Penname: Webdewb [Contact] Real name: Sam
Member Since: June 08 2020
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I am here to read. And possibly write.
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All is Lost by Enzo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary:

Teagan is a young woman exploring a world no longer owned by humans. Indeed, her nation, as with every other, has been overrun by a horde of small but incredibly numerous people known as tomkins. Legend exists of a safe haven for humanity, undiscovered by the tomkins, a walled citadel known as Whitebreeze Keep populated by the last vestiges of humanity. Teagan sets her sights on finding this beacon of hope, but must transverse a dangerous continent filled with tomkins.

Oh, right, one more thing: Teagan finds few greater joys in life than the slaughter of tomkins by whatever means available.

 

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Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Gentle, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 103496 Read Count: 170268
[Report This] Published: March 05 2017 Updated: July 21 2021
Reviewer: Webdewb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Fallen Nation

Keep up the great story! I did not expect such a great story here, but I will follow this story through to the end.

Author's Response:

thank you very much ^^

i honestly like to just write this so it makes me happy that other people dig it too

Reviewer: Webdewb Signed
Date: October 30 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Fallen Nation

Is it wrong that I want Volkhard and her to be a dynamic duo? I can't decide whether it would be funny or angsty. Probably both.



Author's Response:

Wrong? That sounds like a pretty good idea to me, considering the similarities between the two. Honestly not even pretty good, just straight up good

 

Yeah I think I'll keep this little idea in mind for the next few chapters

Reviewer: Webdewb Signed
Date: December 12 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Fallen Nation

Yay a chapter! I do think this magical understanding of the tomkin language was a bit rushed. And hopefully the two will gradually get closer. But it seems a bit weird to rush into a relationship between them when Sihil was so against her a few chapters ago. Maybe make it like Stockholm's syndrome, or sihil merely adapting to Teagans change. Add in a little PTSD and gentleness on Teagans part and this will work fantastically to make Sihil grow affection for her. Love the Volkhard interaction, hopefully he can join them. Love the chapter tho! (^~^)/



Author's Response:

Yeah, I absolutely agree about this linguistic revelation being a bit shoddy - to be honest, I wanted it to be a lot more drawn out, maybe have an entire chapter dedicated to an internal sort of dream sequence corresponding to the shift responsible for the deus ex machina, but I'm honest getting to the point where I want to wrap this story up so I decided to cut that bit. In retrospect, it didn't work out great and it's a bit more obviously hasty than it seemed when I was proofreading while a bit tipsy. That being said, I figure if I've made it this far with the story, no point in rushing the ending, right? In any case, thank you for the review, and I'm absolutely thinking of making the relationship between Sihil and Teagan very prone to sporadic change a la Stockholm syndrome.

Reviewer: Webdewb Signed
Date: December 19 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Fallen Nation

Love the chapter and their interactions with each other! I can't get over how well you write world-building. I mean writing all of these characters must be hard! And you are doing amazingly well at it. I will be at the edge of my seat waiting for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I put a lot of my thought into the creation of the world and I didn't know if people would like it, so I'm glad to hear that it adds to the story for you. I'll be sure the try and get chapters up at least somewhat regularly.

Blanket by Intheliar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

A runaway slave tries to live out a meager but free existence in a dangerous forest. One fateful day, he catches a break and accidentally meets what could be considered a powerful ally, a mute naga girl.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Fantasy, Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11994 Read Count: 24784
[Report This] Published: December 12 2020 Updated: December 21 2020
Reviewer: Webdewb Signed
Date: December 21 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Warmth in a Cold Cave

It's nice seeing a Gentle story like this. Especially one so well done. Keep it up! I really like it!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll try to keep it going. I've had many ideas to throw in it's just a matter of getting a chance to type.

I don't think I'm all that great at typing though

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