Just wanted to say that this is a very well written piece and has been a very enjoyable read! I hope you continue with this story! I love the characters that you've come up with. I like how Becca is so easy to hate while Anna is so easy to feel sorry for. Same with Donald. I love how he was so hateable but now seems to be redeeming himself. I find myself "cheering" for different characters! I was kind of hoping we'd see Elizabeth again though haha. Maybe in the future? Even though they despised each other, I instantly felt the chemistry between her and Donald on the plane and at the airport. I also really enjoy how you throw it small scenes where the tiny people aren't invulnerable. Like that scene with the little girl and Lynn carelessly crushes the poor man in front of her. Brilliant. Really shows how vulnerable they are without the medicine. Will the medicine for any of the main characters ever wear off? That could be an intriguing idea. Having to survive the rest of the trip with no safety net. And I really liked that scene where they were on the hike and Anna nearly fell into the deep dark pit. I was sort of hoping she would and then Lynn or Ava come in to use it next while Anna is still in there lol. I actually thought that was going to be the fate of those tiny lost hikers who were looking for safety. Instead of being trampled on, I thought they may have snuck into that WC and been accidentally kicked into the pit haha. Maybe an idea for a future chapter? Overall, I've quite enjoyed your story! Good work!