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Deliverance by Kardo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A young man at a bar assaulted for his diminutive stature is saved by a good samaritan who holds a dark secret. 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 324818 Read Count: 355081
[Report This] Published: February 24 2021 Updated: October 09 2022
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2022 Title: Chapter 44: Recollection Pt. 2

Man am I glad Eren and Maeve are fighters, they had me worried for a second there. I wonder how long it'll take Jisoo to realize just how wrong her assumption is because I really just want to see them together again. Hopefully her sister will continue trying to convince her that hope is not lost for her.



Author's Response:

They're definitely very resilient. In order to reach adulthood as a speck in the United States you have to be very strong-willed, much more so than anybody we've seen before with maybe the exception being Thomas.

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Date: March 21 2022 Title: Chapter 42: Reunion

Kind of hoping Jisoo and Suji find out about Eren befire it's too late. Another great chapter! (Definitely easier on the nerves). 



Author's Response: Let's hope there is something left of him when they do as well!

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Date: March 19 2022 Title: Chapter 41: Reprogrammed: Part 2

Everytime I read a Grace chapter it just makes me want to see her suffer. I know its unlikely but I'm really hoping to see her in agony. I really love this story but this chapter is a bit too similar to the last one for me. I just want the plot to pick up the pace but that's just me. I can't really handle seeing Eren undergoing cock and ball torture this severe lol.



Author's Response:

I think Grace's chapters have had the most erotica content in them but also some of the most cruel moments as well, she's definitely shaping up to be the primary antagonistic force now! 

Originally Reprogrammed was one chapter but I felt it forced several weeks worth of in-universe time into a single chapter which didn't quite seem right, so it was broken up into two and left off with a cliffhanger on the first one since I wanted to give a bit more focus to Maeve in the second iteration. Way back when I was drafting the outline for Deliverance, this particular part of the story where Eren gets tortured by Grace was going to be like five or six chapters but then I realized 'wow that might get very repetitive and kind of depressing to just have that happen endlessly' so I glossed over some of the worst things she did to him but had it be mentioned. Reading your review i'm very happy I made that change and there were only these two to worry about!


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Date: January 10 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Reception

Oh shit! Oh fuck! Maddie is one of my favorite characters so I'm heavily dreading next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Hey I'm really glad to hear that Maddie is your favorite character! I would really like to know which characters become people's favorite and least favorite as the story goes on. I'm sure Thomas was a very disliked character at first but later became more popular with some readers, and Jisoo has fluctuated quite a bit I think too! Maddie is in a interesting place where she started as a very well-liked character, then after she rebuked Eren became disliked, and now it seems she's become more popular!

Perhaps I'll do a poll sometime soon and see a leaderboard of who people like.

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Date: October 25 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Reawakening

This moral downward spiral Jisoo is kind of going in is pretty enjoyable to witness, but it just makes me want Eren to snap out of the Anakin-like blind faith he has in her. Jisoo turning back into a monster has me eager to see if Eren's relationship with Maddie goes in a positive direction. Right now it seems like it's either get brainwashed into blindly following this nefarious overseas cult or snap out of it and be hunted by assassins. Maddie just seems like someone he can trust now that he's seen both sides of her, but we'll see whether he decides to forgive her and regroup with her or fall into line like Jisoo is hoping.



Author's Response:

I'm very happy to hear that feedback! Jisoo started this story off trying to be a good person and as the story continued regressed back into her old ways. The previous chapter was her big turning point where she completely solidified who she was now, so I'm excited to explore the next stage of her character arc.

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Date: October 19 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Reveal Part 3

I'm really hoping Eren actually catches on to Jisoo's manipulation because ooooh boy am I starting to turn against them. I guess Eren is an engineer though so he might already be suspecting something, as he should be a decent problem solver. I'm really excited to see how Eren's old boss will tie in to all of this and if they'll even actually reunite. I came for the romance but now I'm hooked on the conspiracy.



Author's Response:

Fingers crossed! We have not seen the last of Maddie, I can say that much!

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Date: September 27 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Release

I'm really loving the character growth Maddie is having! I wish you would stop teasing us so much and just have her reach out to Eren and talk it out already ;-;. I'm really hoping they eventually make up because it seems like she needs Eren as much as he needed that job. I would also love to see him introduce her to his old commune since it seems like his was below Maeve's. In other news I'm starting to flip my views on Grace and Thomas considering how it seems he was just motivated by seemingly good intentions and considers specks people while Grace is going around sadisticly enslaving people all willy nilly. I just can't see myself rooting for the corporation they feel too much like umbrella. I hope Eren and Jisoo do end up getting married though because that would be extremely wholesome, but the whole immortality thing rubs me the wrong way. Personally, I believe all good things must come to an end. I'm interested to see how Eren reacts to that proposition because I'd reject the immortality immediately lol.



