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A Board Game Not for the Family by thegreatrizzo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Phillip's parents go on vacation leaving him with his younger sister. Her friend comes over with a mysterious board game. Phillip may no longer being in charge.

 

He is losing control as the girls grow into the most beautiful women

 

First story. I appreciate it if you all had any suggestions.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Scat, Slave, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123783 Read Count: 408262
[Report This] Published: October 09 2020 Updated: September 23 2022
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 14 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Phillip's game plan for rebellion.

Pretty good chapter. I'm hoping that Judith is able to help Phil fight against his sister's dominance. I feel like that's the only way to truly save the both of them and finish the game. Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. We will see what Judith will do.

An Innocent Man by Pluto Pendragon Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 84]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the future, a controversial form of the death penalty involves shrinking convicts down to one-inch tall, and having them tortured and killed by executioners known as Chevaliers. One Chevalier finds herself in a difficult situation when a shrunken convict claims to be innocent, and she must decide whether to risk everything and help him escape, or crush him underfoot.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58984 Read Count: 111860
[Report This] Published: December 14 2020 Updated: January 09 2021
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17 2020 Title: Chapter 3: The Meeting

Great start! I was interested in the premise of the first 2 chapters, however, this chapter singel handedly sold me on the story. I love the power dynamic between the two main characters, I really enjoyed the fact that Brian was able to take hold of the conversation between him and allison despite the size disadvantage, and I loved seeing her show some compassion for the first time in the story. I can only hope that Allison and Brian's relationship will improve and be developed further. I'm excited to see what comes next. As Palpatine once said, "we will watch your career with great interest."



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying Allison and Brian's interactions. I hope you enjoy the way their relationship develops. As for the Palpatine quote, I only hope this doesn't mean I'll eventually become Darth Vader x_x

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20 2020 Title: Chapter 5: The Weekend, Part One

Another great chapter! This story is hands down currently my favorite story on this site. The interactions between Allison and Brian are so incredibly adorable and wholesome that they consistently melt my heart at every turn. Also, I can't begin to describe how inexplicably happy the fact that you made LOTR a plot device makes me. I'm genuinely really excited about where this story is going! I am very interested in continuing to see how the relationship between Allison and Brian progresses (as well as how Allison is gonna get around that whole zero sex drive thing if she ever gets to that stage with Brian, but that's neither here nor there). Keep up the fantastic work! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! That's some high praise, it made my day to read your review. I'm glad you're enjoying their interactions still. My primary time-spending activity prior to writing this was playing Shadow of War, so I'm on a LOTR kick right now. Figured I might as well incorporate it into the story! I hope you enjoy where it goes from here!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28 2020 Title: Chapter 8: The Argument

I'm honestly in love with this story. This chapter managed to give me some "12 angry men" vibes. My heart is still pumping! It's pretty difficult to make me this invested in just any piece of literature, but this is some incredible dialogue writing. I love the moral debate between Allison and Brian, it somehow manages to be somewhat compelling for both sides and is exhilarating as hell. The debate made me feel somewhat similarly to how the arguement scene in marriage story made me feel. I can only hope that the characters get to reconciliate and bond further once they have some time to reflect. All in all, I'm thrilled to see what happens next! Well written works of fiction like this are what I live for (fan service should always come last Imo). Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued reviews!! I love the "12 angry men" comparison. I'm really happy to hear that you're so invested in the story- that serves as great motivation for me to keep writing. The argument was tough to write, so I'm glad that you found it compelling and exciting. 

Before I started this story, I was worried people wouldn't like the fact that this story doesn't have a lot of giantess/fanservice moments. I just don't really think fanservice stuff has a huge role to play in this story. Also, the jury is out on if I can even write good fanservice moments to begin with. The positive reception to the plot and character aspects of this story has been a huge relief for me. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story!

