive when he shrank. HUmans aren't machines, it's unrealistic to think that she loves him on the "condition" that he's normal sized, and homicidal when he's small, as if a switch is flipped. That's on her for being an abusive character, and it's unfair to place the blame on Nick for that. Her realizing that her actions were screwed up, and admitting it to somebody that isn't Nick, isn't exactly the comeuppance that I and so many others were hoping for. It feels more like a last minute addition to appease the Cassie haters, that is immediately undone by your seeming initial plan to pin the blame on Nick.
Next is the accidental shrinkage. You say that Nick never learned to control his powers, as he didn't learn how to... not accidentally shrink himself in his sleep? Huh? Then why did he spend all that time learning to re-grow at will? If he was reading the book, and practicing how to control his power, then how would he miss the section in the book that says "how not to shrink in your sleep 101?" How is he supposed to control something that is uncontrollable? You say that he "forgot" to learn that part in his haste for sexual gratification, but with all due respect that makes no sense. He spends nearly an entire chapter seemingly learning to control his power, but then you return to the plot device that instigates nearly every conflict in this story- something that he has no control over- he shrinks for no reason. Then you say that it was completely his fault all along. As a reader, unless I'm completely missing something, it feels like you're just taking a story shortcut to reach the kind of unaware fetish content that you like to write. That's valid, as this is an erotic fiction website, but the story suffered as a result.
All things considered, I think you've written yourself into a corner in regard to the ending. Either you follow through on what this chapter implies, which has all the issues I just outlined, or you give him an unexpected happy ending, which would be really sudden and out of place. I think, if the moral of this story was the whole "comes great responsibility" thing, you really should have made Nick less of a sympathetic character, especially at the end. It's not his fault that he had an abusive wife, and it's really not his fault that he shrank in his sleep for no reason. So, rather than leaving the reader with the weight of this moral, you're more likely to leave them feeling deeply unsatisfied. Regardless, I'm certainly curious to see where you ultimately go. This story has a lot to love in terms of the fetish content, but those are my thoughts as someone who was more interested in the plot and characters. Have a good one.
-Pluto
First off, I want to say how much I appreciate your readership and your honest review.
Secondly, I’d like to preface my overall response by stating that, in my defense, I had outlined the story and its overall conclusion before I started writing the first chapter, and although I want both my characters and plot to be (somewhat) realistic and engaging, I certainly HADN’T expected for my readers to become so invested in their development. Because of the overall hatred and resentment towards Cassie and sympathy for Nick, I decided towards the end to expand Jenny’s character to provide the catharsis that Nick deserved. If I had it to do over again, I would’ve put Jenny in the story from the get go and expanded her character throughout the story. It might’ve even changed the ending as well!
Alright, with all that being said, on to your review:
I wasn’t trying to necessarily say that EVERYTHING that happened to Nick was his own fault, I was trying to demonstrate that using his power would have consequences—both good and bad. Sure, I freely admit that I probably should’ve made Nick more of a jerk and outlined his selfishness better, that way everything that happened to him would’ve seemed more like karma than undeserved and out of his control.
Obviously, there’s been a lot of animosity towards Cassie (and well-deserved) and perhaps I went a little over the top by making her both emotionally and physically abusive, but I wanted her character to serve more as an allegory Of “conditional love” versus Jenny’s “unconditional love”. And perhaps me stating that she would eventually get her “comeuppance” was a bit of an exaggeration, as it comes more in the form of emotional regret rather than physical karma; and you are right: it was more to service the readers.
This story is also my first attempt at two major tropes: self-induced shrinking, and continuous size changing.
I wanted to explore something a little unique and have main character, at least in this story, to be the source of his shrinking; unfortunately, it’s a little hard to do this and have unaware scenarios, so I needed to find a sort of compromise. Sure, I could’ve used the trope of a “shrinking gun” or something, but I’m actually saving that for a different upcoming story. Overall, I settled on a character who only had partial control over his shrinking, so that there could be a mix of both aware and unaware situations.
