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Summary:

The story of Allison Starr and Brian Bentley continues. Allison is no longer a Chevalier, and she is in a relationship with Brian. Now, with an uncertain future ahead of them, they must decide how to proceed if they want to clear Brian's name. Luckily, some help arrives in the form of Allison's college mentor.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Couples, Gentle, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84594 Read Count: 28430
[Report This] Published: February 23 2021 Updated: April 18 2021
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Skip Ahead, Part 0.5

Despite still being in shambles after that last chapter, I can't get enough of this story and I am very happy to have more of it so soon (even if this chapter was more of a setting things up sort of chapter). I can't say it was my favorite chapter, however, it does set some events (hopefully beneficial ones) into motion. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter! I'm hoping it's not as soul crushing as the last few whole number entries because "I want to be free of this pain" (~_~;).



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're happy to see more of this story! It means a lot that you look forward to it so much. 

Yeah, like I said in the chapter notes, this wasn't supposed to be a whole chapter. But, it ended up making more sense just to post it on it's own. Even though I did the timeskip so I could skip over a lot of the early development when they spread the bodycam footage to the media, I still thought it was important to show how they got it. Hence the 0.5 (formerly 1.5, but I thought making it 0.5 would make it more clear that it takes place during the timeskip) chapter designation. Still, glad you enjoyed it! And don't worry-  it'll get better soon, promise.

Also... I can't think of a clever way to respond to your quote, so I'll just say I appreciate the Star Wars reference x_x

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Skip Ahead, Part 2

Im very excited for the next chapter (looks like "everythings coming up milhouse"). There might really be a light at the end of that old tunnel! I'll especially be looking forward to the next chapter. (^o^*)/



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it! I'm excited to publish it, so I'll try to get it out within the next couple days. Yep, we're finally headed towards something good again!

Also, unrelated note, but I can't help but think of "Everything's Coming Up Roses" from the musical "Gypsy." I wonder if that's the origin of the "everything's coming up x" saying. Regardless, it's a great song!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Revelations

I can't wait for the next chapter! That last bit of information has gotten my hopes up, even if it might cause future conflict. I feel like restoring Brian's size would benefit both Brian and Allie since Allison would actually get to express her affection for Brian without having to worry about how fragile he is. Brian would actually be able to return Allison's affection at a much more noticeable level (nothing beats being able to embrace your girlfriend tbh). Not to mention I feel like being full size would facilitate the reunion between Brian and his sister. I can only hope that Allison wasn't keeping anything from him on purpose because it would break my heart to watch my favorite couple have another lover's quarrel. However I'm sure that whatever it is that you have planned will be great! As always, you have my full attention!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the reveal, as well as the possibilities for the future that it opens up. I just uploaded the next chapter, so I hope you enjoy it! Thanks again for reading.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21 2021 Title: Chapter 12: A Crisis

Another excellent chapter! This one succesfully broke my heart (I mean this in a good way). Its just a testament to how good you are at conveying emotion in your writing. I can't wait for the next installment. As always, I will hope for the best but prepare for the worst ;-; 



Author's Response:

I'm glad that this chapter resonated emotionally with you, even if they aren't the happiest emotions! I really appreciate your kind words, and continued reviews. I hope you will enjoy where we go from here!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Skip Ahead, Part 3

I'm very happy to finally see our leads re-unite in (it warms my heart). I can't wait to see how the story wraps up, even if it I'm a little sad to see it end. I honestly thought it was gonna be longer since there's so many paths you could take this story down (also since Brian hasn't even contacted his sister yet), but I'll respect your decision regardless. Even if it might be ending sooner than expected I've wholeheartedly loved every bit of this story through all its ups and downs. However, we'll see how I feel about it once the curtain falls. As always, godspeed!



Author's Response:

I'm happy to see them back together as well! Whoever broke them up to begin with is obviously crazy. I'm glad you're excited for the next chapter, and I'm seriously grateful that you've enjoyed the story so much. Absolutely, there's a lot of story left that could be told. So, I hope I can wrap it up in a satisfying way. I've really appreciated your continued reviews, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you think of the finale! See you soon.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Moving Forward

Well, you've succesfully broken my heart. I can say with complete certainty that I'm feeling just as sad and angry as Brian (despite predicting that this would happen). Another example of your great emotional writing! I'm too distraught to write a longer review, so keep it up why don't ya. Godspeed and what not. ;-;



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I'm sorry!! Writing this made me sad and angry as well. I'm glad you empathize with Brian, though, and I really appreciate your kind words. Don't worry, I'm definitely going to see this thing through! Especially after an event like this. I'll try to get the next chapter out soon, so I hope you enjoy it!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2021 Title: Chapter 20: The New World

You sly dog! I had a sneaking suspicion that this would be the case (the whole trilogy thing). Regardless, this chapter was absolutely fantastic! That "sex" scene left me wanting more, however, it was pretty great to finally see our heroes get intimate and have it turn out to be a resounding success (hopefully this is the beginning of a  new trend ;)). You succesfully managed to make me shed tears of both joy and sorrow in a single chapter (I'm more of a softie than even I knew). In other news, I cannot begin to tell you how happy I am to hear that the story will continue because it is by far my favorite story on this site (at least at the moment). I will eagerly await the return of the king (so to speak (-^_^-)). I can't wait to see where this is going! As always, godspeed and enjoy your break!



