Penname: Sovereign [Contact] Real name: Sovereign
Member Since: October 24 2020
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Summary:

See my Timescrybe2 account, as I am going to ask the admins to terminate this one as soon as I've finished moving the stories to the new account. This old timescribe account has been malfunctioning since Jan 2019, causing hassles for both me and the readers. I plan to get rid of it ASAP.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57433 Read Count: 175406
[Report This] Published: October 01 2012 Updated: December 17 2012
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstar
Date: October 24 2020 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: GIVE HER AN INCH AND...

Came here for the vore and got a good story.... With less than decent vore. The story telling is entertaining, but alittle scattered to where it feels like i must switch gears between chapters. And if i were to rate the vore parts compared to others out there, it would be a solid 5.5 out of 10.



Author's Response:

That's a true and accurate assessment of this story.

Unlike some of my stuff, this as you say, doesn't have any concentrated vore, as I developed a lot of character dynamics along the way to fill up the pages.

Summary:

     When Chris’s parents go on a second honeymoon during his summer vacation, they leave him in the charge of an unwelcome babysitter, and things quickly go from bad to worse when this much-abhorred sitter hatches a plan to have some fun with him...much to Chris’s dismay.

This story is based on an original idea from aow4321 on Writing.com, to whom I give full credit for the creation of most of the characters involved therein.

12/28/2023: 1 million reads and counting! 🥳 For anyone just finding this story, I want to reassure you that the main story has concluded and is complete. For those of you who have been waiting patiently for an update, I know it’s been an over a year since this story concluded, but I wanted to assure those of you who have been waiting patiently for the Giantess Shannon alternate chapter that I am planning to get back to work on it once my current story is finished. As I mentioned before, I’ve never actually written a growth story before, as it’s not something that I’m really that into, but I have been collaborating with, and taking suggestions from, several of my readers and fellow authors as to how to write such a project, and have been working to create a finished product that’s worthy of posting.

After I finish my latest project, I want to get back and finish this before jumping into my next novel, so feel free to provide any more suggestions—scenarios, interactions, etc.—that you have in your reviews. I want to create something high quality that everyone can enjoy.

Thank you ALL for your feedback and suggestions that have made this story possible! If you like what you read, leave a review; if certain chapters are your favorites, tell me why. Don’t forget to add me to your favorites so you’ll know when I post more stories, and if you have any commission requests, feel free to shoot me an email! Thank you all for your continued support! 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 304400 Read Count: 1027305
[Report This] Published: February 20 2018 Updated: September 20 2021
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 24 2020 Title: Chapter 64: Epilogue

Rating of the whole story: 7/10.

I can say right now, your strengths are that youre descriptive. You know how to set up a story and setting and youre very good at dialogue. One of the things i really enjoyed as a whole of this entire series was the character developement of shannon and a few of the others. How their quirks were slowly revealed. It was like reading an official book.

 

This leads me to talk about the shortcomings too: first, i would say remove the vore tag. Apart from 2 mouthplay situations... the vore is beyond an utter disappointment as there basically is none and this undeserving of the tag which can be misleading to vore hopefuls. If you desire examples on good vore stories where the prey survives, i can recommedn "Holly the freshman" and "a weekend adventure". Those show vore and mouth done superbly.

Another thing is when you have a 60 plus chapter story, its hard not to make situations repetetive. It actually became alittle laborious to read through near identical situations where Chris is underfoot/in ass/in pussy shouting the same help me lines from 3 chapters before. The only thing that kept me from skimming over them was my desire to be thorough so i can present a valid review.

 

All in all: great story telling, developement and descriptive events.

 

Work on: fulfilling vore when it is a tag, avoiding overusing repetetive situations and lines excessively.

 

All in all a solid series



Author's Response:

First off, thank you so much for your review. This type of review categorizing my strengths and weaknesses really does help me grow and improve as a writer.

To each of your points, I went ahead and removed the “Vore” tag because you were correct, there was really only one chapter (plus an alternate) that dealt with mouth play.

When I started this project, I wasn’t expecting it to turn out as long as it was. If I’d have known I was writing a novel, I would’ve changed several things at the beginning of the story, and several others moving forward. Since you read the whole thing, you could probably tell the writing improved as the story progressed, and I agree, several things became repetitive, probably because I had so many things I wanted to have happen with several characters.

Moving forward, I’m planning out my stories better, and trying to gage how long my future stories with be before I even start writing. If you haven’t checked them out yet, I urge you to read my short story, “Honey, Don’t Squish Me”, and my current multi-chapter project, “With Great Power...”.