In most other stories I’ve read where there are numerous times when a character is shrunk, and then other times they are normal sized, their size control tends to be connected to a “medicine” they have to take to either prevent their shrinking or to restore their size, but I wanted to do something a little more unique and original.
Perhaps I did write myself into a corner, and that Nick’s ultimate demise was inevitable, but in the end, like you said, this is erotic fiction, and you have to appeal to the masses. Of course, you can’t please everybody.
Regardless, I still hope you enjoyed the story, and I hope you check out my previous and future stories and leave a review.
Thanks for reading!
(Paramouth's First Annual "Nommies" Nominee for Best Story: runner up!)
A Hungry vampire and a humble borrower seem like an unlikely pair of friends, but when times are tough and they're both down on their luck, maybe they can find what they need in each other.
Edit: 8/12/2021 Back with a MASSIVE chapter. Obligatory "a bit late for 8/8." Hope you all enjoy! (Also, wow! almost a year since I began this! That's wild!)
The tags listed are all included in the story so far. I'll add more tags as I go.
For the record, the violent, tag does not apply to how the main characters interact, but there is violence in the story. The primary G/t relationships in this story are all gentle/non-fatal.
What a wonderful story! I've enjoyed it a lot so far. You've got a lot of great stuff going for you~
-A fantastic writing style
-Adorably charming characters
-An interesting plot
-Great worldbuilding
More than anything else, though, I just always love to see a plot and character-driven gentle story, as it's by far my favorite type of story on this website. I hope you'll keep it up, as I'm looking forward to more! Take care.
-Pluto
Thank you so much! Each of those bullets made me happier than the last! And I'll be honest: when I first set out to continue this story past chapter 1, I was a little worried it would be too much plot for people's taste and I'd bore everyone, but that is decidedly not the case! Turns our people enjoy relatable characters and dialog interacting in long form story arcs! (If anything, my characters are all probably about 15% too lewd?) And I personally thought there was a gap in the long-form, gentle, vore market, so I sought to address that.
I couldn't help but notice you're not idle yourself in writing longer plot-based stories. I'll have to check them out!
Thanks so much for the kind words, Pluto. I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far. I hope to keep your interest!
James is eager and excited to learn about his new promotion! But when he goes to learn what it is, something goes awry leading to quite an adventure to place far far from home. Thankfully a new friend he meets is there to help him get back home and protect him along the way.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
I'm really happy to see more of this story! Your mains are really cute together, and I love their interactions. Now that everything is out in the open, I'm really looking forward to seeing how their relationship develops from here.
As a side note, this story actually served as one of the inspirations for my own story! So thank you very much for your work, and I'm looking forward to more. Take care!
-Pluto
No kidding! I loved your story and I'm glad I was able to help inspire you to write!
A runaway slave tries to live out a meager but free existence in a dangerous forest. One fateful day, he catches a break and accidentally meets what could be considered a powerful ally, a mute naga girl.
Hi there! I wanted to provide my thoughts about this story, but also about your writings as a whole. I really, really like your stories! Gentle stories are some of my favorite ones to read and re-read, and I really like the character dynamics in your stories. That kind of "evil to everybody else except me" vibe is really interesting. That's obvious in this story, but also in "Confiscated Afterlife" and "The Forest King." I like the contrast between the cruel and sadistic versus the cute ways in which your main characters interact.
Overall, though, I'm writing this because I want to give you one piece of advice:
Please be nicer to yourself and your stories!!
I can't help but notice, you seem to put yourself down in a lot of your story notes and review replies. Even in your bio, you preface yourself by saying you're not the greatest writer. You often start or end your chapters with disclaimers to that effect, like how in chapter 3 of "Confiscated Afterlife" you start by offering to edit things that don't make sense, and saying that things are bound to not make sense. BY doing things like that, you're kinda setting up your readers to fail by letting the know right away that you're not happy with how everything turned out.