-Pluto

An Innocent Man 2 by Pluto Pendragon Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 71]
Summary:

The story of Allison Starr and Brian Bentley continues. Allison is no longer a Chevalier, and she is in a relationship with Brian. Now, with an uncertain future ahead of them, they must decide how to proceed if they want to clear Brian's name. Luckily, some help arrives in the form of Allison's college mentor.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Couples, Gentle, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84712 Read Count: 73584
[Report This] Published: February 23 2021 Updated: April 18 2021
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Skip Ahead, Part 0.5

Despite still being in shambles after that last chapter, I can't get enough of this story and I am very happy to have more of it so soon (even if this chapter was more of a setting things up sort of chapter). I can't say it was my favorite chapter, however, it does set some events (hopefully beneficial ones) into motion. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter! I'm hoping it's not as soul crushing as the last few whole number entries because "I want to be free of this pain" (~_~;).



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're happy to see more of this story! It means a lot that you look forward to it so much. 

Yeah, like I said in the chapter notes, this wasn't supposed to be a whole chapter. But, it ended up making more sense just to post it on it's own. Even though I did the timeskip so I could skip over a lot of the early development when they spread the bodycam footage to the media, I still thought it was important to show how they got it. Hence the 0.5 (formerly 1.5, but I thought making it 0.5 would make it more clear that it takes place during the timeskip) chapter designation. Still, glad you enjoyed it! And don't worry-  it'll get better soon, promise.

Also... I can't think of a clever way to respond to your quote, so I'll just say I appreciate the Star Wars reference x_x

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2021 Title: Chapter 20: The New World

You sly dog! I had a sneaking suspicion that this would be the case (the whole trilogy thing). Regardless, this chapter was absolutely fantastic! That "sex" scene left me wanting more, however, it was pretty great to finally see our heroes get intimate and have it turn out to be a resounding success (hopefully this is the beginning of a  new trend ;)). You succesfully managed to make me shed tears of both joy and sorrow in a single chapter (I'm more of a softie than even I knew). In other news, I cannot begin to tell you how happy I am to hear that the story will continue because it is by far my favorite story on this site (at least at the moment). I will eagerly await the return of the king (so to speak (-^_^-)). I can't wait to see where this is going! As always, godspeed and enjoy your break!



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter, and that you're excited for the final story!

This was my first time writing something explicitly sexual, so I hope it turned out well for the most part. As with everything else, I'll get better with practice!!

And yeah, I got emotional at several points, too. I'm really happy it resonated with you as well. Seriously, I had so much trouble writing the "I'm sorry you died thinking I didn't" line from Jen, and reading it still brings a tear. Oh well, we just gotta own it.

Lastly, you know I appreciate a final LOTR reference! Although I can't in good conscience accept the complement, I'm no king x_x

Still, I really appreciate your kind words, and continued reviews! I always loved seeing your thoughts, and I hope I can look forward to more in the future! I'm seriously honored that this is your favorite story on the site at the moment, that makes me really happy. Godspeed yourself, and take care.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Skip Ahead, Part 3

I'm very happy to finally see our leads re-unite in (it warms my heart). I can't wait to see how the story wraps up, even if it I'm a little sad to see it end. I honestly thought it was gonna be longer since there's so many paths you could take this story down (also since Brian hasn't even contacted his sister yet), but I'll respect your decision regardless. Even if it might be ending sooner than expected I've wholeheartedly loved every bit of this story through all its ups and downs. However, we'll see how I feel about it once the curtain falls. As always, godspeed!



Author's Response:

I'm happy to see them back together as well! Whoever broke them up to begin with is obviously crazy. I'm glad you're excited for the next chapter, and I'm seriously grateful that you've enjoyed the story so much. Absolutely, there's a lot of story left that could be told. So, I hope I can wrap it up in a satisfying way. I've really appreciated your continued reviews, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you think of the finale! See you soon.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Skip Ahead, Part 2

Im very excited for the next chapter (looks like "everythings coming up milhouse"). There might really be a light at the end of that old tunnel! I'll especially be looking forward to the next chapter. (^o^*)/



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it! I'm excited to publish it, so I'll try to get it out within the next couple days. Yep, we're finally headed towards something good again!