Thanks for reading!

Summary: Recently I've figured I wanted to be more self indulgent in my writing recently so I came up with a series of short stories that I've decided to call Emma Episodes! They're called that because they star yours truly and, well, they're episodic. Every single episode is self-contained and packed with lewd content and stuff. So despite the very long chapter count, every single one is its own story!

And to make things even nicer, every individual chapters summary lets you know what to expect, as well as what tags it would contain!

If you like my stuff and want to support me, or are just interested in significantly longer, illustrated stories, then check out my e-junkie store! https://egsizestuff.e-junkie.com/

Alternatively, you can buy me a cup of coffee (I drink a lot to do these) via ko-fi! All donations are greatly appreciated! https://ko-fi.com/emmagear


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Futanari, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 332631 Read Count: 458248
[Report This] Published: February 20 2019 Updated: June 17 2021
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 12 2021 Title: Chapter 49: Episode 49: Toxic Behavior

It was a fun story with abit of vore. I wouldnt say it was long vore though, just quite a few short vore scenes. Long vore would imply either alit of internals ( my preference) or alot of focus on single vore scenes. All in all worth a solid 7 stars.

Summary:

A story about a human living in a world where the Police are all Giantesses. He gets convicted of a crime and sentenced to death or live as a slave. He chooses life as a slave to hopefully prove his innocence against beings that are never wrong. He may regret his decision...


Categories: Incest, Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57367 Read Count: 79533
[Report This] Published: June 09 2019 Updated: March 19 2020
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your storytelling is great. How Caleb deals with being falsely accused and how he slowly degenerates as a character due to constant abuse and abandonement is superb and so emotionally twisting. It feels like it is almost like netorare, but without the cheating.

There is just one issue I have with this story and it is after the vore chapter in 5. When Caleb is in recovery talking to Miranda, this is where the logic falls apart abit. Understandably he believes he is unloved since not one persone stood by him, but what makes him feel robotic is how he explains it, and how he forgives everyone "just because". I dont know if its by design, but it ends up feeling like he is forced to forgive just for the plots sake. There is no humanistic stage where he has to deal with anger towards his family and how they mutilated him into something less than human. At first I thought it was going down a route where he was going insane, which would make this conversation and how he is just lifelessly accepting his new situation understandable, but unfortunately that is not the case.

This line of conversation ends up killing the emotion and life his character hed before as the developement hes being forced through feels so lifeless, and sfterwards troughout the rest of the story, he feels like a robot who has one emotion: fear. His character has been forcefully developed into a corner and it feels just as big of a tragedy as what he went through.

All in all and excellent story from the first chapter to the 6.   4/5  stars

Summary: Anthony was going to be big news worldwide when he was born due to being born smaller than normal, but he was overshadowed by the Watergate scandal. Years later he meets a girl on vacation in California who agrees to take him to go live with her family in Texas. About 5 years later, she takes him to go live with her in Tampa.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28580 Read Count: 70487
[Report This] Published: July 20 2019 Updated: August 12 2019
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2021 Title: Chapter 1: When We First Met

Holy cow just when i thought i knew all of the good vore stories, i come across this too. The unaware in this is so on point. The interactions with tony and his environment and the movement and sloshing is fantastic. Dude i have to ask, do you take commissions? If so you have to let me contact you and put in one. 11/10 stars



Author's Response: Thank you, nah I don't do commissions, it's all a labor of love for me. Feel free to contact me though.

Summary:

Things go south for Darren when he shrinks, and his sister’s apparent appetite for tiny people doesn’t care about familial ties.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4751 Read Count: 5691
[Report This] Published: August 01 2019 Updated: August 01 2019
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 25 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, but my spidey sense tells me... this is missing a few tags...

Syze by tallie Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

The wealthy genius behind America's most unique, most innovative, and most controversial dating app has a dark secret, and a new shrunken friend who is about to learn what it is.

A story about a world changed by the revolutionary technology of Syze, and the lascivious behavior of its famous inventor.

Credit to a detached series by Thatgirlyouknow for the seed that created this story.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72573 Read Count: 327240
[Report This] Published: January 07 2020 Updated: December 11 2023
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstar
Date: November 18 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Your Flight Has Been Delayed

Cool chapter, but the repetetive wtf got alittle old. Enjoyed the vore though while tuning them out.



Author's Response:

Well, you experiment with what you can. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

Summary:

     Nick unlocks a secret power within himself, and begins using it to fulfill his long-held fantasies with his beautiful, plus-sized wife, Cassie; but he soon discovers the dangers that such a power can bring, AND what could happen if he loses control...