Other examples. In the story prompt for "Ginseng Tea Symphonia," you say that it will have lame mushy dialogue. Mushy it may be, but that doesn't make it lame! Some people are specifically drawn to that kind of story, so there's no need to talk badly about it before anybody has even started to read it. If that was a joke, I totally get it, but it doesn't really come off as one to me. Also, in your gentle writing exercise, you say that you're not proud of it. It's harder to enjoy a story if the author is upfront about how they themself don't like it, you know what I mean?
Now, there's nothing wrong with being critical of your own stories, or admitting that there's room for improvement. I think that's an important thing to do! However, it's also important to celebrate your strengths as a writer. If you only ever focus on the aspects of your stories that you don't like, then I can only imagine the kind of headspace that it puts you in when you sit down to write some more. I can tell you right now- you are a very good writer!! I truly hope that you do know that. In fact, you're one of the authors I took inspiration from when I wrote my recent story!
So, sorry if this came out of nowhere, or it seems like I'm making a lot of assumptions about how you feel about your stories. That's not my intent, I'm just trying to share my impressions. To sum it up, I really like your stories, and I hope you will continue to write! If you do, you can be sure that I'll be reading. I hope you have a wonderful day!!
-Pluto
Good morning, Pluto! Your very kind reveiw needs to be updated with a Gentle tag of its own, haha! Apologies for the late reply, during my writing hibernation periods I still do check on my reviews once every month or two. Anyone who takes the time to come and comment on my stuff in this very tiny, niche corner of the internet, and even this website as a whole, certainly deserves my attention. You've put forth quite a strong note here, and rest assured I read and reread it while I had my morning coffee. Think about it this way, though. Before I even began to read what you wrote, I saw the block of text and immediately went on the defensive, expecting to get criticism. Of course, I was pleasantly surprised when I read through it and saw nothing but sweetness, but still. This medium is torturous for me. To assume a review is going to be critical before even looking at it, five star rating or not, something's wrong with the way I approach writing.
It's akin to the effects of alcohol, makes you feel good and then wrecks your body. That's what writing is for me, it's nice for a second and then it gets in my head, and I end up worse off. Currently, every unfinished story will likely remain that way. I may foolishly start another story in a year or less, as is typical for me. I'll be at work, an idea will pop in my head and stay there a few days. I come here, and share it in my own little avant garde way of writing. But there's a time limit to my stories. I have to hurry, because every day that passes is another day closer to some type of mental deadline. The juice runs out, I feel guilt for not finishing what I've started, and every nice review is another pang of guilt. Even a lack of comments hurts too, cause then I feel like no one's reading. There's really no winning.
Deep down, I am proud of some of my ideas. I'm happy to be able to type, keeping the typos to a minimum, and all that. But I feel like this isn't really for me. I come here for a quick release, to get an idea out of my head, and hopefully scurry off for a long time afterwards. And this perfectionist mentality I seem to have doesn't stop with writing, either. If I start to draw, paint, or learn literally any other skill, I get irritated with my lack of skill, or can't quite replicate what's in my head, and I abandon whatever I've started. Writing's easy, or, rather, typing is... I don't know. Make no mistake though, you've hit the nail on the head. I hate my work, and how it makes me feel. I'm never going to do a mass delete of my stories again, but alas...
I'm happy you, and others, enjoy what I type, on the rare occasions that I do. I'm even more honored that you got inspired by me, at some point as well! But frankly, I've given up on impressing anyone. Even if I read another story, and I like it, I'll get further discouraged because others can type and convey ideas much better than I can.
I'm not trying to sound dramatic, but this is pretty much the reality of my situation. My headspace when typing is not good. I'm my own biggest critic. And, maybe, my very first story got some pretty mixed reviews and set the precedent for this mindset. Others have reached out to me before, a nice fellow named Nothingness took some time to email me, once. It's really funny though, my usual day-to-day isn't usually depressing. I'm a pretty content person. But when I get to typing, or answer nice comments, I revert into a bad state of mind. I cannot accept praise of any sort.