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter, and that you're excited for the final story!

This was my first time writing something explicitly sexual, so I hope it turned out well for the most part. As with everything else, I'll get better with practice!!

And yeah, I got emotional at several points, too. I'm really happy it resonated with you as well. Seriously, I had so much trouble writing the "I'm sorry you died thinking I didn't" line from Jen, and reading it still brings a tear. Oh well, we just gotta own it.

Lastly, you know I appreciate a final LOTR reference! Although I can't in good conscience accept the complement, I'm no king x_x

Still, I really appreciate your kind words, and continued reviews! I always loved seeing your thoughts, and I hope I can look forward to more in the future! I'm seriously honored that this is your favorite story on the site at the moment, that makes me really happy. Godspeed yourself, and take care.

-Pluto

Summary:

 

Ryan lives a normal life for a tiny: he works online, he keeps in shape at the local gym, he games online with friends he never meets, and he tries his best to avoid getting stepped on. Of course it was just his luck that the apartment he lived in got foreclosed on and now he’s been evicted.

Thankfully one of his online friends, Lena, offers to let him crash with her. Of course, having never met, Ryan doesn’t know she’s a bit bigger than he thinks.

 

 

Note: There will be no deaths in this story.

 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39627 Read Count: 26482
[Report This] Published: April 08 2021 Updated: April 26 2021
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2021 Title: Chapter 2: CH2. Roommates!

It is great to see that this gentle romance genre of story telling has been having a comeback recently because it's by far my favorite. Despite not having much action in it, this story is a pleasure to read! I'm really enjoying the character's and their interactions. I just want to watch them come together (I'm a sap for romance). Keep up the great work! 



Author's Response:

I'm happy you're enjoying the story so far! This is actually my first attempt at writing anything close to romance, so I hope I don't disappoint!

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2021 Title: Chapter 3: CH3. Teased and Confused

I'm happy to say that this chapter was a joy to read! I love the protagonists and can't wait for them to open up about their feelings. The way they act around each other is too adorable! I'll be looking forward to the next installment!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you've enjoyed like it! I tend to lean into fluffy relationships, so I'm glad to see thats being liked!

Summary:

The story of Allison Starr and Brian Bentley concludes! Brian’s innocence has been proven to the world, and he is about to reveal that he is actually alive, but only one inch tall. Now that Allison and Brian no longer have to live in hiding, they must adjust to a brand new world - one that owes Brian a lot of apologies. This becomes even more difficult when they are reunited with faces from the past, such as Brian’s little sister. However, their relationship is stronger than ever. As such, they’re confident that they can overcome any challenge, so long as they do it together.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Couples, Feet, Gentle, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39985 Read Count: 13439
[Report This] Published: April 30 2021 Updated: June 17 2021
Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Morning Visit

Another great chapter! I loved finally getting an explanation of Cassandra's plan, and that final revelation really got me excited for the next chapter. I'll be looking forward to it as well as well as the second chapter of your other story as I found it quite intriguing. Godspeed.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter! I'm never sure if the political machination stuff is going to be boring to read, so I'm glad you found it interesting. I'm also happy to hear that you're looking forward to the next chapter of both stories! I hope you enjoy them, and thanks again for your continued reviews. I really appreciate it.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2021 Title: Chapter 1: A Brand New World

This was unexpected but not un-welcomed. I'll be looking forward to the official beginning of this story!



Author's Response:

A surprise to be sure, but a welcome one, perhaps? I'm glad to hear you're looking forward to the official beginning! Hopefully soon. Until then, I'm really glad to have you back!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Family Ties

Way to leave us on a mid season hiatus, man! I'm hoping everything is alright, but I just can't wait for the next chapter. I need my dose! As always, godspeed!



Author's Response:

I know, I'm sorry for the random delay! I'm okay, but it's been a tough couple of weeks. I lost my air conditioning for a week during a really hot period, which was quite difficult and draining. Since then, I've just felt a little unmotivated, but it's coming back. I actually just posted the first chapter of an entirely new story, as sudden as that might be. So, not the development you were maybe hoping for, but the next chapter of this story is up next. Thanks for checking, and thanks for sticking with me! I hope to see you soon.

-Pluto

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Laura

The second half of this chapter was exactly what I was waiting for. This chapter was so satisfying that I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I'll be looking forward to it!



Author's Response:

Aw thanks, I'm really glad it didn't disappoint! Five chapters in six days is pushing it, even for me, so I'm forcing myself to take a 2-3 day break. After that, though, the next chapter will be out soon. I hope you enjoy it!

-Pluto