Author's Response:

Maddie definitely needs someone like Eren, and in more ways than one! And a lot of people are beginning to flip their views on Grace and Thomas which I find really fascinating, to see how the perception of their characters has switched compared to when they were both introduced. All things must come to an end, and we will see how the prospect of eternal life is taken eventually!

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Date: July 12 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Res Nova Part 1

It hasn't been that long but I'm already starting to dislike Claire as a person. Reffering to Eren as "it" was all I needed. When it comes to Thomas I could sort of see where he's coming from since he's clueless about what his sister did to get beat up, but I doubt he'd care about it If he knew. He doesn't strike me as someone who cares about speck rights, so I am still hoping that he fails in his revenge quest and gets what's coming to him. I just want Tae and Eren to be happy. The suspense about what's going to happen next is killing me, but I'm hoping that Thomas and Claire are on the losing end.



Author's Response:

Thomas definitely sees Alice with rose-tinted glasses, so anything bad she does he would most certainly try to justify. As for his views on specks we will have to wait and see! As for if Tae and Eren get a happy ending after all this, who can tell? Thank you for the feedback!

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Date: June 28 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Rime

I'm nearly all caught up with this story, and it has quickly become one of my favorite stories on this site. The politics and world building are simply fantastic. The world is very believable for a story with tiny people. The cast, although small, has enamoured me. I really love the lead characters and their relationship (and people say you can't write a strong female protagonist and make them likeable). I'm really enjoy seeing their interactions with each other because they are incredibly wholesome, however, their individual segments are just as amazing because they really let you catch a glimpse of this semi dystopian future. This story gives me some Dexter vibes as well as some slight Batman vibes. I've fallen head over heels for this story so congrats on the incredible writing! I'll be looking forward to the most recently released chapter as well as future chapters. Godspeed!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback! It can definitely be a challenge to write a convincing female protagonist, especially as a male author so I am thrilled to hear that. I hope you enjoy future updates as well!

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Date: January 16 2022 Title: Chapter 33: Reduction

Ah fuck, I knew this was coming but I still hoping that Maddie would get away unscathed. Now I have this sinking feeling in my stomach. I just hope theres a way to reverse the formula because her company has turned into the only light of hope for specks in this novel. 



Author's Response: Maddie is a smart enough character to have put up a very good fight before it happened though! Only Thomas was that resilient before her.

Summary:

 

Ryan lives a normal life for a tiny: he works online, he keeps in shape at the local gym, he games online with friends he never meets, and he tries his best to avoid getting stepped on. Of course it was just his luck that the apartment he lived in got foreclosed on and now he’s been evicted.

Thankfully one of his online friends, Lena, offers to let him crash with her. Of course, having never met, Ryan doesn’t know she’s a bit bigger than he thinks.

 

 

Note: There will be no deaths in this story.

 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67589 Read Count: 96927
[Report This] Published: April 08 2021 Updated: August 20 2022
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2021 Title: Chapter 2: CH2. Roommates!

It is great to see that this gentle romance genre of story telling has been having a comeback recently because it's by far my favorite. Despite not having much action in it, this story is a pleasure to read! I'm really enjoying the character's and their interactions. I just want to watch them come together (I'm a sap for romance). Keep up the great work! 



Author's Response:

I'm happy you're enjoying the story so far! This is actually my first attempt at writing anything close to romance, so I hope I don't disappoint!

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Date: April 15 2021 Title: Chapter 3: CH3. Teased and Confused

I'm happy to say that this chapter was a joy to read! I love the protagonists and can't wait for them to open up about their feelings. The way they act around each other is too adorable! I'll be looking forward to the next installment!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you've enjoyed like it! I tend to lean into fluffy relationships, so I'm glad to see thats being liked!

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Date: August 21 2022 Title: Chapter 6: CH6. Getting Comfy

Glad youre back with this! I really love the character dynamic now that theyre openly dating. It really opens up the possibilities for lewd stuff to go down once theyre both comfortable. Can't wait for the next update even it takes another 200 days lol.



Author's Response:

Its good to be back for this!

Yeah, I'm happy these two are dating as well, it really lets me write them as their characters more than their nervous worried version of themselves.

Hopefully less than 200 days till the next chapter, but I try not to give promises on my writing anymore lol. We'll get there when we get there!