So, I may return again someday like usual, but it's just a cycle. I'm the writer that shouldn't exist. Like having a tank, or some type of Paladin on the front line, but they enter combat already poisoned.
I can't stay off this platform forever, I just can't be on it for long periods of time.
I'm aware this has been a bit of a ramble, but I did need to get this off my chest.
Thanks, Pluto, I also hope you have a wonderful day, too.
-Intheliar
Natalie Beaumont hates shrinkies. Which is a huge problem for two of her children who have caught the shrinking virus. Life gets extremely difficult and scary for them as they deal with their giant mom. And it only gets more terrifying for them as their only ally, their big sister Aubreigh, is starting to see them differently as well.
I've really enjoyed this story so far! Natalie is certainly the star, but I also enjoy the dynamics that the other characters bring. My brain keeps getting pulled in different directions- one side wanting to just give in and root for Natalie all the way, the other side holding out hope that she might eventually get what's coming to her.
Along those lines, I thought an ironic sort of ending could be fun. Perhaps Natalie slowly breaks down Aubreigh's gentle side and turns her just as prejudiced and sadistic, only for Natalie to get the virus and shrink down, completely at the whims of the monster she helped create. Or not! I'm sure whatever you have planned will be fabulous. Take care!
-Pluto
I know what you mean! I keep getting pulled in different directions as well. The writer in me wants Natalie to get whats coming (as is currently in my outline), but the fetish side of me just wants her to completely dominate and win. I actually don't know what I'm going to do yet... but I have a lot of ideas to write before I have to make a decision. Thanks for reading!
This seems to have been quite the controversial chapter, and I can understand why. With that being said, I figured I might as well add my unwanted two cents, since my opinion slightly differs. I see that you're thinking about taking a break from this story, and I think that's probably a wise move. I know how stories can invade your mind, constantly jumping back and forth between different directions you can go, and how exhausting that is. Stepping back from that mindset always helps, I just hope that you're not feeling discouraged. The reviews all definitely come from a place of love for your story and characters.
Anyway, on to this chapter. I think the criticisms about Natalie are valid, she did make some odd moves. I also understand, though, that she's obviously dealing with a lot of difficult life events at the moment, which is bound to mess with anyone's head. People certainly want her to dominate Andrew, myself included, but it's important to remember that this is her husband, and it'll take some time for her to reconcile the fact that the man she loves is now a tiny. I think some weird decisions can be forgiven.
My main thoughts, though, are about Aubreigh. I see that you were thinking about a redemption arc, but intense pushback has led you to reconsider. I personally would have really enjoyed it, but I 2000% think that her doubts this chapter were needed and logical, at least. Her transition to cruel and dominating was actually one of the few issues I've had with this story, as it felt quite sudden to me. I mean, up until a few days ago she was considering dedicating her career to fighting for the rights of tinies, and now she's casually abusing them and telling one of her best friends that she would be better off dead. Of course that would mess her up, and her reaction in the shower was a totally logical development. Again, I just think this is a case where people's desire for a certain type of erotic content is slightly outweighing their desire for realistic actions. This doesn't even mean that you have to go full redemption, but there's truly nothing wrong with that if you feel like it's the right direction to go.
To that end, I would just like to offer one piece of encouragement - please don't be afraid of going down your own path. There's obviously nothing wrong with listening to your readers, and it's pretty important to know your audience, but it's your story at the end of the day. If you think this story has more to offer than pure domination and cruelty, then I would encourage you to go for it. Either way, this story is going to be wonderful.
I hope your break is enjoyable, you've certainly earned it! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, and take care.
-Pluto
I actually quite agree with you. It makes me happy that I've created a world and characters that people reacted so strongly about. But you're right, quite controversial... oh man...