Approaching 250 reads…🤗!

Important note: I’ve received some feedback saying that there have been formatting and grammatical errors spotted in several chapters, so if you should find any errors—misspellings, incorrect character names, or grammatical mistakes—please leave a review and let me know ASAP so I can fix them, as these can distract from and greatly diminish the story experience.

I absolutely love reading and responding to your reviews, so please keep them coming. Tell me which parts are your favorites, or something you think can be improved upon. Post feedback (suggestions, criticism, etc.) freely, though please be polite and constructive. Enjoy! I looking forward to hearing from you all!


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Series Of Scenarios
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 150108 Read Count: 251153
[Report This] Published: April 08 2020 Updated: August 24 2021
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 06 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Forward

I also saw the last chapter but this review is still for the story as a whole as well as something to use to pass an idea along. Im a vore lover. I love vore and even though this story didnt have it until now, ive loved this story. That being said i hope you do bring the vire alternate ending in, but do wish it has most of a chapter dedicated to it. 

Ilove detailed vore stories and think it would be great if nicks potential final moments inside cassie or whomever could be heavily detailed on his journey inside: what its like, his thoughts and emotions and how he comes to terms with his fate and maybe even falling in love with cassie again as he spends time being slowly absorbed inside her. Maybe his time inside her is long and painful, but it creates a final intimacy for him.

 

Please consider this. ^^



Author's Response:

Oh, the original ending isn’t just “going away”: I’ll repost it with a few tweaks as an alternate ending at some future date, and I’ll certainly take your suggestion of a more detailed inside view/journey into Cassie into consideration.

I’m actually glad that you took the time to review the story as a whole, and I hope you review it again once the entire story and the alternative chapter(s) is(are) completed. I take it you liked this story slightly better than Babysitter Trouble, and hope that you check back for future stories.

Summary:

A man has been searching for the lost city, but what he finds is so Much more. 

Warning:Vore and R rated Content:Warning


Categories: Adventure, Mouth Play, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1989 Read Count: 2138
[Report This] Published: September 20 2020 Updated: September 20 2020
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 24 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, i enjoyed the idea. The downside... It ended as it was getting real good. It would easily be a full 5 stars if we got more of the vore and internal situation, but ends at a solid seven stars since we didnt. Good story, lacking in the vore category.

Summary:

In a world where tinies are sold in jar's to giants for pleassure, you get an upclose look.


Categories: Entrapment, Feet, Giant, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1655 Read Count: 3341
[Report This] Published: September 20 2020 Updated: September 20 2020
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstar
Date: October 24 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Once again the story is enjoyable, but the vore is really lacking. So much so that it leaves me feeling quite let down, wanting more. The storys potential is there, but falls short. 6 stars

Summary:

Mark is about to see what happens when you anger your giantess wife after he accidentally overwrites her save file for her favorite video game.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3643 Read Count: 43257
[Report This] Published: October 21 2020 Updated: November 30 2020
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

A good interim chapter. Im looking forward to more vore, and dont be afraid to make the vore chapters longer. An average length for a well detailed vore chapter is about 3000 words, and us vore lovers will love you for that. If you need ideas on how to include more detail, good stories are "holly the freshmen", "full tour of frankie" and the weekend adventure, all of which are on this site.

 

Looking forward to more longer chapters. :)

Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So far a very good story. I wish the chapters were alittle longer and more descriptive, especially the vore. One of the best ways to approach that is to add more details on the environment and experience ie: "the stomach sloshed him around in the putrid, bubbling bog of mush. Some of the bilee got into his mouth, tasting like rotten, sour food." These kind of details help spice up the story.

 

And personal opinion: i hope he signs the divorce paper. Then you can do a yandere ex wife approch with him, and maybe he finds another woman in the meantime who is gentler, but willing to act out some of his fantasies that I have a feelong hes developing.

 

This would be a gun story development that keeps it dynamic and interesting.

Summary:

Johnny goes on a date with the girl of his dreams, however things take a strange turn. 


Categories: Odor, Young Adult 20-29, Giant, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Vore, Butt, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3741 Read Count: 10289
[Report This] Published: October 30 2020 Updated: November 03 2020
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30 2020 Title: Chapter 1: An Oversized August

I like it! Hopefully there is a second chapter detailing his experience inside and how she enjoys it outside. This has alot of potential.