Also, unrelated note, but I can't help but think of "Everything's Coming Up Roses" from the musical "Gypsy." I wonder if that's the origin of the "everything's coming up x" saying. Regardless, it's a great song!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Skip Ahead, Part 1

My heart is starting to look like a pin cushion. Reading this chapter emotionally hurt almost as much as the last one (you "can't keep getting away with this!"). I'm completely on Brian's side, I feel like I'd do the same given his position. Hearing Brian vent made me tear up. I give this chapter a 10/10 and myself an emotional wreck/10. I just want my favorite (ex) couple to be happy. Even just typing "ex" pains my heart, but not as much as waiting a whole week for a new chapter lol. Regardless, I'll be looking forward to whatever comes next. Godspeed (ಥ_ಥ).



Author's Response:

ARGH, I'm sorry to keep doing this to you!! I'm grateful for your chapter rating, but I'm sorry about your emotional rating! I know what you mean- they've both been through so much, they deserve to be happy. All in good time! I hope you'll bear with me until then.

Also, I apologize for the week-long wait. I had an unexpectedly draining week, which made it really hard to work on the story. It's all good now, though. Next week *should* be very light, so it'll be easier to work on it during the actual week, as opposed to just the weekend. We're almost at the end, so I just have to push through.

Also, was that a Breaking Bad reference?? Are you comparing me to Heisenberg???? Honestly, not even mad. I hope you enjoy what happens next!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Moving Forward

Well, you've succesfully broken my heart. I can say with complete certainty that I'm feeling just as sad and angry as Brian (despite predicting that this would happen). Another example of your great emotional writing! I'm too distraught to write a longer review, so keep it up why don't ya. Godspeed and what not. ;-;



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I'm sorry!! Writing this made me sad and angry as well. I'm glad you empathize with Brian, though, and I really appreciate your kind words. Don't worry, I'm definitely going to see this thing through! Especially after an event like this. I'll try to get the next chapter out soon, so I hope you enjoy it!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Crisis Response, Part 1

This chapter gave me mixed feelings. On one hand, Allie got rightfully scolded and now she can finally start working on moving past the fallout of her past relationship. On the other hand, Brian has amnesia and has to work through it. If I'm being honest, prolonged amnesia in story telling is one of my petpeeves it has never worked for me (I often find it frustrating, and it personally makes reading feel like a slog). The amnesia arc in this story isn't too bad so far, but I just hope that it doesn't drag on for much longer (or derail the plot). I know that its personal preference but I hope it gets better because I hold this story in fairly high esteem. As always, godspeed.



Author's Response:

I totally get where you're coming from about the amnesia, and I actually feel somewhat similarly. That's why I never intended for this to be an entire arc, more so a story event. I actualy intended Brian's amnesia run to last only one chapter, but then it got too long and I had to split it up a bit. So, hopefully it doesn't across as prolonged, and I really hope it doesn't detract from the story. I'm truly honored to hear that you hold this story in high esteem, so I certainly don't want to let you down. I hope you'll enjoy what happens next, and let me know what you think!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 30 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Crisis Response, Part 2

I'm overjoyed to say that regardless of how much I dislike amnesia sub-plots, you somehow managed to pull through. I was a bit frustrated at first, but I legitimately nearly shed a tear or two at the end of this chapter. I'm just a hopeless romantic ( or just a big baby) what can I say?  I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and I am glad this sub-plot didn't drag. Keep up the good work! Goodspeed.



Author's Response:

I'm really happy to hear that! Like I said, I didn't want the amnesia to be a long thing either, so I'm glad you felt like it didn't drag.

Surprisingly, I also got a bit emotional when writing the ending. I'm glad that the emotion came through for you as well. And hey, hopeless romantics/big babies unite! We have to just own it.