I get that people want to see Natalie dominate her husband... ESPECIALLY ME! that was one of the things I was looking forward to the most in writing this story. I just wanted her to be a lot more manipulative with him rather than just simply physcially dominating him. I wanted her dominance over him to be a physcological roller coaster for him... but I see now that people really want to see her dominate without all the malarkey... guess I got to make some adjustments with Natalie and Andrew going forward.
And with Aubreigh, my gosh, this is the third or fourth revision of her in my outline. Origianlly she was good... then she turned bad (my personal favorite), then she had a redemption arc, then she had a redemption arc and shrank. Ooofda... I think that's why she might seem so flippy floppy in the story.
I think this story is, like you say, just pure domination and cruelty. When I try to make it more than that is when I lose people. Which is totally fine with me... I love those two things, but I did want some realism. But really at the end of the day, it's a fetish story, so I don't know why I would care about realism all that much anyways. So I'll probably just lean into the domineering and evil aspects of the gigantic world moving forward. I don't want to alienate people, and so I really thought a redemption arc would be interesting... but I guess my audience is not really a "redemption" type of crowd! Good to know now!
Either way, thank you for your kind words about the story and about taking a break. I have some time off from work and have been thinking about the story a lot. However, I don't know when I'll get around to figuring out how to dig myself out of this hole... but I really appreciate your feedback. Thanks again!
Scott is just your average high school guy. Life is pretty normal with his stepmom and stepsister, albeit a little quarrelsome. He just about manages to rule the roost, but the power dynamic begins to change as he and the men around him contract a virus that makes them smaller.
This is one of those stories that I've enjoyed a lot more the longer it has gone on! This chapter was by far my favorite, and I'm loving the changing character dynamics. Well-written, interesting stuff. I'm eagerly anticipating more, so please keep it up! Take care.
-Pluto
Thank you! Long road ahead that's for sure. Vexed is a very gifted writer, brings my outline to life. Also looking forward to your next chapter as well ;) -jsm109
A young man at a bar assaulted for his diminutive stature is saved by a good samaritan who holds a dark secret.
Now this is a really interesting story. I'm enjoying it a lot so far! You've got plenty of mystery, and I'm definitely interested in learning more about what's going on, and what Tae's backstory is. I'm also loving her and Eren's relationship! They've got some really cute moments, and I'm excited to see how their relationship develops. Especially if/when he finds out about her secret. I hope to see more of this story soon! Take care.
-Pluto
Thank you, I look forward to exploring those mysteries in future chapters!
Xiangling! Is that a Genshin reference I see? If so, that's great. I started playing about a month and a half ago, and it's really fun. If you play it, who's your main? Mine's Kazuha.
Anyway, this story is still fantastic! It seems like the hole of revenge and destruction is just getting deeper and deeper, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it ultimately ends up, as well as how it affects poor Eren. As another reviewer said, he's truly the only innocent one here. Still loving his adorable relationship with Tae, but I can't help but worry about what will happen when he finds out about everything. For me, their relationship is the main draw of the story, so I hope to see more of it soon! Either way, keep up the great work, and take care.
-Pluto
It is indeed! Currently I main Yanfei, I just got Kazuha recently but have not had a chance to level him up yet.
Thank you for your feedback, ultimately the cost of revenge is that it will continue to spiral. Although this is a rather long story with many conflicts and arcs, Eren and Tae's relationship and how it develops is the main focus, so I hope you enjoy the twists and turns it takes!
Ben volunteers to be a test subject for his mother's shrinking formula, and is shrunk down to ever-smaller sizes over a couple of weeks.
I just read through this whole story on your DA, and I enjoyed it a lot! I'm looking forward to seeing how you revise and expand it here. Have a good one!
-Pluto
Thanks, happy you liked! There won't be entire new chapters here, just some small alterations and maybe a few new paragraphs and scenes.
