Great start! I was interested in the premise of the first 2 chapters, however, this chapter singel handedly sold me on the story. I love the power dynamic between the two main characters, I really enjoyed the fact that Brian was able to take hold of the conversation between him and allison despite the size disadvantage, and I loved seeing her show some compassion for the first time in the story. I can only hope that Allison and Brian's relationship will improve and be developed further. I'm excited to see what comes next. As Palpatine once said, "we will watch your career with great interest."

I'm honestly in love with this story. This chapter managed to give me some "12 angry men" vibes. My heart is still pumping! It's pretty difficult to make me this invested in just any piece of literature, but this is some incredible dialogue writing. I love the moral debate between Allison and Brian, it somehow manages to be somewhat compelling for both sides and is exhilarating as hell. The debate made me feel somewhat similarly to how the arguement scene in marriage story made me feel. I can only hope that the characters get to reconciliate and bond further once they have some time to reflect. All in all, I'm thrilled to see what happens next! Well written works of fiction like this are what I live for (fan service should always come last Imo). Keep it up!

You sly dog! I had a sneaking suspicion that this would be the case (the whole trilogy thing). Regardless, this chapter was absolutely fantastic! That "sex" scene left me wanting more, however, it was pretty great to finally see our heroes get intimate and have it turn out to be a resounding success (hopefully this is the beginning of a  new trend ;)). You succesfully managed to make me shed tears of both joy and sorrow in a single chapter (I'm more of a softie than even I knew). In other news, I cannot begin to tell you how happy I am to hear that the story will continue because it is by far my favorite story on this site (at least at the moment). I will eagerly await the return of the king (so to speak (-^_^-)). I can't wait to see where this is going! As always, godspeed and enjoy your break!

Despite still being in shambles after that last chapter, I can't get enough of this story and I am very happy to have more of it so soon (even if this chapter was more of a setting things up sort of chapter). I can't say it was my favorite chapter, however, it does set some events (hopefully beneficial ones) into motion. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter! I'm hoping it's not as soul crushing as the last few whole number entries because "I want to be free of this pain" (~_~;).

Well, you've succesfully broken my heart. I can say with complete certainty that I'm feeling just as sad and angry as Brian (despite predicting that this would happen). Another example of your great emotional writing! I'm too distraught to write a longer review, so keep it up why don't ya. Godspeed and what not. ;-;

Another excellent chapter! This one succesfully broke my heart (I mean this in a good way). Its just a testament to how good you are at conveying emotion in your writing. I can't wait for the next installment. As always, I will hope for the best but prepare for the worst ;-; 

I can't wait for the next chapter! That last bit of information has gotten my hopes up, even if it might cause future conflict. I feel like restoring Brian's size would benefit both Brian and Allie since Allison would actually get to express her affection for Brian without having to worry about how fragile he is. Brian would actually be able to return Allison's affection at a much more noticeable level (nothing beats being able to embrace your girlfriend tbh). Not to mention I feel like being full size would facilitate the reunion between Brian and his sister. I can only hope that Allison wasn't keeping anything from him on purpose because it would break my heart to watch my favorite couple have another lover's quarrel. However I'm sure that whatever it is that you have planned will be great! As always, you have my full attention!

I'm overjoyed to say that regardless of how much I dislike amnesia sub-plots, you somehow managed to pull through. I was a bit frustrated at first, but I legitimately nearly shed a tear or two at the end of this chapter. I'm just a hopeless romantic ( or just a big baby) what can I say?  I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and I am glad this sub-plot didn't drag. Keep up the good work! Goodspeed.

Man am I glad Eren and Maeve are fighters, they had me worried for a second there. I wonder how long it'll take Jisoo to realize just how wrong her assumption is because I really just want to see them together again. Hopefully her sister will continue trying to convince her that hope is not lost for her.

Off to a good start! Watching Grace cry made me really very happy. She's so despicable that I can't even feel a micro ounce of pity for her. Really hoping to see her in further agony as her "girlfriend" awakens. Godspeed.