Summary:

Short Story Inspired by the old Need For Speed Underground 2 Trailer (Which I recommend any giantess fan to watch)

This story is essentially my take on what an ideal Giantess racing level would play out like along with crashing events on different parts of the giantess' body


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Body Exploration, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Insertion, Mouth Play, Scat, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1552 Read Count: 7004
[Report This] Published: November 18 2020 Updated: November 18 2020
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 18 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Race

This was a delightful and fun story. Quite unique in its creativity. I do wish some parts had more details, like the trip inside her body. Alot of missed opportunity there, but still a good, fun short story.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it! :) It was originally just a quick twitter thread I had done which I got a bit carried away with so it is much shorter than it could have been. That being said, I would literally buy Need for Speed Underground if they did have a level like this in it ;)

Little Learning by AprilMJ Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 93]
Summary:

With the help of her teaching assistant, a small-town high school teacher intends on properly educating a class of grade 9 boys on the topic of sexual education using rather unconventional methods. Together, she and her students will embark on a semester of exploration, discovery, and exhilarating fun. After all, wouldn't everyone benefit from a hands-on sex ed class?


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Legwear, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 183559 Read Count: 222867
[Report This] Published: December 05 2020 Updated: April 28 2023
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Story Teaser

This is exciting! Especially looking forward to what you do with some teacher vore! d84;



Author's Response:

Glad you’re as excited as I am! Teacher vore is a tricky one because having Ms. Johnson swallow a student would be crazy exciting... but is it too crazy? Decisions decisions. I would expect to see Ms. Johnson swallow at least someone by the end of the story though. Will it be a student? We’ll have to wait and see :) Even I don’t know for certain yet lol. I think that’s part of what makes the story suspenseful though. There’s a fair bit of uncertainty still left to figure out. Thanks for the support!

Summary:

Nick had let his relationship with his wife weaken, as he worked on something that would change the world.

After his whole world changed, he needed her more than ever.


Categories: Body Exploration, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1790 Read Count: 3045
[Report This] Published: December 10 2020 Updated: December 10 2020
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 10 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wouldnt even call it almost vore tbh, since it didnt even have any mouthplay. It was a sweet story, but probably remove the vore tag, since some may come for vore and feel kinda cheated. Still a solid story.



Author's Response:

You have a point, not really vore. I took the tag off, thanks for the comment!

Summary:

Exactly what it says on the tin, herein are archives of RP logs from across the years of Asterisk and myself writing together. These will be a bit different than normal stuff we post as there won't be much formatting or editing done here. There may be a light bit of context given at the start of each chapter. They aren't in any order either, more of some highlights of ours posted every now and then we figured people might enjoy reading.


Categories: Adventure, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59470 Read Count: 31716
[Report This] Published: January 08 2021 Updated: August 21 2021
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Black Silver

Out of spite to the jackass who review bombed these like a fag, im giving these awesome stories 10/10. Keep up the great work fellas. :)

Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2021 Title: Chapter 5: City in a Box

@Anybody thats because your attention span is too small to appreciate these well written stories.

Summary:

Waking up on a weekend to your little sister standing over you is troublesome. Waking up to your little sister standing over you when your an inch tall, can be stretched out like gum, and you're her favorite toy? Now that's much worse...


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14828 Read Count: 22282
[Report This] Published: January 18 2021 Updated: March 11 2023
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: January 18 2021 Title: Chapter 1: It's all fun and games until someone get's swallowed

Read the story and while i like the creativity and descriptive language, im disappointed in two things: 1. The lack of description for the events, mainly the oral vore and full tour. That was a huge missed opportunity to increase and appeal to a larger audience

2. The underage girl being a main point in an x rated story.

These two things are personal opinions, but still my view on the story. 2.5/5



Author's Response:

Fair is fair. Not every fetish is everyones cup of tea, and I understand. I was limited to 6k per the commission and I did what was asked of me and focused on. Regardless, I do hope you got some enjoyment out of it. ^_^ 

Summary:

A night of  promised shrunken fun with a friend quickly takes a turn for the worse. Our unfortunate protagonist is about to become the sex toy of someone quite familiar to him.

Co-written by Johnsmith10992

Taken over by Vexed chapter 10 and on

Join the discord: https://discord.gg/Kav8XwAwN4 


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 82132 Read Count: 191240
[Report This] Published: January 28 2021 Updated: August 26 2021
Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 06 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Time for the Butt!

This is a very good series and i love the detail you put into it. Very descriptive of the presy experiences. The main thing im wondering is when you also plan to add the vore. The mouthplay is there, but no actual vore yet. Im really excited to see when you do and how you do it. :)