Ryan lives a normal life for a tiny: he works online, he keeps in shape at the local gym, he games online with friends he never meets, and he tries his best to avoid getting stepped on. Of course it was just his luck that the apartment he lived in got foreclosed on and now he’s been evicted.
Thankfully one of his online friends, Lena, offers to let him crash with her. Of course, having never met, Ryan doesn’t know she’s a bit bigger than he thinks.
Note: There will be no deaths in this story.
Excellent start! I like the dynamic from your main characters already, and I think this has great potential to be fuzzy and cute. Your writing is really high quality for your first story, as well. I love these kinds of gentle stories, so I'm looking forward to what comes next! I hope you'll keep it up, and no worries about a slow burner. That just leads to more meaningful payoff, in my opinion. Take care!
-Pluto
Thank you for the kind words! I do want this to be a more wholesome story than others on this site, so I'm glad to hear I'm on the right track!
I've written other things (for giantess stuff and non-giantess stuff) so this isn't my first time around the block. Thank you for the review!
Another great chapter! You're hitting on a lot of themes that I enjoy reading and writing, and it's always nice to see a new story in that genre. I'm looking forward to more! Take care.
-Pluto
Thank you! I'm just writing what I would love to see more of on this site, so I'm glad I've carried you along so far!
Good stuff! Like I anticipated, this story is really fluffy and cute. Love it. I like how flustered they get at even the smallest flirty/sexual hints, it makes me excited to see how they'll react to overt sexual stuff if(when) it happens. I also wonder if the little mishap at the end is gonna make Lena paranoid, or perhaps overly-careful. Regardless, their interactions are still so lovely! Like others have said in the reviews, this genre of gentle stories is clearly striking a nerve with people, myself included.
My only super small suggestion, which will depend on personal taste anyway, would be to maybe consider splitting up your chapters a bit. The finer details can get lost when a chapter is super long imo, and it could make each chapter a bit more digestible. (You could also milk out more reviews that way, but you didn't hear that from me). Regardless, I'm looking forward to what's coming next! Take care.
-Pluto
I live for the wholesome relationships :), I'm also looking forward to seeing how Lena will act going forward: its gonna be interesting! I'm glad I was able to carve out a niche in the super-gentle giantess genre.
As for your suggestion, I'll probably keep chapters about the same length that they're at now, but I might start splitting them up into two parts for easy digestion. Because, right now, the difficulty people can have while reading this story is that it's a suddon drop of 10000 words instead of a trickle of 2000 or 3000 word chapters. That can be hard to follow, but once the story is complete, it shouldn't feel that way. All the same, since the story isn't all coming out at once, your suggestion makes sense. I won't be going back to modify CH2 or CH3 though, I don't know what that would do to my precious reviews.
I can't wait to get more out!
What will happen when someone trades all of their luck and good fortune and entrusts it to another?
Previously known as Writing Exercise: Gentle #2
(Update: Issues in real life have interrupted me from finishing this story. Went through a breakup, and while it was much needed, I am in no headspace to continue typing for now.)
Hey, I'm really glad to see another story from you!! I hope you've been well. I liked this intro a lot, it has a really interesting premise! I'm really excited to see what their interactions will be like, now that he's forgotten everything and small. I imagine Amelie will be pretty guilty...
Regardless, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Take care.
-Pluto
I haven't been too well, but I'm managing! Thanks for asking, though, Pluto. Yeah I banged out this intro right before bed so I hope it made sense, and I do plan to try and work on showing how their type of relationship goes from here. Yes, she's going to be on her best behavior after this lol. But, also, I had thought about it the other way around. Originally, Luca was going to be the one to keep his memories and Amelie would forget, so she would be able to "enjoy her new life" without guilt. Summarizing that alternate path; Amelie figures out Luca used to mean something to her and choses to take her along with herself anyway. But I decided last minute to go a different route. Thanks for leaving a review, they're critical in helping me keep motivated on writing. I don't think this story will be too long, though. Take care, yourself, as well.