Summary:

The story of Allison Starr and Brian Bentley concludes! Brian’s innocence has been proven to the world, and he is about to reveal that he is actually alive, but only one inch tall. Now that Allison and Brian no longer have to live in hiding, they must adjust to a brand new world - one that owes Brian a lot of apologies. This becomes even more difficult when they are reunited with faces from the past, such as Brian’s little sister. However, their relationship is stronger than ever. As such, they’re confident that they can overcome any challenge, so long as they do it together.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Couples, Feet, Gentle, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52028 Read Count: 48794
[Report This] Published: April 30 2021 Updated: February 13 2022
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Laura

The second half of this chapter was exactly what I was waiting for. This chapter was so satisfying that I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I'll be looking forward to it!



Author's Response:

Aw thanks, I'm really glad it didn't disappoint! Five chapters in six days is pushing it, even for me, so I'm forcing myself to take a 2-3 day break. After that, though, the next chapter will be out soon. I hope you enjoy it!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Real Talk, Part 2

It's great to have you back Pluto! It only took 976 years but it's good to see a king in Gondor. 



Author's Response:

Aw thanks, I'm really glad to hear that I didn't lose you! Although I'm fairly certain I'm closer to a certain Steward than a king, your kind words always mean a lot to me. I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 16 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Reparation

Just knowing that you're still working on this stoty is enough for me chief. As long as you finish it I'll be more than happy to wait random amounts of time between chapters. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad to hear it! If for some reason I ever had to stop working on the story, or take a real hiatus, I would be sure to put a note in the description. I have every intention to finish the story, so I hope you continue to enjoy it!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2021 Title: Chapter 1: A Brand New World

This was unexpected but not un-welcomed. I'll be looking forward to the official beginning of this story!



Author's Response:

A surprise to be sure, but a welcome one, perhaps? I'm glad to hear you're looking forward to the official beginning! Hopefully soon. Until then, I'm really glad to have you back!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Morning Visit

Another great chapter! I loved finally getting an explanation of Cassandra's plan, and that final revelation really got me excited for the next chapter. I'll be looking forward to it as well as well as the second chapter of your other story as I found it quite intriguing. Godspeed.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter! I'm never sure if the political machination stuff is going to be boring to read, so I'm glad you found it interesting. I'm also happy to hear that you're looking forward to the next chapter of both stories! I hope you enjoy them, and thanks again for your continued reviews. I really appreciate it.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Family Ties

Way to leave us on a mid season hiatus, man! I'm hoping everything is alright, but I just can't wait for the next chapter. I need my dose! As always, godspeed!



Author's Response:

I know, I'm sorry for the random delay! I'm okay, but it's been a tough couple of weeks. I lost my air conditioning for a week during a really hot period, which was quite difficult and draining. Since then, I've just felt a little unmotivated, but it's coming back. I actually just posted the first chapter of an entirely new story, as sudden as that might be. So, not the development you were maybe hoping for, but the next chapter of this story is up next. Thanks for checking, and thanks for sticking with me! I hope to see you soon.

-Pluto

Devour by Prophet Rated: G starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

To devour is to survive, that is the way of life for all those who transcend the confines of the Insignificant things called planets, who break the laws of mortality and go beyond the sanity of reason, that is the way of a devourer of worlds. 

 

One such devourer finds that her immortal life has no purpose, no meaning. Is devouring planets all she can do or is their more to life itself? Follow her down the road to discovering what it means to be one of the beings she once believe to be weak and Insignificant, a road filled not with death and destruction, but understanding, and protecting that special someone.

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Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45605 Read Count: 92499
[Report This] Published: June 20 2021 Updated: August 02 2023
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Devour

To be honest I don't really like rampage stories because they are usually pretty mindless with little to no character development. I'm usually drawn to character driven stories because I'm a hopeless romantic who likes to see people change for the better. This story is seems to be evolving from just being a rampage story into being so much more. Those feelings the Devourer is developing are what keep me reading. I'm hoping they are coming from her heart because I would love to watch as she developes emotions and feelings (hopefully even romantic ones ;)) while she goes from being a monster to being an empathetic person. Regardless, just keep up the good work! I know my hopes are high but I feel like you can make this story even better. Godspeed!



Author's Response:

First of all thank you very much for giving my story a read, and I have to agree with you to an extent when it comes to rampage stories. I mean I like them but I want my stories to have a purpose, not just mindless destruction. But I'm afraid that my story will have those rampages from time to time. I mean the main character is a cosmic goddess that Devourers planets, right? Either way I hope you continue to read the story.