Anyway, thanks for the review! I hope you enjoy how the story progresses.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Revelations

I can't wait for the next chapter! That last bit of information has gotten my hopes up, even if it might cause future conflict. I feel like restoring Brian's size would benefit both Brian and Allie since Allison would actually get to express her affection for Brian without having to worry about how fragile he is. Brian would actually be able to return Allison's affection at a much more noticeable level (nothing beats being able to embrace your girlfriend tbh). Not to mention I feel like being full size would facilitate the reunion between Brian and his sister. I can only hope that Allison wasn't keeping anything from him on purpose because it would break my heart to watch my favorite couple have another lover's quarrel. However I'm sure that whatever it is that you have planned will be great! As always, you have my full attention!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the reveal, as well as the possibilities for the future that it opens up. I just uploaded the next chapter, so I hope you enjoy it! Thanks again for reading.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13 2021 Title: Chapter 8: A Day Off

I absolutely loved this chapter! It's great to finally see that Brian is starting to develop feelings of sexual intimacy (even if they aren't the most positive so far) because it really helps to keep their relationship from becoming stagnant. I really hope that they continue to move forward into uncharted territory because I think they both deserve some romantic intimacy (when they're ready of course). You deserve to enjoy "a few well earned comforts." Godspeed.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad to hear it! Yeah, even if it is surrounded by a lot of pain and confusion at the moment, Brian is developing something that has the potential to make both him and Allison very happy. I hope you enjoy how their physical relationship develops further! It'll be easier now that it's all out in the open.

Also, don't think you can sneak a LOTR reference by me, Pippin!! Thanks for your continued reviews.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Looking Forward

It's honestly fantastic to have you and this story back!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really appreciated your reviews of the last story, so I'm really glad to have you back as well. I hope you enjoy where it goes from here!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21 2021 Title: Chapter 12: A Crisis

Another excellent chapter! This one succesfully broke my heart (I mean this in a good way). Its just a testament to how good you are at conveying emotion in your writing. I can't wait for the next installment. As always, I will hope for the best but prepare for the worst ;-; 



Author's Response:

I'm glad that this chapter resonated emotionally with you, even if they aren't the happiest emotions! I really appreciate your kind words, and continued reviews. I hope you will enjoy where we go from here!

-Pluto

Deliverance by Kardo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A young man at a bar assaulted for his diminutive stature is saved by a good samaritan who holds a dark secret. 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 324818 Read Count: 356212
[Report This] Published: February 24 2021 Updated: October 09 2022
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2022 Title: Chapter 44: Recollection Pt. 2

Man am I glad Eren and Maeve are fighters, they had me worried for a second there. I wonder how long it'll take Jisoo to realize just how wrong her assumption is because I really just want to see them together again. Hopefully her sister will continue trying to convince her that hope is not lost for her.



Author's Response:

They're definitely very resilient. In order to reach adulthood as a speck in the United States you have to be very strong-willed, much more so than anybody we've seen before with maybe the exception being Thomas.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2022 Title: Chapter 41: Reprogrammed: Part 2

Everytime I read a Grace chapter it just makes me want to see her suffer. I know its unlikely but I'm really hoping to see her in agony. I really love this story but this chapter is a bit too similar to the last one for me. I just want the plot to pick up the pace but that's just me. I can't really handle seeing Eren undergoing cock and ball torture this severe lol.



Author's Response:

I think Grace's chapters have had the most erotica content in them but also some of the most cruel moments as well, she's definitely shaping up to be the primary antagonistic force now! 

Originally Reprogrammed was one chapter but I felt it forced several weeks worth of in-universe time into a single chapter which didn't quite seem right, so it was broken up into two and left off with a cliffhanger on the first one since I wanted to give a bit more focus to Maeve in the second iteration. Way back when I was drafting the outline for Deliverance, this particular part of the story where Eren gets tortured by Grace was going to be like five or six chapters but then I realized 'wow that might get very repetitive and kind of depressing to just have that happen endlessly' so I glossed over some of the worst things she did to him but had it be mentioned. Reading your review i'm very happy I made that change and there were only these two to worry about!


Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21 2022 Title: Chapter 42: Reunion

Kind of hoping Jisoo and Suji find out about Eren befire it's too late. Another great chapter! (Definitely easier on the nerves). 



Author's Response: Let's hope there is something left of him when they do as well!

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2022 Title: Chapter 49: Rewind

Hoping this means Jisoo will actually help Eren and not join forces with Amrita again. Grace is ripe for some retribution to befall her.

Author's Response:

As Jade said, Grace wants to have her cake and eat it too. She's not used to ever being punished for something, so maybe this will be the first time!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.