Hey, I just saw your update in the story description and I wanted to let you know that I'm wishing you the best. I'm really sorry to hear that you're going through a tough time right now, and that you've lost inspiration for this story. Do what's best for you first, and if you ever decide to revisit the story then I'll certainly be reading. Until then, I hope things get better. Take care.
-Pluto
Thank you Pluto and I'm glad you saw the update.
I'm okay now but inspiration may never return. Rarely ever does. I might write anotherr story down the line but I'll try and make it one chapter that way I can finish it more succinctly.
Have a good one and thanks for always commenting.
They're so cute!! I really like how he was able to pick up on her feelings towards him right away. I think that'll make for an interesting dynamic later on. I also love how quickly he's coming to trust her, and I bet she's really happy about that as well. Lastly, I'm really curious as to how her life has been affected by the exchange, so I'm looking forward to finding out! I'm really enjoying this story, so thank you so much for continuing it! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
-Pluto
I appreciate the support bro. Also Amelie's luck is broken now (needs nerfed). It kinda works on a scaling factor; the worse Luca's disabilities are, the stronger she got proportionately. And Luca's super vulnerable and at a huge disadvantage now, so I'm planning to try and show Amelie's ability off somehow in the next chapter. It may even end up that there won't be much conflict in this story, but that's just how it goes. I don't want Amelie to turn out to be One Punch Man, if I can help it. Thanks for the comment Pluto I appreciate ya
This is great! Already, your mains are super cute together. I really like stories where the giantess has to win the trust of the tiny, so this story is right up my alley. I'm excited to see how their relationship will develop from here, now that she's telling him their backstory. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
-Pluto
Jeez, Pluto. You got here pretty quick lol. Thank you for the review. And, yes, I like all manner of gentle relationship beginnings. Respecting a tiny, or at the very least, proving you mean them no harm, is one thing I like seeing a giantess do sometimes. I plan to keep this story simple for the moment. No sexy stuff, no vore, etc. Only mentions of such things.
Yeah she has a lot of backstory to tell him, and I didn't plan to type it all out. It's mainly meant to defuse their situation and earn Luca's trust. Next chapter I'm gonna try and get them to break the "touch barrier." Talking is one thing. But there's different levels of trust to be earned here.
I appreciate your support, Pluto
After suffering a complete defeat at the hands of the Dark Lord, Shute is cast towards the world below, but there's a catch-- he's been stripped of his size! Will he ever recover? He's going to need some help in a world not meant for someone his size, if he plans to.
Previously titled as "Recovery"
What a really nice surprise!! I'm super happy to see another story from you so soon. This is really good so far, I already love your two main girls! Remura is super cute, and Celeste is just the right amount of mean, mixed with playfulness (and perhaps a secret sweet side?) I also always love a good fantasy setting. Hope to see more soon!
-Pluto
Thanks for the review Pluto! I'm still trying to figure out exactly what I want them to accomplish for now. At the moment it's just some introductions to get the characters' personalities out in the open. Shute's probably my weakest point for now, he's not mentally invincible or anything but I don't want him to come across as a bitch either.
I want to return to some more Remura content in the next chapter, though.
And, yes. Spoiler alert: Celeste has a secret sweet side, she's probably never going to push things too far with Shute, but she does have some sort of a narcissistic personality, or god complex or whatever. She's going to want to exert her power over Shute in whatever way she can, merely for her own kicks, but she's going to have some self control.
Even this early, Shute's already noticed Celeste has yet to cause him any physical pain so far.
Thank you for reviewing, and also for being the first reviewer. I wish you well.
[Reviews - 3] Shrunken students and a big, curvy, unaware giantess teacher. What could go wrong?
This was really anjoyable! Unaware isn't usually my thing, but you did a great job with the descriptions in this one. Always love a giant teacher, too, so it was great. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you, because I can tell already that you're a very talented writer! Thanks for the story, and take care.
-Pluto
Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it some much! Hopefully this is just the beginning. You take care as well!